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Blacklight Brony

I’m a human with a love for all types of art either it be music or drawing. I’m kind but a little shy. Glad to meet you. Visit my New Frontiers Discord Channel! https://discord.gg/zgZ6Fmv

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Well this had an ok promising start.... then it just fell apart. Going from subject change to subject change to fast to follow what was going on. I got 2/3 complete before I just gave up. To the author. Don't give up. Try again. Just slow down.... allot. Also, being skinny and nerdy, super shy, and wanting to get into the military and being part of ROTC.... is confusing. At a min. ROTC and shyness does not happen, at least not for very long.

Dude, I was in ROTC and I hardly talked to anyone except my CO and even then it was only answering general orders. Also, the reason I’m skinny is because of my metabolism and I’m trying to get into the military to get rid of this shy personality. It literally takes around three months to get the courage to even talk to people in my new school. One last thing, I spent four days working on this and for it being too fast, I blame my ADHD.

We are all a little ADHD. :o) Any ROTC I ever been involved with took care of shy people quick. Either they quit or got over it. Yours may have been different.

It was hard, but I found a way to work around it. It took a while but I was able to get enough confidence to answer my CO and that was it. I’m trying to make it more descriptive right now so I’m trying to fix it. Emphasis on try. But thanks for the in put, it really helps.

well shit about to go down...good story so far hope to see more soon

hey great chapter. i hope to see more soon

Comment posted by DarkAngel864 deleted Oct 13th, 2018

great chapter i hope too see more soon my good sir

well shit that one hell of a cliffhanger also great chapter i hope to see more soon

Applejack had to dig a stray bolt of lightning that sparked from her horn,

Wait what?

Oh crap, thanks for pointing that out... I have yet to edit the past few chapters.

Soon. The next chapter is sort of all over the place and is highly militaristic. There is a military graduation ceremony in it, but I couldn’t find any information on the army ceremonies to write the entire thing. Not to mention that it took me a while to name the chapter so it fits.

Little info on what to expect as an apology for it taking so long. I’ve been behind in my biology class for me to be able to update my story.

Biology sucks😩

Sorry, but I’m close to finishing and then I have to edit. It should be up by tomorrow if I don’t procrastinate like I usually do.

shit's goin' down next time on Dragonball- oh wait, wrong series.

Not really, but we are going to delve into something that will inevitably be the main portion of the second ark and will gain a few friend as well as a little insight for when the war will begin.

Little more insight for anyone who reads this. Not to mention that my schedule will have more time after next week as the marching season will end then. :pinkiehappy:

Comment posted by Blacklight Brony deleted Dec 9th, 2018

Yes. It’s just taking longer than expected.

ok, what the heck... did no one get notified that this updated? any great chapter i hope to see more soon

do you think for add:

sunset shimmer
Adagio Dazzle
Aria Blaze
Sonata Dusk
Starlight Glimmer
Lyra Heartstrings
Bon Bon

i hope this will add more for the harem.

I can’t add them yet... in still in the first season (aka ark one) but they will be added. Either as main characters or add them to the herd. Only time will tell.:twilightsmile: Heads up. Dark tides ahead and hatred will begin. In upcoming chapters, but soon.

do we give you the name for his sister?

Try to submit a name for the new character. So far I only got one, so it will give me more diversity when I began to choose. I’m also consulting my friends at my high school for names. Thanks for the support.

No problem. If you don't like it, I can't force you.

Maybe name her Kya, reffrence to a little known PS2 game featuring a female protagonist that goes around basically beating up werewolves. Kya can be short for Kyatakash (Key-yeah-ta-cosh), a refference to another little known media, this time Atlantis the Lost Empire, a movie made by Disney Animation Studios. Also, Kyatakash it sounds more exotic and tribal based, she IS another version of Hunter, after all she don't take shit from nobody (*add sassy head-bob here*).

Sorry my dude, but that ended a while ago. I will, however, try and add them to the story. Describe the character (doesn't have to be a pony or any known species) and I'll do my best to add her/him in.

Again, sorry for wasting your time thinking about this. I should have put up a comment saying it was over.

Interesting way to introduce Nyx...not sure how to feel bout it but I’ll give ya this it was unique usually she pops into existence via getting a sample of a parent’s magic signature.

Yeah, but this time she's biological. I'm evil for fucking up how it originally happened... I think?

Hmmm interesting. I have one complaint and that is the poison joke cliché almost every story we’re our main character steps in poison joke they get switched to the opposite gender and it get old however I will say I like how ya introduced what is meant to be his twin sister anyways can’t wait for more.

Okay, that's not a bad start to the story. interessing. I'll see in the next updates.
see you next time.

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