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DoomedPonie


Somepony who tried to get on this site before, only to be foiled by the fact I didn't have strong wifi back then... And a major shipper of Anon x pony and Spike x anypony.

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'They say my kind are horrible beings, monsters, predetors, and even terrorists. Well, they're the villians.' -Tristan Cooper, Evolved.

A classic set up of cursed comic con merch. A fan of the [Prototype] series ends up in the Everfree Forest with powers of unimaginable potential.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 13 )

oke...:trixieshiftright:
good start but keep it up.:pinkiehappy:

so many spelling mistakes, please. Find a proofreader. Ill do it gladly if you proofread one of my books

I thing this is the first [OC evolved] story that is not tagged [sex] and [romance]. Congratulations.

8632448
Thank you mate. I have seen the other, but I still wouldn't do it for fear of it just becoming tentacle hentai.

8632452
I am not saying you should. Just saying this seems to be the first of those stories without those tags. Its just refresing.

Put spaces in between paragraphs it’ll look better I promise

8632809
Mine isn’t but it is a displaced story

I haven't read the story yet I will say one thing you forgot the F in transformation still going to read it I love prototype stories

I just finished reading and I got to say this has a lot of potential just do a little bit of spell check and you'll be a okay. This has the potential of being a very very good story

Amazing, can't wait for more!

Get a proof reader to fix your spelling errors and incorrect word choices. Otherwise good story.

Comment posted by Status L deleted Jan 17th, 2023
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