- Member Since 10th Apr, 2015
- offline last seen 2 hours ago
Warp Contrast
Writing stories now? Apparently? Weird, huh?
Warp Contrast
Joined 10th Apr, 2015 ·
Offline
Also LikedSimilarAuthor
- Torulf21 · 41k words · 340 43 · 7.3k views
- Moonking · 64k words · 363 64 · 10k views
- RandomChance · 11k words · 489 41 · 9.4k views
- Connorcooper · 15k words · 259 40 · 5k views
- Talion · 34k words · 394 69 · 11k views
- PsychoFox44 · 25k words · 404 28 · 6.5k views
- Americanwastelander · 40k words · 286 24 · 6k views
- Bronze Inkwell · 22k words · 363 38 · 8.2k views
Featured In6
- SCP: Friendship is [REDACTED]72 stories ·623 members
Taelonso Grim's Library1,155 stories ·86 members
- Humans Wearing Cosplay Costumes to a Con (convention) End Up In Equestria38 stories ·110 members
Displaced1,265 stories ·4,421 members
human turned :)832 stories ·973 members
F*** It! I'm Overpowered! (A.K.A. One Punch-Style Stories)108 stories ·483 members
Stats
Page generated in 0.036 seconds
Total duration
1,018 users online
59,886 hits today, 2,004,447 yesterday
FIMFiction
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
Designed and coded by knighty & Xaquseg - © 2011-2024
Follow & Support Us
Support us
SubStar
Chat!
Discord
Follow us
Twitter
MLP: Friendship is Magic® - © 2024 Hasbro Inc.®
Fimfiction is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Hasbro Inc.®
You can do it! I actually just got out of a looong rut myself. Just let it flow and let it go, friend ^^
10013085
You better check again about what have you written, there are a few words out of context in there.
This is the successor of the old fic. I hope you can continue what the original author couldn’t do. Listed on favorites.
It’s new year and in the very moment that people saw the announce of the original author, we have come to this place and read the story itself.
Do you take Ideas?
Present tense make some want to puke.
The idea is decent. Expression is.... Something. Grammar is something. Present tense is appalling.
Please don’t quit this story like the others
Good so far, please keep going and not quit this story please
https://www.pinterest.com/pin/683984262137845907/
Found a link for the pic but this is as far as I got
let's just call him king
Oh, nice. I was hoping someone would pick this up, one of the very few scp stories I've seen on here.
10013097
Yes, actually. I'm very much worried that I won't be able to do the story justice, so any help I can get is welcome, though I can't guarantee everything will be included. I may actually rewrite even the first chapter besides. Not super happy with it.
10013128
I am sorry about that. I think I may actually sort of rewrite the first chapter. I really want to do the idea justice if only because it intrigued me so much, but I'm still sort of looking for my style, if that makes any sense.
Interesting. I look forward to the next chapter.
Why would Zecora know that?
She is a shaman, yes but don't make her omnipresent or all-knowing for some reason
If she can do that then everyone else can, which takes away the whole reason, purpose of it
Especially that he didn't change with magic but he literally molded himself, piece by piece
10013521
I get that. But for the love of all that is right in the world, do not use present Continuous tense throughout. Don't. Please.
10013663
Completely understandable. I think I may have fixed it? I need an editor, to be honest.
10013648
I suppose maybe I should have made it clearer. I meant for her to sort of notice the wrongness of the form he took through a window. She saw at least the tail end of the transformation. I'll fix that.
so far so good lets see how you continue
10013833
If she saw that he transformed would explain that without making her knowing that he transformed into zebra forced
10013891
I fix. Maybe is better? Maybe not. Probably not.
10013519
I was referring to actually making another story in the future or integrating different aspects of theories to the story. If you want to make a story a bit grimmdark, I have been on the fandom for a long time and in tumblr, so I know of a few.
In the first age
When shadows first lengthened
I would like to read more
so far so good cant say if its better or not only time will show
The idea is intriguing. Let's see where it will lead me to.
This som good shit.
Beginning could use some fixing up maybe, aside form that everything is good abd I would love to see more
Wonder if the glasses are there own SCP.
please more
Going well so far. Please make more.
Ironically enough, the third chapter came out sometime while I was reading the second one
10014696
Published it just a few minutes ago, yeah. I was really nervous about it, so I kept putting it off.
Odd timeline given Vinyl, but the I suppose she always had those shades?
10014718
Ah. Time, my worst enemy. I always mess up time stuff. Give me a minute and maybe I can fix? I'm just glad I'm not a properly serialized writer, or I couldn't polish this stuff so easily.
Edit: There we go, new spotfixes. Plotholes patched, sort of.
Your doing great man. Keep up the good work.
10014729
Thank you! I really appreciate that, coming from you!
10014724
I actually was sort of asking if somehow by giving her shades she now retroactively had those glasses for years. Causality always seems to fold like a house of cards around a freaky enough entity.
10014739
Just retroactively changing the color of her eyes, I suppose. Time shananigans are not my friend.
10014747
They are rarely anyone’s friend. It is likely the most headache inducing variety of fiction I’ve come across from a logic standpoint.
10014756
Glad you understand.
Love the series so far cant wait for more
Did King just unintentionally use his hypnosis power?
Maybe don't use that Pinkie Pie cliche?
I don't think Pinkie knowing everything is important in this story
Like, everyone forces it in their story and later readers, even author himself doesn't remember Pinkie did that, that's how unimportant and overused it is
If it won't come back and isn't important or isn't Pinkie Pie focused story, better don't add it
She could have just greeted him in Pinkie way, like she was doing it in the show without her being all-knowing and knowing everything about them
10014862
It was a joke. It doesn't actually matter. I was trying to be funny, but if you hadn't noticed, I'm not good at that when I'm trying. Expect only vague hints and references to that, but beyond this one, that's pretty much the only time it'll ever be "seriously" relevant.
10014878
If you want to add one shot of breaking the fourth Wall, maybe do it so it's meant for readers only
Like Pinkie Pie saying how this story was reborned 3 times, something like that for example
Or Pinkie Pie saying she has Déjà vu for the third time
10014881
I guess I was just trying to hint at something like eldritch nature in Pinkie, herself, but I suppose maybe that *is* overdone, a bit. I'll modify the chapter a bit, play with a different joke.
Edit: Done-zo. Hopefully you like it just a little more?
10014819
He did something, intentionally or otherwise.
You may wish to break the dialogue up a little. Have some chat that flows from one character to another before changing the scene again.
In fact, the only actual back and forth conversation that doesn't have paragraphs of scene setting or motion attached are at the end of chapter 2 and it kind of makes the whole chapter look...clunky is the word that comes to mind. There isn't space to focus on the conversation because there is always something happening at the same time.