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TheUltimateBrony-Class-S


A young adult whom has been getting and trying ideas for fanfictions...

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"This is a Displaced story, and if you don't like it don't read."

You do know that this has zero effect whatsoever, right?

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And yet, you're commenting here about it, so it had an effect of some kind.

"A powerful, supposedly sapient , predator," Celestia starts, "one that may lose something dear to them... and could either learn to forgive and become a great ally, or become fueled by rage..."

HAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!! bitch please! If it's similar to the game itself, Maneater. We ALL know that she is out to kill that shark hunter A-Hole!

"No," Celestia says sternly, looking to Discord with a hardened expression, "this is too dangerous, even for them, as this creature is not only a threat to us... but to all of our allies beyond."

Your just overreacting. She will only be after that shark hunter A-hole.

"Then I could just... snap it away?" Discord suggests, having his right paw ready to snap, as if to emphasize.

Highly doubt it. Plus, she will go after you too if you mess with her.

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It's not a secret or anything. I seen MANY revenge type of stories like this in here. And since this is based on the Maneater video game. We all know what she is choosing. BUT, a part of me does want her to still ally with the ponies and their non-pony allies. BUT, not before getting her justified revenge first. And they also SHOULDN'T screw with her or being stupidity paranoid either. :pinkiecrazy:

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Yeah and I can't believe Celestia didn't see this coming. Every treasure hunter trying to find the mystery creature even if she just wanted to be left alone.

Can't what for the next chapter and to find out what type of creature she is

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Ironic huh? And IF our Shark Hybrid finds out that it was Celestia's ( Along with Luna and Discord too ) tom f****** that causes those damn shark and treasure hunters to start their "hunt" in the damn first place. ( Especially that certain obsessed shark hunter/killer Main Antagonist. )


So much for our Shark Hybrid being a "ally/guardian" that you will probably exploit for your own selfish reasons, you paranoid dumbass ( Celestia )!!!!!!!! :flutterrage: :facehoof: :twilightangry2:


I wouldn't be surprised if Celestia losses a VERY huge chunk out of her fat, dumb ass. :pinkiecrazy:

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Personally as long as it gets to the end I couldn't care less. Too many displaced stories don't get finished.

Hope for more and longer parts i can wait.

Dont trust ponies there xenophob and just trying to get a puppet out of others

This is an interesting story wonder what happens next

Unfortunately for Celestia the price of of pain is one not easily forgiven. Celestia would have to do something big to make it right in order for forgiveness to happen.

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In this case, a "Mega" is used in reference to "Megalodon", a giant, ancient shark that is believed to have existed alongside dinosaurs.

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Yep! Those pacifist ponies won't even survive a quarter of life's cruelty like our main character has tragically been though. :ajbemused:

Plus, why the Hell do they keep "searching", when our main character HASN'T done anything bad????!!!! As of yet!

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Yeah some people never realize that trying to run usually ends just where you don't want to be in prophecy.

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Note that she asked for ponies to report it to her, who knows what their plans are for afterward.

And so it begins...:pinkiecrazy: I wonder how long will it takes their ”fisherman’s story” to be told and the potentially reported and finally reach princesses ears? And will it get buried under some other report that might sound more like the prophecy?
Also liking the ”worst part is the wait” our princess duo, plus Discord, have going there. Since ”nothing is scarier”...
Keep it up:twilightsmile:

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:pinkiecrazy: I'm glad you're enjoying, so far, this going a little better than I expected.

I cant wait to see the main six or princeses talking from the high horse telling that" ponis cant do any crule stuff and are just peaceful and wound never harm anypony"

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I wonder how long it will take till what actually happened isn't what is told. Like a game of telephone the tale will pass along till it isn't even the same as it started and considering the problems with rumors this could cause more problems with the worried princesses.

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Pacifist Morons! IF they want to check her own memory, or use a lie detector spell. They will know that she is the victim here, and she was just doing it for justified revenge!

And if not? That will surely DESTROY any friendly relationship with our Shark Hybrid. And becoming "allies" is all but moot now.

Now Luna has a clue it seems. And no more, since this dream is clearly guarded well.
Keep it up:twilightsmile:

hahahahaha!!

THIS story is frigin awesome so far!

..is there an eta on the next chapter please??

asking cause this is the only story out there outside of the maneater game that actually has any elements from the game itself..so far anyway.

Hmm, this is a rather slow start, especially considering the intrinsic promise of the tags; I wouldn't doubt it'll eventually live up to the warning tags of sex, death, violence, and gore, but so far the story is basically just teen-rated and only gore maybe applies.

I can definitely see where this is from the inspiration is most definitely man-eater but with a better person who was only doing his job instead of hunting sharks for sport as the beginning

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Basically you play as a man-eating shark and get stronger as you kill, eat, and evolve.

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