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TAW


Hi, I'm TAW. I write terrible erotic my little pony fan fiction about cartoon horses having sex with each other, or vaguely defined human audience-inserts, for fun. Because... uh. I have no shame?

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Because why the fuck not, indeed

hell yeah, a new taw story. give me 10 min to readand i will have my real comment then.p

one of your best, even though i prefer your human ones.

Mistakes always end in make-up sex. :derpytongue2:

Derpy be hittin dat!
Very good chapter, Mah Boi!:moustache:

I respect this so much. :derpyderp1:

Dammit, why can't I stop reading your stories Taw?

I am loving the 'Because.... Because....' Thing you have going on in ever story description. I know that is kinda random to bring to pay attention to but for me it really gives you a bit of an 'image' or at least something people can recognize. All I had to do was read the description and I KNEW for certain that you had been the author of this.(normally I don't look at who the author is before reading it)

"...nothing is ever quite perfect." :rainbowkiss:
What a great line to end on. Brilliant.

I have reached a verdict... you are crazy. IN A GOOD WAY MAN KEEP GOING.:rainbowwild:

Imagine my surprise having missed the mature tag on this.
Still, our grey and gold heroine here needs more screen time, so I can't say I didn't read all of it anyway.
The ambiguous nature of Rainbow's actions from the perspective of Derps was pretty well done, and a nice touch a lot of writers ignore.

Ha ha, bubble butt - multiple entendres!

Loved this story of Derpy and Rainbow Dash.:yay:

So AWSOME! Never really see any DerpyDash around. East Germany thanks you.

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knighty
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I'm in ur story. Harblin'

PLEASE ADD TO THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

It was rather decent imo. Definitively above the "average" ones, even if just by a bit hehe.
Had a kinda decent story, and was close enough IC for me to read it.
Have to say the about major complain I could give would be her vulva color, keep in mind mammals follow the anatomical law of outer flesh. (almost all of them, including humans) We have the same color on it as on our upper lips. Normally this would be blackish for equines, but since the outlines of the ponies are same as their coat color, but darker/damper, the term "candy vag" was quickly created. At least by the few that knew, the rest just quickly adapted it as a slang for pony vulva hehe.

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Seriously, Dash seems to be shipped with every mare there is. :rainbowlaugh: And that's a good thing, right? :rainbowkiss:

A minor rant: once or twice you used the word feet, while I'm pretty certain ponies have hooves. :twilightsheepish: Not a big deal though. :raritywink:

Great story as usual. Really enjoyed Rainbows line here
"Man, I can't believe I missed all the fun. Can we start over?"

Drunk off of salt?:rainbowhuh: Seems legit.

Yeah I know salt licks in apploosa...

That wasn't...wasn't too bad. I don't think it prompted the reactions it aimed to, but that's alright. I managed to read a distinctively TAW fic and come through reasonably as sane as I went in. Feels weird though.

TAW, there's a quirky vibe to your writing - a kind of clunkiness. If you imagine any given sentence, paragraph, action or scene as a wheel rolling, it's like a slice is missing from it, somehow, somewhere, and everytime it comes around the whole thing bounces a little awkwardly.

Or maybe its more like a directness, a certain straightness from A to B in what's releveant that speeds it up to the point the whole thing does feel like a rolling wheel. There's a fair if not complete lack of sentences that break the pacing a bit, little thoughts and impressions that, while not furthering the story preciesly, act as a kind of stabiliizing outrigger, and round out the paragraphs a bit.

Whatever it is, it kind of dragged me into a faster pace of reading, which in a literary and technical sense is bad, but in a personal sense probably helped me skim over the top of what I was actually reading before the full import of it hit me.

Might just go walk the dogs on this beautiful country summer day with the birds singing, or hunt down necromorphs and dismember them in delightful and inventive ways, cackling all the while. Either/or, just till the weirdness of TAW fic wears off. Still, I'm gonna have to read another for some kind of comparison and sense making, aren't I?

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