• Published 15th Aug 2016
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The Crow: Red Sins - 2wingo



Jason Wright is reborn as The Crow, and returns to Ponyville to take his just revenge. An "Ending-Verse" fic.

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VI

Jason stepped out of Rarity's boutique. Taking a second to use the door-scraper, he flipped the sign to "Closed" and strolled down Ponyville's empty streets. He wouldn't care to be a fly on the wall when Sweetie Belle came down the next morning and saw what had happened.

"What's with you?" asked the crow, landing on Jason's shoulder.

"I don't know what you're talking about," he said indifferently. "Everything's going according to plan."

"It's a needlessly complicated plan. Why you can't just kill them and go back to sleep like the other revenants do?"

"That is not justice, they did not murder me."

"A technicality, Jason. Anyway, the dead don't care about justice, they only understand revenge."

"And what exactly is the difference?"

"Revenge is about making yourself feel better. Justice is about what's best for everyone."

"Then justice is the only revenge that will satisfy me. If I just kill them, I will be vilified and they will become martyrs. As badly as I was treated, how much more harshly will the ponies deal with the next human who finds himself here? How could I rest, knowing that? No, my only recourse is to ensure that their punishment fits their crime, and that said crime will be known to all."

The crow was silent for a while. Finally he fluffed his wings and said, "Well, let's hurry up and finish it, then. We don't have all eternity to square Death's books, you know."

"We're going after Rainbow Dash next," said Jason. "I'm going to enjoy this one."

A small sound made Jason stop in his tracks. He looked up and down the houses near him, and finally saw a small pink filly sitting on a front porch, crying.

"Go scout out Rainbow's house for me," said Jason to his familiar, "I'll meet you in fifteen minutes."

The crow nodded and flew off. Jason walked silently toward the crying filly, a second glance confirming what he suspected: it was Diamond Tiara. If she noticed him when he sat down beside her, she gave no indication. He could hear a mare and a stallion arguing loudly from inside the house, presumably her parents.

"Are you alright?" he asked softly. She finally looked up at him.

"Tomorrow's my birthday," she sniffed. "I don't think either of them even remember. Mama's been drinking a lot more than usual lately, and Daddy's been working later so he has an excuse to not come home before she passes out. They usually try not to fight on special occasions. My birthday isn't special enough anymore . . ."

She lay her head on his lap and cried harder. Jason gently stroked her mane and waited patiently for her to get a grip on herself.

"Sorry to dump my problems on you," she choked out after a while. She readjusted her tiara and turned to go back into the house.

"Don't be sorry," said Jason, "and don't go yet. I have something for you, something to help you when times are hard and things look bad."

"What is it?" she asked, coming within arm's reach of him. Jason said nothing, but gently placed the palm of his right hand against her forehead.

A wintry Christmas Eve day sleigh bells ringing a fire crackling in the hearth I love visiting Grandma and Grandpa during the holidays Uncle Charlie always tells such great stories the smell of fresh-baked cookies going sledding hate to go to sleep but Santa Claus comes tomorrow OH WOW I got the bicycle I wanted Mom loved what me and my sister got for her mmmm dinner was so good this was the best Christmas ever I've never been so happy

Small tears of happiness leaked out of Diamond Tiara's eyes. It was like she'd actually been there, experiencing all of those joys and delights on that human holiday. She'd never felt so much happiness and love in one room. "That was so beautiful," she whispered, "Why did you leave all of that to come here?"

"I don't remember," said Jason, his voice thickening slightly. "I gave that memory to you. I don't have it anymore."

"What?" A look of guilt crossed her face. "You can have it back if you want."

"No, you keep it," said Jason. "You need it more than I do right now. I can't promise that things in your life won't get worse, but they usually get better after they do."

"Thank you," she said. "Thank you so much . . . er, what's your name?"

"My name is Jason." He stood up. He needed to meet the crow soon. "I have to go, Diamond Tiara. I'll be leaving Equestria in the morning and I have things to take care of."

"Bye, Jason," she called, waving after him. "I'll miss you."

You're the only one who will, he thought.

Author's Note:

I know it felt a little wrong just brushing over Rarity's chapter, but it just wasn't what I wanted to write about.

Comments ( 33 )

So why isn't Diamond Tiara afraid of him, when everyone else is?

2wingo #2 · Oct 5th, 2016 · · 1 ·

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She's too upset to really care and is desperate for someone to be kind to her right now.

We've already seen Apple Bloom's reaction to whatever hoo-doo Jason but on Applejack, how much longer until we see how the rest of Ponyville, and how the Princesses (assuming they're not Jason's future victims) react to the Mane 6...

...cause it will be epic!

Also, nice to see a new update so soon after the last one. Think you can keep up the pace?

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You'll see in a few more chapters (and yes, the Princesses are getting the business, too).

Probably not once a day, but much faster than it has been previously.

7619822 considering a lot of this is twilights machinations you almost feel sorry for celestia and luna then.

2wingo #6 · Oct 5th, 2016 · · 1 ·

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Not especially. The fact that they had no idea that any of this was going on even after 3 years is a serious failure on their part, so they have to face the consequences.

7619958 Fair comment about the failure of the Diarchs, though I'm not sure what could be crueler justice for them than simply making them meet the eyes of the Mane Six all at once when they've all been punished.

It's good to see that he still has some of his humanity left.

2wingo #9 · Oct 7th, 2016 · · 1 ·

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It's a necessary aspect of any "Crow" story. Without his humanity, the revenant is just a robot going through the motions, making his revenge hollow and pointless.

Damn, man, I'm hooked like I swallowed a whole fishing lure. You got me by the frickin' lungs.

Ye keep churning out them chapters at this rate, and I'll have a severe lettercrush on ya. :ajsmug:

Looking forward to the next chapter.

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It depends on the author of the original. The author of this one doesn't mind at all.

You now have my atention, please dont let it og to waste. Also do they retrie the same punishment or different?

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Each of them feels all of they pain that they have caused, no more and no less.

I LOVE IT!!!
how Jason gets his revenge in this is so awesome!

Huk

Dang cliffhangers! I hope you plan to continue the story soon - love it so far :pinkiecrazy:

OK this is an awesome story, ut as any fan of a story on FimFiction. When is the next chapter coming???:applecry:
But for now I will just leave this quote right here that should help with the meaning of this story.
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Will there be more chapters in the future ? :trixieshiftright:

This is so good, where's the rest?

2wingo please make more of this story.

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Nonexistent because he abandoned it.

Can't wait for the next chapter

If their not going to continue they should just cancel it

dead story

This one started to get interesting, shame it's dead.

"Bye, Jason," she called, waving after him. "I'll miss you."

You're the only one who will, he thought.

I don’t think that’s true.

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