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2wingo


I'm already on FF.net, might as well be here too.

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Crossover with the "Star Wars" Universe.

A Mandalorian warrior tells his tale as he dies in an Equestrian hospital.

May or may not tie-in to other stories I'll write in the future.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 15 )

I have no idea why this has picked up four down votes with no comments. Tho the lack of comments is no surprise.
Admittedly it is a little odd for a one shot, however looked at as a possible lead in for a longer story it does quite well.

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Yeah, It's been almost a year since I've written anything, so I'm a little off my game.

Comment posted by Commissar Derpy Hooves deleted Oct 10th, 2014

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Almost certainly, though at this point I can't say when.

I regret not reading this sooner ner vod. One minor issue is that you should write out numbers, six instead of 6. More professional.

As for Jin Cabura. I am both greatly honored and disappointed. Honored that he got a mention in this and disappointed that it was done so without my knowledge. As he is a character of my invention, you should have asked to use him or, at the very least, notified me that he was being mentioned. I would have gladly allowed you to mention him and provided any information as to his background.

Regardless, I thoroughly enjoyed this.

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I apologize, al'verde. Unreservedly. At the the time I wrote this, I was under the impression that Jin Cabura already existed in the Star Wars Expanded Universe. The name was mentioned on Wookieepedia, though it's gone now.

5167444 Me'ven? I never expected that the name would be mentioned there. I made it up along with everything about him. I have only mentioned the name on my profile page and only once more on another thread. Unless someone else came up with the name too, which I find hard to believe, I'm not sure how it would have gotten there.

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Elek. It was probably just someone who read about him and thought it would be fun to add him to the site. That's the trouble with wikis, after all, anyone can modify them.

5169215 Just one more reason not to trust wikis. Not always reliable information as it is. I prefer the printed and published material for all my information.

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A lesson I won't soon forget, al'verde. Once again, I apologize for my lack of diligence.

5169258 All is forgiven ner vod.

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I kind of want to do my own Mandalorian commando in Equestria story now. Advice/help?

Awesome story. Sequel please?

I saw this a few years back, and I must say, you did fantastic work with this, blending everything together with the history and spiritual believes of the Mandalorians. Wonderful work.

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