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LunaScribbles


I’m just some dude who loves ponies the same way a lot of people do... Wait, you like them 'how much' now?

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[EDIT: March 3, 2019 Changed the title from "The Diary of the Pink Mare" to "Pinkie's Journal". Also needed to fix some grammatical errors. Sorry about that.]

Pinkie Pie. A name beloved by many ponies in Ponyville. She makes parties and makes everyone happy. She doesn't stop for reason...

It was a depressing time for the planet known as Earth. Germany took control of Poland, France surrendered, Russia was having tough times, South Pacific Islands like Manchuria, India, and the Philippine Islands were invaded by the Imperial Japanese soldiers, and the screams of the numerous people were heard throughout World War II.

A soldier serving the Allied Forces during the Normandy Landings was killed after they had gotten past German defenses. Though he had died, he was given another chance at life; to leave the depressing time and go in to a more colorful life. Specifically in a pinkish color in the form of a pink mare.

All is revealed when Rainbow Dash decides to pull a prank on that same day by sneaking up on her as a joke during the date of her birth... the date of his death.

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ƬĦЄ ҒЄЄ˩Ƨ!!! ƬĦЄƳ βƲЯИ!!!

Very good! More please.

All I can say is...Bravo. The Feels are reals...Bravo...bravo...

The feels, man... The Feeels. That was very well done.

There were some technical errors to note; punctuation, tense swapping, grammar errors, but nothing that gets in the way of enjoying this sad tale.

This is the type of story that just begs for a sequel. It's also an interesting way to incorporate Pinkie's mannerisms into a non-traditional HiE fic. 8/10

First off, great job! Like other people have said here, this story really brings out the feels!

Also, I thought it would be revealed at the end that Rainbow Dash was James.

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Thank you for the compliment!

And we won't know who James is truly yet... :raritywink: We'll find out soon enough once I finish writing this story's sequel.

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You're welcome! And I'll be looking forward to the sequel!

what happened to the second one
edit: great story for a history nerd you got everything right
cheers

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Thank you! The second one is still in production. I'm flattered that you thought it was good! I even got a history teacher and my history buff friends to help me out! Please do share the story to your friends!

I decided to give this one another read after I saw the sequel was posted, and I noticed a few relatively minor nitpicks:

Birthday: June 6, 1002 A.B.(After Banishment)

Luna/NMM's return takes place on the 1000th year after her Banishment, so pinkie should've been born 16+ years before that (ie, if she's 18 by the series' premiere, then she should've been born on 982 AB)

and held the book in her hands.

Since this doesn't have the "anthro" that I assume they're quadrupedal ponies, so this should be "hooves".

Birthday: May 3, 1925 A.D. (After Death)

AD means "Anno Domini", see: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Anno_Domini

Birthday: June 6, 1002 A.B.(After Banishment)

April 15, 1008

See above after my first quote.

These are relatively minor issues, and I hope this didn't come across as too pedantic, I just intended this as constructive criticism.

what happened to the other sequel?

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Bruh, that comment was three years ago...
That's commitment

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Either that or I just remembered the password to my account three years later, lol.

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