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TAW
Hi, I'm TAW. I write terrible erotic my little pony fan fiction about cartoon horses having sex with each other, or vaguely defined human audience-inserts, for fun. Because... uh. I have no shame?
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Oh fuck yes
It could have used a little more teasing in my opinon, but OH FUCK YES 10/10
GOD DAMNIT
wooow, you really pump these stories out, dont'cha?
You sir are a scholar and genius
That pic had me worried for a moment till I read the description and the tags....and thats when I started to like what the pic might entitle, after that...I had to read this.....
Uuuugggghhhhh so much want !
Uh... damn... how should I put this? There are some rape settings that I like and other's that I dislike. This one, well... it's nice that the whole situation was more controlled than it seemed the whole time, but while reading I just disliked it since Rainbow had no choice and was really being humiliated and 'tortured' against her will, and Rarity didn't seem like she'd show any mercy. In fact I though that she'd completely gone nuts. That was probably the effect that you wanted, but I suppose clever plot twists just aren't the proper thing for clopfiction.
As example for rape settings that I usually like — those where the rapist is clearly villainzed, and the victim is either an anthagonist or gets mostly unscarred out of the whole situation. Or, maybe the whole 'rape' is just a game, like this one.
However, settings that I dislike are those where one rapist completely destroys the victims life or maybe only the priorly existing relationship between those two. That's what this story looked like most of the time.
So, basically you wrote an — in my opinion — awesome story, but I still didn't enjoy it because you made me hate it most of the time. That's just so confusing and I'm tired. Sorry for making this comment say so little with so many words, but I'm really a bit tired right now.
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Fair enough. It's a fine line, I agree -- if I make it too clear how controlled the whole situation is from the start, then the reader has less drive to build anticipation, and the story suffers - but on the other hand, if it's too unclear, then the whole thing is rape. I tried my best to show they were in a relationship from the start to hopefully banish the rape thoughts a little, and the twist at the end is more to get rid of any residual guilt that might be hanging around than as a pretentious plot twist.
>sexual denial
god
damn
Lol, intern made a past gen. MLP joke. I lol'd too hard there.
edit: DAT ENDING!!
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What a
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Off to read!
462271 i think i shall edit my comment now
YUMMY!
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462417 fixed it
like a boss
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Don't you mean like a Faust?
462433 no
i mean
LIKE AN GIAUS!!
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I just realized these comments are being read by the public and have absolutely nothing to do with the story.
A highly enjoyable story! I was a bit worried at first because there seemed to be some rape-y undertones, but it became pretty clear later on that it was quite consensual.
I never actually thought of Dash being the submissive one in a relationship, especially with Rarity, but you made it work well.
462513 lulz
but arent those the best comments?
This story is fucking BRILLIANT!
You're a good writer too. I look forward for more from you! (especially if its bondage, or rape, or even both!!!)
I gotta say, that was pretty good!
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462942 eeyup
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I love this!
Nice and kinky, and I can totally imagine Rarity doing this to Dash.
...
Can't imagine Dash with straight hair, though.
"with enough force to send her arms spasming"
Minor error
Oh my God. All of my yes. This was amazing.
We dont get rarity x rd shipping too often :( but very well done. Kudos to you good sir!
Not really into chains and darkness, but my opinion of things doesn't make it an unsatisfying story. Nice job!
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The relationship is clearly established from the beginning, but it still comes of as Rarity simply deciding something, and not giving RD any choice in the matter.
Daum
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In some ways, she doesn't. There wouldn't be any fun in it if Dash had the whole thing planned out (Now Twilight, maybe...), but that's where trust comes in. And, in this case, loyalty.
Hey. I don't want to like this. Don't make me like this.
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Not my point.
Sex without consent is rape, and even in BDSM both parties have a choice, here there is none, no consent asked, no consent given, therefore, rape.
Now, i assume it was not meant to look like that, but it can easily look like it.
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Except that's wrong, though. There's plenty of choice. Dash wants to escape for like, 3 paragraphs, where she starts to think of ways she could - ways which aren't ever come back to because she doesn't want to escape. You can tell that she wants it because she spends basically the entire thing explicitly asking for it. Even without the safeword bit at the end this wouldn't be rape, at worst it's that awful "sex she didn't realise she wanted" trope, but never rape.
Yes...This was great...blows my writing out of the water. It's just so...so...
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To echo most of the rest of these comments, this gets a great big YES from me.
I've been RBD in this situation (though a lot more physical teasing and a lot less makeup) and it is *exactly* as fun and hot as it seems. My own memory sucks (I'm the proverbial goldfish), but reading a fic like this helps to bring back all of the physical tingles and emotional shivers that I felt then.
Point being, I loved it, and I cannot wait until the next time my wife helps me to "take my mind off of things".
My birthday is in a little over a week and I am dropping all sorts of hints along these lines. *squee*
Another good story by TAW
I don't know, but I just keep reading your stories even though I promised myself quite some time ago I wouldn't read these kinds of fics anymore
I must have read a diffent story than the people screaming rape. Because Dash was pretty well begging for it the whole time. It makes me think, that you think before you fuck somebody willing you have to have a notarized form 69rr and submit it to the national board of sexing. If anything was non-consensual it was, let's see, the drugging or the chaining. Neither are rape.
Well of all the..
Anyway, amazing plot twist, didn't see that, and like some others I thought rarity had indeed gone crazy there for a while.
who made the cover pic?
Have to say it was rather good, seemed enough IC to be interesting imo :P (that was a compliment btw, in case I managed to make it sound like something else xP) Character interaction was quite good. Wondered a bit why Rarity would drug a whole bottle instead of a glass though. The more "rough" whipping didn't seem ooc, a bit, rough as said, but not ooc. Not sure about the wing part though. Since they clearly seems to be allot more sturdy and flexible, seeing how they can be used to hold a newspaper, do push ups and whatnot, and quite sure this was released after that episode :P
Was really intrigued by how close this got to being a "sub-dom", (or is it "dom-sub?) story, there's far to few of those. The most "common" use of it is just "tried up oral". Which I personally love as a big "buck you!" in the face of the ones that say "oral can't be given dominantly". Heck, add a clamp/restraint over Dash's abdomen, and she could have been eaten, clit sucked and even had squirted on/in Rarity, all as a sub. Which is what I find so neat with the whole concept, since heck, if done smoothly, you can have a brash character take hard anal as a dominant character :P Anyhow, found the speech during quite well too, and PoV. Gonna say I did really like the concept of Rarity "torturing" her by grooming. (although, have to admit being brushed can feel awesome xD So effective teasing tool.)
The part that their genitals was never "mentioned" (referred to) by size, shape or color is a nice "subtle" way of letting the reader imagine it for themselves. On the part of your take on heat and female arousal overall, have to say it was between good and okay. (that's quite good rating from me xP) Have to say the ending was slightly confusing, (the whole "wounding down part, not the literal ending, I got that one xP) but that might just be me missing something or such heh.
Amazing story, especially the ending. I look forward to reading more of your work.
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But Dashie HAD a choice the whole time. They had an established safeword. Dashie choose to not use it. This is in no way rape, it's not even close.
11/10!
Agree with the "not rape: people*... eventually.
Still seems like really bad characterization to me. Dash being 'taken' as a sub pushes all of my bad buttons. Rarity doing the taking is also very hard for me to buy. I realize it isn't rape (prearranged safe word and all), but it seemed like an awful lot of "take" and not a lot of give. This is probably just not my bag and I wouldn't have even read or commented except you explicitly asked for comments. Judging by others' feedback, you can ignore me, but I'm not going to give a fake opinion just because a lot of people liked it.I was literally cringing reading this at the start, and that utterly ruined the enjoyment rest of it for me. It seemed like standard rape-until-she-likes-it up until near the end. Similar to Bailout, it needed more foreshadowing or more lampshading of Dash allowing this to happen. The big thing was the drugging, that goes a long way to make this seem like rape.
Then again, I really dislike humiliation fics and I hate and am disgusted by rapefics, so there is also a lot of personal bias in my dislike of this.
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You're probably right in that I should have lampshaded the whole thing a lot more - I wasn't quite sure how to handle the core concept and I think it shows. Certainly I'd rethink the drugging if I ever did it again, it was just a cheap device so that I could build suspense, but a fair amount of people (and a lot of them I respect from other things) think that that suspense perhaps didn't really work. If I try something like this again, it'll have to be from a fairly different approach. Thanks muchly for the comment regardless, people telling me where I screwed up is always highly appreciated!