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TAW
Hi, I'm TAW. I write terrible erotic my little pony fan fiction about cartoon horses having sex with each other, or vaguely defined human audience-inserts, for fun. Because... uh. I have no shame?
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best, clop, ever, i liked how you characterized filly dash as being ignorant of the ground creatures, she always having her head in the clouds
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Poultron is JappleAck now?
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I wan't to be like you poultron.
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amidoinitrite?
I don't know. I'm sure it's well-written and all, but... I don't know. Just the description annoys me. I can only imagine how I'll feel after reading.
650307
You always know just what to say. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Derpy_Hooves_lolface.png
Lyra x Dash?
:D
The title immediately made me think of that one Spongebob scene in driving school... "What I learned in driving school is... What I learned in driving school is...!"
Okay, just read it. It was great, up until the clop. I know you're a clop author and all, but it was just completely unnecessary here. Especially considering all the Fluttershy scenes scattered about. Kinda killed the emotion.
On an unrelated note, how old are they supposed to be here?
Oh god seeing that cover image cropped out like that, and knowing what it looks like not cropped.
650307 Hey now, don't roleplay in the comments, you might get banned!
Stop that boner.
Too bad I'm camping with family and friends around. Still a great read though!
My picture is enough....
What shall we name this combination, RainBonDash?
Niceeeee
Loved this!
Excellent. This is insanely cute. Bring a tuff of her favorite cloud (having a favorite cloud) and her "How do you guys get around?" Simply adorable.
Also, that's just a dick move making "(NSFW)" the only thing blocked out in the description.
It's good, I just have a thing about underage stuff...
This just goes to show, with a name like niggerfaggot, you are bound to inspire someone into doing something.
i liekz. 651554 totally agree...
FireFlash approves!
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Actually, the line is "What I learned in boating school is... What I learned in boating school is!" Not to be a correction troll, but I hold spongebob quotes in the highest regard.
652395
We have pills for that.
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Late teens, ish. And I actually agree, but I set out to write smut, so smut it was to be.
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How the site decides to shorten my description is not "a dick move" on my part, it's an unfortunate coincidence.
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Indeed, it turned out way cuter than I was initially expecting, but... I can't really complain.
Around halfway through, there's a weird sentence that says "Was wondered whether". The Was should be Dash.
Also, one big thing: You really, REALLY need to stop indenting. It's not proper formatting for ANYTHING on the internet, and it's extremely ugly- It breaks the reader's flow and immersion, every single line, all the time. It wouldn't be terribly hard to go through entire fics and strip out all those erroneous indents in one swoop, either. But it's one of the only flaws to your otherwise consistently-good fic.
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It's not underage, "younger" doesn't mean "underage", it just means "younger than they are now"
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I actually add the indents with a post-processor I wrote, so it'd be even easier than that--but I've heard the exact opposite from other people and I can kinda see their point, it makes it marginally easier to keep your place in a paragraph by giving a very explicit starting point!
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Trust me, indentation looks totally atrocious, and for those who care about that kind of thing, is also "wrong" online. And for those people who've said the opposite, paragraphs, by definition, HAVE a very explicit starting point; It's called "the line break above them".
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Oh wow, really? That's pretty strange. Sorry, mate.
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All the resources I've been able to find suggest that, while somewhat archaic, it's a matter of style. I realise that both double-spacing and indenting is somewhat redundant, but nobody has ever implied it's "wrong" before. Do you any suggested further reading for me?
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Yes- Look at any professional article on the internet. Look at the vast majority of stories on this, or any, site. No double-spacing, no indent. You will never, EVER see a professional news website, or any other major resource, do either of those things. As for actual formal sources, no, because I don't really peruse a ton of them online. Still do a lot of research-type stuff at my local library, since it's in walking distance.
But if it's a matter of style, I would personally argue that both of them (double spacing and indenting) involve deliberately choosing a worse, less elegant, uglier style that requires more space (albeit marginally so) on the back-end. Not that I'm an authority or anything, but... I can't imagine someone doing either of those on purpose unless it was just an old analog-media habit they hadn't broken.
Fuck people who thumbs down this. They just mad.
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Professional articles are not fiction. They're often wrapped around images and have far larger spacing, two huge cues for the eye to follow. Same for news, the article format has very different rules and guidelines. Writing fiction in this style is also very different to writing it in a book, for example, where you have the natural hints of the page to help. Here all there is is an effectively infinite white line at the side which gives you no location information at all.
Dropping double-paragraph spacing AND indentation would ruin the flow because it moves all those helpful location markers to "somewhere on the right, maybe" making it much harder for your eye to accurately track it without having to actually look up and check, completely breaking flow. Dropping one of them could be justifiable, but I see no significant reason to do so as I have yet to see any research indicating it's detrimental to reading, and plausible information implying it could be advantageous. In my own experience that's held true.
I appreciate that it's very much a matter of taste, but as you're the first and so far only person to complain I have to assume that the silent majority is okay with it.
As for the more space argument, if it's always \r\r\t that'll compress just as well as \r\t or \r\r if needed :)
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Well, alright- It is, after all, technically your decision. And I don't see how getting rid of either / both of them would possibly have a -negative- impact: You don't lose any kind of marker or indicator. You just free up more space and make the story as a whole look cleaner / more properly structured. But I will reaffirm that it looks ugly as sin and makes your stories very hard to read, according to all of the people I know. Unfortunately, not many of them are commentators, so I don't have any of them on hand, and regardless would feel silly having them all comment just to chime in.
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No paragraph-spacing or indents is what causes "wall of text" effects, where the eye has so much trouble keeping track of where it is that something becomes very very difficult to read. There is a huge detriment to removing both. As for choosing one or the other, while I don't have any hard research to fall back on I just straight up prefer the way both looks and find it easier to read when I do. Regardless, if it's that much of a problem then please, feel free to download the story data and de-indent it for your own enjoyment!
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Oh, you thought I meant PARAGRAPH spacing. No, no, that's hugely important. That's critical! I mean double-spacing, like, actual double-spacing-- The process of putting two spaces after a sentence. Like what I just did there, and underlined (hopefully, if the formatting works). No, you should absolutely be using paragraph spacing, but NOT indenting. I'm sorry to hear you prefer to use both, because it really isn't good for web formatting, but it's your choice.
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Ah, right, yeah--double spacing is absolutely antiquated. I still disagree that indentation is here, though, as other forms of digital media tend to have a lot more visual markers than here. However, you have me paranoid that everybody but me hates the practise and is just too afraid to say anything, so I'm going to make a blog post about it--watch this space!
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And if it turns out people are OK with it, I'll gladly concede that it's your choice-- Either way, I hope you make continue to make your readers happy by putting out awesome stories, indented or not. :3
Dammit another amazing clopfic. Well, I will not read it. It's disturbing and wrong.
Oh, fine. I'll read it.
that is all
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650307 HAHAHA. recently I've just been over your shit, but when I read that I lost ALL shit. Fuck I laughed.
TAW, masterful work as ever.
have somebady noticed how TAW´s description in the stories always starts with ``because´´?
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I have to agree that the sex fits in rather oddly in this story. BUT IT WAS STILL HOT SO IT'S OKAY.
Saw the real picture in the descirption, peed like a BAWS
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Do they?!
655157 jeeep, check it yourself
*Clicks on link in description to picure*
*Deletes history and favourites story*
You've outdone yourself. Again.