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Michael Hudson
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So...Sunset planned all this?
...I like.
A bit short, but nice. And Pinkie can see Bartholomew, of course.
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She was a former student of the princess, and she is in heat so...I can see her pulling this off.
7472144 of course she can this IS Pinkie we are talking about fourth wall breaker extroidenair
HAWT!!!!
Wow. Very Hot e good Capther. not impossibile of Pinkie.
All of my YES!!!!
This will be awesome and sexy!!!
Six girls... so I assume this includes Sci-Twi.
She's totally going to have built a working PKE meter and possibly a Trap by the end of the week.
Pinkie is a sly, little fucker. I hope the other interactions are equally as hot.
So...now Bartholomew, in addition to seeking to have sexual fun with all the girls, is going to try to play matchmaker?
...nice.
7492266 Well, he isn't particularly happy about some of the matches.
I realy like this chapter and Bartholomew is an awesome ghost.
It's a good thing the new Ghost Busters was a bust or our very friendly ghost might have had something to worry about.
7493244 Even if they weren't a bust, they were busty, so I think Batholomew could have figured out some way to make them go unprofessional.
7493288 ... That better be a spin off story.
7493295 XD Unfortunately, I haven't seen the new movie, so closest that might come is a spin off where this probably would happen in Equestria, and Bart is an old friend of Celestia and Luna who still resides in the castle of the twin sisters. Mane 6 of course being ghostbusters now.
7493305 ... That's actually a good idea.
You did say ALL the clothes in the house Applejack. It is your fault forgetting you were asking a ghostly pervert to do such.
Ok who's Jack
7532420 Jack* First off. Secondly, Jack is inspired by what was to originally be chapter four, that Bart had a darker side of him from his time alive, i.e. Jack the Ripper. I felt it was too dark though, and would cause WAY too many issues down the line, and scrapped it for the much more light hearted reveal of what Sunset has done to Bartholomew.
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Oh ok I get it
Eh, I feel like the reveal could have gone a bit better. Like introduce Bartholemew and add the pervert thing as an afterthought. I didn't actually think she would introduce him so soon. Maybe getting AJ in on it would help back her up later on
7532646 Sunset was nervous, and didn't really know how to introduce him, or how to do it smoothly. This is a subject that terrifies her, just like anything sexual with her friends, because she doesn't know what they'll think towards her afterwards. She did feel that AJ had to be informed, because she was the one that she expected to despise Bart the most if they simply met.
All clothes...XD Guess he took that literally!
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You know, it almost seems like 'Jack the Ripper' got split into two ghosts at death, one becoming Bartholomew who had more gentleness than fierceness, and one becoming Jack* who didn't care about his 'playthings'.
Or that would be what it would seem like if this wasn't non-canon.
7532728 And you would be fairly accurate if I had gone with my original idea. Jack used Bart as almost a Venus Flytrap, luring in ladies, and when they annoyed him, Jack would come out. But, alas, I want this to stay on the positive and smutty side of things.
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If you ever wanted to write a darker style of this story, that would be an excellent concept to work with.
7532747 I'd rather do the Ghost Buster's Parody I outlined in the comments of this fic first.
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And having looked back and now seen that outline...
Im still confused at what they were looking at in the beginning.
Well... You can't really blame him. After all, he was just following orders.
Briliant, this chapter was simply briliant
So much potencial for the next canon chapter :3
Does someone get the wrong idea and accuse Pinkie of also being the one who felt everyone else up and stripped them?
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I KNEW IT! YES!
7537556 Unfortunately, time, working on this, and other obligations are against me doing such a thing.
7537567 I ALSO KNEW IT! FUCK!
Very nice continuation. Quite fun to see this side of Rarity.
I keep looking forward to these chapters.
I never thought I would find myself so interested in the adventures of a perverted ghost.
7561816 The misadventures. The miss-adventures?
… wow. I … wow.
I'm sorry. I appreciate you giving me the rec for this, but this is *way* too rapey for me. I skipped the chapter the author's note said was rapey, and this is in the chapter afterward.
I'm not gonna downvote or anything. This is a fantasy, and some people enjoy rape fantasies. I don't. I've just gotta stop.
7563908 I can understand that, and that's somewhat me saying that this is what Bartholomew was like in his undeath. Just look at the first one for proof. There is literally no way Sunset is consenting there, so it's technically rape, and Bartholomew just taking what he wants. Unfortunately, that's a part to the original premise in the first place by the commissioner, and the ghost has to be actively known about to avoid it.
Hence why he is poltergheisting, rather than just groping, as he could be considered a malevolent spirit. But, thanks for not downvoting, and I hope you enjoyed up until this point.
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I do appreciate you being clear that lines are being crossed. Have fun writing this, and let me know if there's one where the core premise is consenty.
(I'll keep you in mind if I get some more money to burn on commissions.)
7565394 Thanks for keeping me in mind, and I'll try to let you know.
Wow, good chapter! I can't wait for the next one!
Well, subtlety just went out the window.
Oh, the fun I could have with that conversation.
I would love to see this story continue if at all possible as the story is great with lots of sexy moments thrown in to keep it very interesting
hope that there is more to come
Damn... son! Someone call the medic! I need medical help here!!
Will there be more chapters soon