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Fate is Manic


Zane Kerregal. Nothing more than a homeless teenager who was in the wrong place in the wrong side of Manhattan. Yep, just bad luck, well bad luck can only go so far right? Zane was caught in Penn Station at the time of the Blacklight virus' release. Upon escape he was found by officers of the Pennsylvania child services and inserted into the adoption cycle.

Now we follow him on his journey through life as a monster, and then his journey through a world not meant to hold a creature like himself.

Warning! Curse words are aplenty.

Chapters (7)
Comments ( 30 )

amazing, and if you really did have a brother named Sean that's gone now im sorry for your loss :fluttershysad:

Thank you for the kind words. He was a friend for many years and I looked up to him as a brother. Although he will be missed I know he is in a better place, wherever that may be.

I agree with zach, I am very sorry for your loss. I can't really sympathize because the first person I ever lost was my mother, when I was three, so I can't really relate since I never really knew her. But still, sorry for your loss.

Thank you and I am sorry for your loss.

1322154 Meh, it didn't leave me in a state of depression so much as it made me much more emotional. Anyway, I prefer not to dwell on it too much. The phrase "Don't dwell on the past, but don't forget it either." comes to mind.

Here is a short chapter to get the story flowing. I do not personally like this chapter for various reasons. Please tell me your own opinion.

1345881Well, you could make Zane creating wings with his own biomass, you know? If he can modify his biomass into weapons, then why not into wings:moustache:?


Zane's powers are based on creativity and psychological limitation. He knows hang gliders work and are concrete in existence. Wings are small and only work on birds in his eyes. He has not seen any thing like Pegasus fly and so does not believe wings work for something his size. Because of that he would make the wings but then fail out only because he doubts himself. Now if he were to say; consume a manticore..........

I love this story:yay::yay:

but could you get the chapters flowing? 'Cuz it's been awhile since the last update :D:moustache:

Guys my creativeness is back. The story I began that got the juices flowing again should be up soon. Look out for it, I personally really like it. The title is The Dragon Games

I predict this story will only last like 6 or 7 chapters....
Oh crap! I'm the author. I can't guess stuff like this, that's cheating.......:derpytongue2:

Insta like and fav 'cause prototype

some deep shit... i still hate black watch.

I just came across your work. Its pretty kickass,:ajsmug: to bad you haven't updated it in a month now.:applecry:

2050758 Check it now. :pinkiesmile:

Now these chapters have been small and far between, why? Because sadly this story is on the bottom of the priority list, I have been finding it hard to write for it and honestly I am surprised anyone liked it at all. I should have made this a one shot, but I keep dragging out small chapters to keep it going. I know you all like it but honestly this could hit hiatus or worse.....I don't want to do that, but not being able to write for a story is as frustrating for me as it is for you. I'm thinking of combining chapters....and will probably do that soon. For now I shall say hiatus, but I promise it is not cancelled, I will always write for something people like. Until you can forgive me or a solution presents itself, thank you for reading this piece o' crap, and expect more.....someday...

Code name "Hercules"? nice one XD because of alex being Zeus

2055228 You don't know how bad I want to give you the internet right now. :rainbowkiss:

How is this P.O.S still getting favs.......

Comment posted by Fate is Manic deleted Oct 4th, 2013
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