Pinkamena Diane Pie

by Fate is Manic

Inside of the Happiness

"Has she changed any?"

"I am afraid not."

"Is she showing any signs of violent behavior?"

"No she is still in a deeply depressed state. She still talks of having these friends and living in a city of 'Ponyville'. These friends she has are all the same ones she described on your last visit. Two 'Unicorns', Twilight Sparkle and Rarity, Two 'Pegasi', Fluttershy and Rainbow Dash, and an 'Earth Pony' named Applejack. She still insists that she is a pony named Pinkie Pie. We believe this is related to her parents death. This is just her way of coping."

"Will she every come out of it?"

"No, I am afraid that she has slipped deep into this reality and believes in it wholeheartedly. If she were to leave it now the shock would kill her."

As the pair approached the large window a single tear escaped from the woman. The window becomes ever closer and with each step she takes more tears come until she stares through the window at the sight inside. A girl of about twenty lies on a hospital bed staring at the ceiling, her mouth moving as if she is talking to the empty room.

"Can I go and see her?"

"Yes, you can talk with her until it is time to feed her."

The woman walked into the room gently shutting the door behind her. She approached the girl and barely held back the tears as she remembered the fun loving party planner that her niece had once been. The little hyper girl that would ask to help her 'Auntie Cake' with planning a wedding.

"Hey Auntie Cake! How are you doing?"

The woman smiled softly at her niece's nickname for her aunt. "Hello my Little Silly how are you?"

"You remembered my nickname Auntie Cake! It is so good to see you. Have you talked to Twilight lately? I hear she wants a dozen of your best muffins for Derpy's birthday party. I planned it and trust me it is going to be the Biggest Bestest Birthday Bash! Don't tell anypony but I finally helped Dashie create those multi-couloured clouds that we are going to use for the HAPPY BIRTHDAY DERPY HOOVES banner!"

"I'm sure it will be a great party. I expect nothing less from my Little Silly Willy Niece Diane Pine."

"Auntie, you know I like you to call me Pinkie if you are using my real name. Well I have to go, I still need to hang up the streamers!"

Diane's eyes returned to their clouded state and moved their empty gaze over to the ceiling. The woman began to cry softly next to her niece's bed. She leaned down and placed a kiss on the girl's head before taking an all too familiar seat next to the hospital bed. Then she began the lullaby that she had sang to the girl for every night since the fire.

When you're rife with devastation
There's a simple explanation:
You're a toy maker's creation
Trapped inside a crystal ball

And whichever way he tilts it
Know that we must be resilient
We won't let them break our spirits
As we sing our silly song

The woman began to cry rather loudly at the finish of the song. The doctor tapped on the glass signalling that the visit was over. As she left she could hear the girl singing the song she had ended early. The girl softly sang as the woman left and tears began to flow from the girl's eyes.

When you're rife with devastation
There's a simple explanation:
You're a toymaker's creation
Trapped inside a crystal ball

And whichever way he tilts it
Know that we must be resilient
We won't let them break our spirits
As we sing our silly song

When I was a little Silly, a raging blaze overtook my city
So they shipped me off to the orphanage. Said, "ditch those roots if you wanna fit in"
So I dug one thousand holes and filled them all with orphan fools now
Memories are blurred, and their faces are obscured, but I still, know the words to this song

A little girl of no more than seven runs to a woman on a cell phone with a clip board frantically running about fixing little things. The little girl giggles at her auntie's worry.

"Don't worry Auntie Cake everything is perfect. But, I would include more streamers OOOHHHH and maybe some SPARKLES!"

The woman ended her call and smiled. She walked over to the little one kneeling to be eye level with her.

"You really think its perfect?"

"Of course, no-one makes parties like my Auntie Cake!"

The little girl gave a wide grin showing off her missing front teeth. The woman simply laughed and hugged the little one.

"Your right my Little Silly, it is perfect. Now how about we go out for ice cream?"

"ICE CREAM!" The little girl's face was invaded by a smile so wide stretched from ear to ear.

As the two exited the building the woman's phone rang.

"Ma'm I am sorry to have to tell you this but there has been a fire....."

The woman dropped her phone as tears began to fall from her cheeks and onto the asphalt. She looked to the little one beside her.

"Whats wrong Auntie?"

The woman keeled down to be at eye level with the little girl before hugging her tightly.

"Auntie......I.......can't.........breath!"

The woman released the girl and looked her in the eyes.

"Diane, we need to talk........your Mommy and Daddy have been caught in a really bad accident."

"What happened?"

"Well, Mommy and Daddy's bakery had a little fire."

"Mommy and Daddy are ok right?"

The tears began to fall freely form the woman's face once again. The little girl understood what her Auntie was trying to say. She had talked to a friend who's mommy died last year. The little one then began to cry as much as her Auntie. The two stayed in that parking lot like that, just holding each other and letting their tears fall.

Comments

[ThePinkiePieEffect]

Oh My God.

This made me cry.

Oh My God.

[RainbowDragon]

I did not cry to this please tell me why I am not It's not right I think

[DarkestAutumn]

1359208 There's nothing wrong with it, it's just the way we work sometimes. I can see something and think it's funny, but just not laugh. The same goes for this story. It's very sad, and I think that the author did a great job, I just didn't cry.

As for this story, I think the author did a great job. The only problem I have is that you messed up on the lyrics a bit.

When you're rife with devastation
There's a simple explanation:
You're a toymaker's creation
Trapped inside a crystal ball

And whichever way he tilts it
Know that we must be resilient
We won't let him break our spirits
As we sing our silly song

When I was a little filly, a galloping blaze overtook my city
So they shipped me off to the orphanage. Said, "ditch those roots if you wanna fit in"
So I dug one thousand holes and cut a rug with orphan foals
Now memories are blurred, and their faces are obscured, but I still know the words to this song
Other than that, very short but well done IMO. FiW FTW!

[Fate is Manic]

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Thank you all for the comments. I made lyrics different on purpose to fit a more "human" state. And to show a little dark side.

[BlackMuffin]

Dammit man, I'm too happy for feels right now.

[Tamara Bloodhoof]

This was masterfully done, I love it.

[YetAnotherBrony]

Go, take your drill that can pierce the heavens and make your way into the feature box!

[Belial]

This....This is brilliant. I may just have to write a story about a human version of a character thinking their a pony...

You, Sir/Madame, Earn five crying Pinkie's.

[Weeping Pegasus]

This was pretty good. There were a few spelling errors, but all in all a good story. And also very sad. I didn't cry, but still. Feels.

[Purgatory]

The Sadness which plagues one's mind, is made up for only in Insanity.

[Sliverfish]

1359208 I didn't cry either. Aspergers. I have no emotions for most stories.

[BlackWidower]

This is messed son.

[Fate is Manic]

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? Please explain ?

[BlackWidower]

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A story about how the entire world of Equestria is all contained within the mind of a girl named Pinkie Pie. That's some Tommy Westphall shit right there.

Also, it's a bit unrealistic. From your characterisation, she wasn't unloved, she wasn't miserable or depressed, people didn't shun her due to some disfigurement or what have you. All that happened is: her parents died. Noone is that fragile. If she saw her parents die in a grizzly, horrible, slow, painful death, you might have something...but they didn't.

[Fate is Manic]

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I can see your point. Your opinion is your opinion.

[BlackWidower]

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Wow, you're a condescending prick, aren't you.

[Fate is Manic]

1410301

Umm, no. I just meant your opinion is your own and I can see your points about areas for improvement being in need of attention on future works. If I insulted you in any way or angered you with my use of words somehow I do apologize.

[Void Mystic]

I enjoyed this, I didn't cry, but this was still really good

[Mineingcreeper11]

so she made up equestria in 13 years?

[Fate is Manic]

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It is amazing what the mind can do.

[Random Hooves]

Omg I love it!!! I didn't cry but I had a ton of feels for my favorite party pony!!!!!