'They say my kind are horrible beings, monsters, predetors, and even terrorists. Well, they're the villians.' -Tristan Cooper, Evolved.
A classic set up of cursed comic con merch. A fan of the [Prototype] series ends up in the Everfree Forest with powers of unimaginable potential.
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good start but keep it up.
so many spelling mistakes, please. Find a proofreader. Ill do it gladly if you proofread one of my books
I thing this is the first [OC evolved] story that is not tagged [sex] and [romance]. Congratulations.
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Thank you mate. I have seen the other, but I still wouldn't do it for fear of it just becoming tentacle hentai.
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I am not saying you should. Just saying this seems to be the first of those stories without those tags. Its just refresing.
Put spaces in between paragraphs it’ll look better I promise
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Will do. Thank you.
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Mine isn’t but it is a displaced story
I haven't read the story yet I will say one thing you forgot the F in transformation still going to read it I love prototype stories
I just finished reading and I got to say this has a lot of potential just do a little bit of spell check and you'll be a okay. This has the potential of being a very very good story
Amazing, can't wait for more!
Get a proof reader to fix your spelling errors and incorrect word choices. Otherwise good story.