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Fate is Manic


Pinkie is everyone's favorite party pony right? Well maybe not. Maybe she is her favorite party pony.

A one shot I had to get out and into words. No Cupcakes I promise.

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Comments ( 22 )

Oh My God.

This made me cry.

Oh My God.

I did not cry to this please tell me why I am not It's not right I think

1359208 There's nothing wrong with it, it's just the way we work sometimes. I can see something and think it's funny, but just not laugh. The same goes for this story. It's very sad, and I think that the author did a great job, I just didn't cry.

As for this story, I think the author did a great job. The only problem I have is that you messed up on the lyrics a bit.

When you're rife with devastation
There's a simple explanation:
You're a toymaker's creation
Trapped inside a crystal ball

And whichever way he tilts it
Know that we must be resilient
We won't let him break our spirits
As we sing our silly song

When I was a little filly, a galloping blaze overtook my city
So they shipped me off to the orphanage. Said, "ditch those roots if you wanna fit in"
So I dug one thousand holes and cut a rug with orphan foals
Now memories are blurred, and their faces are obscured, but I still know the words to this song
Other than that, very short but well done IMO. FiW FTW!

Thank you all for the comments. I made lyrics different on purpose to fit a more "human" state. And to show a little dark side.

Dammit man, I'm too happy for feels right now.

This was masterfully done, I love it.

Go, take your drill that can pierce the heavens and make your way into the feature box!

This....This is brilliant. I may just have to write a story about a human version of a character thinking their a pony...

You, Sir/Madame, Earn five crying Pinkie's. :pinkiesad2::pinkiesad2::pinkiesad2::pinkiesad2::pinkiesad2:

This was pretty good. There were a few spelling errors, but all in all a good story. And also very sad. I didn't cry, but still. Feels. :fluttercry:

The Sadness which plagues one's mind, is made up for only in Insanity.

1359208 I didn't cry either. Aspergers. I have no emotions for most stories.

This is messed son.


A story about how the entire world of Equestria is all contained within the mind of a girl named Pinkie Pie. That's some Tommy Westphall shit right there.

Also, it's a bit unrealistic. From your characterisation, she wasn't unloved, she wasn't miserable or depressed, people didn't shun her due to some disfigurement or what have you. All that happened is: her parents died. Noone is that fragile. If she saw her parents die in a grizzly, horrible, slow, painful death, you might have something...but they didn't.

I can see your point. Your opinion is your opinion.


Wow, you're a condescending prick, aren't you.


Umm, no. I just meant your opinion is your own and I can see your points about areas for improvement being in need of attention on future works. If I insulted you in any way or angered you with my use of words somehow I do apologize.

I enjoyed this, I didn't cry, but this was still really good

so she made up equestria in 13 years?:pinkiesad2:


It is amazing what the mind can do.

Omg I love it!!! I didn't cry but I had a ton of feels for my favorite party pony!!!!! :pinkiesmile::pinkiehappy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiesad2::fluttercry::ajsleepy::applecry:

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