Pinkie is everyone's favorite party pony right? Well maybe not. Maybe she is her favorite party pony.
A one shot I had to get out and into words. No Cupcakes I promise.
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Oh My God.
This made me cry.
Oh My God.
I did not cry to this please tell me why I am not It's not right I think
1359208 There's nothing wrong with it, it's just the way we work sometimes. I can see something and think it's funny, but just not laugh. The same goes for this story. It's very sad, and I think that the author did a great job, I just didn't cry.
As for this story, I think the author did a great job. The only problem I have is that you messed up on the lyrics a bit.
When you're rife with devastation
There's a simple explanation:
You're a toymaker's creation
Trapped inside a crystal ball
And whichever way he tilts it
Know that we must be resilient
We won't let him break our spirits
As we sing our silly song
When I was a little filly, a galloping blaze overtook my city
So they shipped me off to the orphanage. Said, "ditch those roots if you wanna fit in"
So I dug one thousand holes and cut a rug with orphan foals
Now memories are blurred, and their faces are obscured, but I still know the words to this song
Other than that, very short but well done IMO. FiW FTW!
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Thank you all for the comments. I made lyrics different on purpose to fit a more "human" state. And to show a little dark side.
Dammit man, I'm too happy for feels right now.
This was masterfully done, I love it.
Go, take your drill that can pierce the heavens and make your way into the feature box!
This....This is brilliant. I may just have to write a story about a human version of a character thinking their a pony...
You, Sir/Madame, Earn five crying Pinkie's.
This was pretty good. There were a few spelling errors, but all in all a good story. And also very sad. I didn't cry, but still. Feels.
The Sadness which plagues one's mind, is made up for only in Insanity.
1359208 I didn't cry either. Aspergers. I have no emotions for most stories.
This is messed son.
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? Please explain ?
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A story about how the entire world of Equestria is all contained within the mind of a girl named Pinkie Pie. That's some Tommy Westphall shit right there.
Also, it's a bit unrealistic. From your characterisation, she wasn't unloved, she wasn't miserable or depressed, people didn't shun her due to some disfigurement or what have you. All that happened is: her parents died. Noone is that fragile. If she saw her parents die in a grizzly, horrible, slow, painful death, you might have something...but they didn't.
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I can see your point. Your opinion is your opinion.
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Wow, you're a condescending prick, aren't you.
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Umm, no. I just meant your opinion is your own and I can see your points about areas for improvement being in need of attention on future works. If I insulted you in any way or angered you with my use of words somehow I do apologize.
I enjoyed this, I didn't cry, but this was still really good
so she made up equestria in 13 years?
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It is amazing what the mind can do.
Omg I love it!!! I didn't cry but I had a ton of feels for my favorite party pony!!!!!
