Out of all the creatures called Changelings in the world their is only one species that is true to the phrase adapt to survive and I woke up as one of them.
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Pls do continue. That manga is awesome this crossover looks promising.
Holy... calm down dear author you need to show your story not tell it. The pacing is way too fast and the story in general have too little details... essentially what made RE: monster such a bad story. The grammar could have some work but it is still readable however if you do not intend to add more details for the sake of having the story appear as a journal may I suggest that you gloss it out a bit more. By that I mean you could simply write about Mayor events and it's end results without going into much details about what actually happens with some comments from our protagonist.
The reson for this is that the parts that we want more information about is too short (your story needs to be fleshed out essentially) but as it is currently written it is almost written as if in a haste and is meant to be glossed over which makes the story boring whenever you attempt to slow it down from it's own excitement to shove it's story down your throat. What im trying to say is that you really should not follow the way RE: monster was written but rather write it in one of two ways: either slow down the thempo and flesh out the story more (which would in my opinion be the better option), or remove some more details since no one wries every single thing that happens every day in a jornal.
The current pacing where the story tries to be a thing in between simply makes it apear awkward and unlike RE: monster you do not have an wiki page and manga to refer to in order to barely pass as a story (a poor excuse considering how badly written it is) so you should really not follow it's structure.
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I wish you well and hope you have a good day
Why does this story only have an anthro tag?
7123678 I have no idea what other tag I should put.
So what happened now?
7196864 The alicorn's and Discord happened forcing a loss and retreat.
7197295 ok and the mane six?
7197298 did not do much then again they just in case the rainbow power was necessary.
7197365 ok
When the next chapter going to be?
7221832 it's gonna take a bit but I'm almost done.
7222008 ok.
Corrupt.
Make is seem like your Curing but "Corrupt". Like say; In order to 'cure' I need to add a different corruption strand to consume it, but that strand leaves little Corruption-Over-Time cells that mix into it's hosts muscle points to grow later.
7358633 that is close to what I was thinking about it
7358715 and that is?
7360745 you will see soon
7360759 ok then.
Cure. No need to be a jerk and a bastard. But Corruption is not easily cured. Only by consuming with something else can you guarantee a full heal. The weak strand of Corruption could be slightly enhanced immune system and slightly better senses.
7362690 Funny thing is ether way it's still a step up for Shining armor. The whole choice effects how much Drasa gains from saving him.
So what will happen?
Where the other two mare?
How did shining survive drasa attack that goe though he heart?
7416925 the wound was about the size of a dime and surviving a wound like that is possible with quick thinking.
7416724 Which other two? I was sure I had everyone accounted for.
7417056 on chapter two?
7419060 oh thanks for pointing that out I though I changed that when I decided to turn it to three.
7419077 that okay, so what will happen on the next chapter of subject to evolution?
7419083 A new discovery
7420709 like what?
honestly with how strong he is suppose to be and implied he keeps getting knocked out and captured by people who seem weaker then him
Wall of Text. Please space...
Where can I read Re: monster?
7990373 Manga or Light Novel?
7990634
Wait, so it's NOT a My Little Pony fanfic?
8516648
no it is not
Cant wait till the next chapter.