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Dusk Shine is sent to Ponyville to discover what is friendship. But could a colt that doesn't recognize the friendship, recognize love?

Another story about Dusk Shine and his Harem, but with my personal touch, with more humor, romance and adventure.

ps: This story contains some drawings made by me. It's not a comic, each chapter has one or two sketches showing some particular fact from each chapter.

See my other works: BigSnusnu

Chapters (57)
Comments ( 2219 )
Comment posted by adaamthebrony deleted Aug 16th, 2016

Awesome story looking forward to future chapters


This is amazing man. Keep up the work! :pinkiehappy:

First it was messy now it state mane from twitwi:trollestia:

So well Luna & the elements play a part in the story?

Comment posted by bigsnusnu deleted Aug 18th, 2016

This is going to be a very interesting story to read keep up a good work update more soon :twilightsmile:

I really like your take on Dusk Shine. He is awesome!

i pitty the mare who want him, she going to have alot of work to get him out of his shell

Or he could have said, "Buck this!!!", ignored the order, and taken the next train elsewhere, maybe Manehattan, to continue his studies. Five days later Celestia would have wondered where he went. :rainbowlaugh:

Good luck Dusk bro wish I could help

Idea Spike get Dusk to go to their local library see who's running it and make friends with them.

I wonder who he we'll end up with, can't wait to see more!

Oh, this chapter was very sweet. I really liked Dusk Shine and Fluttershy's interaction and laughed loudly at the conflict between Angel and Spike. Thanks for the chapter, it was worth the wait.

Can I please get a link to the untranslated version?

I hope to see the rest of the story soon, it sounds interesting so far.

7484731 Yeah! the first comment
thanks =D I'm glad you like it ;)

7485479 that's right, First, I needed to show that Dusk was a total disaster :)

7485545 probably, we'll have to continue reading to find out =D

7499636 Well, Dusk is a bit rebellious, but I don't think he wants to challenge his teacher to such an extent xD

7503039 hahaha, we all want the same thing haha!

7498830 thank you :) I hope to publish more often, though not totally dependent on me ^^;

7498877 thank you, I'm glad you like it :)

7499436 I guess you have a good point :)

7503094 xD Spike and his plans... ^^;

7538339 still much to find out that, we'll have to continue reading to see how it progresses :)

thank you, I'm really glad you like it =D
and I know, I hope to upload new chapters more often, though it doesn't dependent on me totally :(

7647358 thank you, sorry for the delay :(

7647591 sure, if you want, the spanish version is in deviantart: Dusk Shine, spanish

7647747 thank you, I'm gald you like it =D

I'm really loving this story so far! I can't wait to see what happens next with Applejack, Rarity, Rainbow Dash and Pinkie Pie! :pinkiehappy:

I have to ask... Well Sunset, Starlight or Trixie be in? I love to see what it would be like a romance chapter for Dusk x Sunset, Starlight or Trixie.

I know the story is Focus on Dusk & the mane 6 romance. If you don't have plans to have the other girls... maybe create a bonus chapter?

Run Spike! Dusk is down, but you can make it buddy. We Apple Thieves shall strike again :pinkiecrazy:

7736568 I'm glad you like it :)
And well, I can't give spoilers, but yes, I have sure that one of them three will appear and have a love situation with Dusk =D

7736611 Haha, yeah, it's a big question to know what Spike will do =D

great to see a new chapter of this story again I had nearly forgotten about it, still it was great read the chapter, hope to see more of it soon.

7756098 thanks :)
So far I have ready until the Chapter 7 in Spanish, and Chapter 5 in English, but the correction is delayed ^^;

7843330 Currently the story is ready until the 8th chapter, I also translate them, but my English is not perfect, and who helps me to correct the text has been delayed.
thanks for commenting :)

7846478 i could help with your english im really good at it :pinkiehappy:

7847194 I'd really appreciate it, I'll send you a private message ;)

It was nice to see an other chapter of this story so soon, I hope to see the next one soon. I wander how Dusk will be able to explain that he is the representative of the Crown to make sure that the SSS is ready in time.

7853270 I'm glad you like it :) I hope to can translate the next chapter soon =)
thanks for commenting and following my fic ;D

I love this story, it so sweet, funny and dramtic...thou i wonder...what happen to Dusk that makes him afraid to make a friend?
What happened to him.

7853910 Thanks, I'm glad you like it :)
About Dusk, well, everything will be known at the right time, little by little we'll know more about the past of Dusk, but we'll need much more time to discover him completely :D
thanks for commenting ;)

Loved the chapter. I can't wait to see who will be next, I would think it would be Rainbow Dash next since you're following the same steps as in the show who Twilight meet first, but I have to wonder how that will work...

I guess I'll to wait and see!

Also, did Dust kiss Fluterrshy? I don't remember... Oh boy, Rarity is going to be crazy in love with him soon! :rainbowlaugh:

7873925 I'm glad you like it ^^
and no, Duks didn't kiss Fluttershy... yet xD
thanks for commeting ;D

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