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TheUltimateBrony-Class-S


A young adult whom has been getting and trying ideas for fanfictions...

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Hm.... TF2 story....





............ tracked... I'll see what becomes of this.

Life just got 20% cooler...liked and tracked

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:rainbowderp: ... I... er.... how did this work out so well??? Thanks for the love you guys and remember to let me know if there are any mistakes...

....You're not one but 8??? Welp, that killed my interest, you could of focused only ONE tf2 class..

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Well technically, I'm all 9, and I wanted to do something a little more original.

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Well... all I can say is, if it weren't obvious, that my character is a brony, and has been up-to-date until the new first episode of this season.

EDIT: Sorry, characters*

well, my thoughts are summed up by this meme:
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Keep The chaos coming, cuz this is going on the tracking list as well as the favorites for me.

8112806 Still, its quite alot of people to focus on even if they're all you.

I love it please continue :twilightsmile:

8115675 when will there ever be enough dakka :pinkiecrazy:

:pinkiecrazy: he he waiting is driving me madder than a hatter!

along with Engineer for obvious reasons

maybe not as obvius as you think If it was demo it would be obvious.
derpicdn.net/img/2015/9/27/988949/large.png couldent find the original.
Also maybe you should try putting the class next to the name for pov like you did for the bottom.
Zander: Medic

8132965 Maybe, but have you ever seen Engineer drink tea? No? then there's the answer to that. Spy just makes sense as well as Sniper, it is just depending on if the tea has more caffeine in it or not.

I might edit the stories to have that up top... can't believe I didn't think of it myself. :derpytongue2:

why did it had to be so short :raritydespair:

8133052 It was only about 300 words shorter than the last one, and besides, wait until next chapter comes out ok?

8133015 If the medic gets into horrible experiments involving manticores, timber wolves, or other creatures I want to suggest a scene along the lines of
Twilight "You have a lab can I see what you're working on"
Two hours later
spike "Twilight you've been in the shower for a while I need to go to the bathroom.
Twilight "NEVER CLEAN AGAIN, WHAT HAS BEEN SEEN CAN NEVER BE UNSEEN.

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... Might I borrow that for a potential scene?

8135283 that comment was me practically begging for that to happen so sure.

Not super grammar; and a bit of writing mistakes, but I love this premise. Going to keep reading.

Excellent work, loved the song bit.

"Alright," I said, glaring at him through my goggles

I thought that the engy had robotic goggles that act like eyelids for occasions like this.(that might just be in some videos though)
corrections

It looked Fort Degroot Keep,

like should be in between looked and fort But I don't think fort needs to be there Degroot Keep is fine.

I surprised we didn't activate any of them by accident when we were remodeling

I'm

gave the others the 'all-clear' and waited for the morning to come.

too many spaces
Which part was inspired by me the medic part? Also for medic's pet should archimedes appear when scout dies(1/100) like in the game and if so a possible project could involve giving archimedes Phoenix powers

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Thanks for the corrections and if you must know, it was the request for a lab.

As for the bit about Archimedes... well... I can't say... it's classified.

This is one of the few TF2 stories there is on this website, and even fewer that are good. This might be the those few that are good.

This was the best i could do, but replace newsletter with story.

Now he's 8 times the fun. I wonder if all of them can communicate telepathy?

Now he's 8 times the fun. I wonder if all of them can communicate telepathy?

Since there all the same person wouldn't logic dictate that all of them are the main character?

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No sadly, that would be a rather convenient now wouldn't it? :derpyderp2:


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In a way, yes, but they are not the same person, not anymore. Here's technically what happened: Alexander Hamilton's body was ripped from existence and his his soul was removed from his body, the soul was copied eight times, each soul had a mercenaries memories implanted, and created a new persona for each mercenary. Meaning, they all sometimes still have the same ideas, but sometimes, because of the newly formed persona they will notice that they themselves and the others will most likely disagree.

8151440 They'll still have coms though right?

Demo's is an alcohol tester

let me guess it's set to 5 times the human limit. NOT the legal limit 5 times the amount it would kill the average man.
Also question will he be giving the ponies drinks? He could teach Applejack to make applejack.

8152708 He could teach Applejack to make applejack.:facehoof:

8152780 I can feel the crowds tomatoes and they have never felt better.

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I just love interactions like this on stories, more surprising to find one in one of my stories.

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To answer your question, well, in the comics it was high enough to give ROBOTS alcohol poisoning. Machines the were meant to drain Australium, not taste liquids of any kind, tell me that isn't uniquely ridiculous?

8153573 He also seems to be able to survive without the use of his lungs, stomach, and heart while they were busy brewing alcohol.

I just found this on the interwebs, can you make this into a side chapter with them doing Mannrobics to keep in shape.

Well I guess he stoped being an Echo of his formal self.
But at the beging it seamed to have a very cold personalitie.

Engie then pulled out a paper he wrote on and repeated the written words: “The servers are the 7 Chaos. Chaos is power... Power enriched by the heart. The controller is the one that unifies the Chaos.”

everything in here is bold

Suddenly, the jewel is surrounded by an orb of water

was

“This is his token, not don’t worry as it is inactive

“Would this version of Equestria be of that of a different form?

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an human displaced in body that does belong to them?

but I do not how it would react to being in the machine,

the emerald is mine after all and I cannot leave it here

So basically, it’s like solar panels as an crystal.”

“...I did enjoy it for a time, millions of years ago when Starswirl was himself and when Clover the clever was alive,

Thousands

. The last thing he hears before his all of his mind becomes foggy is this

you can remove the underlined

Soon, it died shown,

8178400 Those typos would belong to me except for the first and last ones you pointed out. We were making this cross over deep into the night untill it around 8:00 AM. Thanks for pointing them out.

8178476 you might also want to check almost every time echo speaks the bolding spreads to other words.

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