• Member Since 8th Jan, 2012
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TAW


Hi, I'm TAW. I write terrible erotic my little pony fan fiction about cartoon horses having sex with each other, or vaguely defined human audience-inserts, for fun. Because... uh. I have no shame?

Comments ( 88 )

Great story, pegasister! Really cute and sexy at the same time. Two hoofs WAY UP! xD

TAW

334435
Fuck you ponyfag get fucked in a fire and die please

334445
wow... TAW finally shows her true colors. I guess she is a hater just like everypony else :'(

TAW

334448
uh no I only love and tolerate MY bronies not dirty hipsters like you
I bet you don't even like the show you fucking poser
go die

334456
TAW? more like WAT the hell is wrong with you asshole???????? why do you even write these stories if your gonna be an asshole about it?? people like you give bronies a bad name...

TAW

334464
I'm sorry but it's gotta be said
I can't tolerate jerks like you PMing me every story I write being like "I approve of this"
okay fine I get it but stop pushing that in my face asshole
fuck you

Oh TAW, I have something for you.
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Well done again, TAW. You combined the three things I really wanted to see from you again; Rainbow Dash, Spitfire and wingplay, into one of the hottest stories I've ever read. Bravo.

Ah, tee-hee. That title... bwah!

334469>>334464 dudes chill cmon! we are all here for the same reason right. but hey this needs to stop like now cuz its kinda pointless to get pissed at each other. yeah TAW i know that there are those guys who are always commenting on shit but just tell em to stop and not go complete flutterbitch on em'. and you poultron dude chill out with the comments. just keep em to a minimun ofr not comment at all and you kinda do seem like a poser so just take a chill pill and keep calm dude

Yeeeaaaaaahhh, I think I'm going to go with 'beat some sense into you'.

TAW

335009
We were obviously completely serious and legitimately hate each other. This is legit how it actually is actually FYI.

335009
I'm the Administrator of this sight and I can do whatever I want. In fact, TAW is now banned and so are you. Please don't come back. Thank's.

335030 well in that case.... KICK SOME ASS!

334469 sounds like a definition of harassment I read from somme admin named Poultron. how do we report this guy harassing you to him? :trollestia:

You two must have really hot, angry makeup sex.

334445
Jesus Christ chill out dude !
Calm down. Just, calm down.

I haven't gotten this worked up over an erotic story in quite some time. This just might be the hottest thing I've every read. And I've read a LOT of shit let me tell you!

"Because let's be honest, can anyone seriously say they wouldn't hit Dash and Spitfire? Seriously?"

You got me there.

No fucking way.

335040 I think TAW is just upset that you used the term "pegasister" :unsuresweetie:

334445
Huh. That's new. You write clopfics, and then you call the people who comment on your stories "ponyfags"? :rainbowhuh:

You totally stole the name for my spin off.
No fair :applecry:

TAW

335136
(In case you hadn't noticed me and poultron argue way too much for it to be at all serious)

TAW

335138
Sorry, blame knighty for the name!

Web sight.

>banned for eternity

I think I just had a
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Also, yeah, that's a real drink. How do I know? That's my hand.

Ok seriously now, TAW. Can we get a chapter two with TwiDashFire with hornplay and more wingjobs?

Might as well ruin all of Soundslikeponies spin-off ability.

Man, this is hot stuff. :raritywink:

335129

Lol, this is the single most retarded comment on this story.

APPLAUSE :eeyup:

in your description you said "...or even tracking me down and beating ... some sense into me" I choose to interpret that as a challenge. My hunt aside, I really enjoyed the read, take a star and a thumbs up.

335372 Hey, what the hell did I do to you? :rainbowhuh:

335425

Nothing, I commented on your comment. Do you take it personal if I say that I don't like it? Then you should probably get out of the internet. It's a place filled with offending people. It's a place full of hatred. It's a place in which whiners get bashed.

You did nothing wrong, besides saying something completely redundant and incoherent.

Cheerio :trixieshiftright:

Hurray for stories that I don't give a fuck about!!!!!!!! My penis has to be used for something, so why not clop it off with some of TAW's worthless erotica?
In the name of the almighty troll monarch Celestia, Amen.


I am not anyone important, and I approve this message.

Wait... there's already a fic named Flying High, Falling Ha-

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Oh my god the comments on this are hilarious.

335682
Welcome to the Internet, my friend.

That guy is awesome, boning Spitfire and Dash in one night!

Please, don't ever stop writing Pony X Human clop! :rainbowkiss:

Also, it seems the two have a bit of a hand fetish... :twilightblush:

Very well written. The point of view was interesting- but the skill and level of detail was enough to make it more than awesome. After the first few paragraphs, the level of detail had me so lost (in a good way) that the pov seemed perfect. Bravo

>wingjobs

Imagine if Celestia let you play with those pretty wings of hers

This may or may not be a request

Haven't even read the fic and im tempted to favorite this just for the beautiful conversation happening in the comments. Did I mention I love you guys?

No? Well I do X3 (pony faces no worky with my phone)

Wow, I request Celestia's wingjob too! 336557

TAW, awesome as always, though i woud've liked more if it was Spitfire and Soaren. just saying

Great as always, and I'm certainly I'm going to hell for enjoying your stories.

So, I originally took a look at this fic as a challenge fic, one I didn't expect to like but dared to prove me wrong. It was a human in Equestria story, second-person perspective, and clop (Not that I mind clop on principle, but it seems a lot of fic writers assume adding sex is an excuse for poor writing), three things that I tend to be prejudiced against.

And yet, I gave it a thumbs up and tracked it. The quality was good enough to show that you're not just using clop as a crutch, the second-person narrative was actually done in a way that made sense, and adding a human actually contributed to the story more than just "Holy shit, there's a human in Equestria!" Good show, man. Thanks for proving me wrong.

"Slowly, you began to thrust, penetrating the very edge of her wing."

Gave me the image of him awkwardly humping a feather duster.

"Still you continued, slowly lubricating your way with the first signs of precum coating the inside of her tight hole."

This actually took me a few rereads to figure out that no, you did not give Rainbow Dash a wing vagina, but that she had coiled it. This also helped with the above image.

Also, more Spitfire x Anon would be appreciated.

TAW

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Yeah, I think by that point I was starting to get tired enough to lose the coherent image in my head, I really should have stopped and continued later.
Thanks for the criticism - I appreciate you reading something you don't enjoy!

336557
Some ideas are legitimately too distracting to write about - I think that one may be one of them. Because... Celestia. Unf.

336632
If you'll allow me a little pretension for a moment, this is always something I really appreciate hearing. A lot of things people roll their eyes at aren't inherently because of what they are, just because they're usually so badly done. A 2nd person human x pony my little pony erotic fanfiction is about the most pathetic idea I can conjure into my head - but that doesn't mean it can't be done well. I mean, we all want to have sex with these horses or we wouldn't be here, so why hide from that? Thank you for the kind words!

336689
Now I can't stop imagining Dash holding a feather duster in her mouth and looking at you like you're an idiot!

A wingjob! A proper wingjob! And Spitfire! In the same story! I never thought I'd see the day.

This is fetish fodder right here. But ... why are so many people tracking a completed story? I have that with mine, too.

TAW

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Truly this is a question that plagues my dreams. I wish I knew!
I appreciate them all the same, but I always find it a strange situation when a story has several times as many tracks as votes.

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I believe this summarizes just about everyones reaction

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