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DeathsShade

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Discord enlists the help of a long forgotten friend with a grudge against the princesses. This is the story of how old actions have consequences and can lead to true Regret.
The Elements, The Princesses maybe even Discord Himself will learn that when you give a Human magic and Happiness that they will do anything to hold on to it
Or at least it's memory.

(starts during the season 2 opener)
rating is subject to change
Chapters (2)
On Hiatus Published: Mar 8th, 2015 Download
7,475 words
Comments ( 27 )
Pickle Tickler
Pickle Tickler #1 · Mar 8th, 2015 · · · Lost Soul ·
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It's a little rough around the edges, but I like it and would love to see more!

BronyofMeddlers
BronyofMeddlers #2 · Mar 8th, 2015 · · · Lost Soul ·
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Hmm, not bad. Very interesting.

Crescent Nebula
Crescent Nebula #4 · Mar 9th, 2015 · · · Lost Soul ·
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Hmm something something evil Hmm something something darkside Hmm something something 2 chapter dorkforty.files.wordpress.com/2012/12/darth-sidious-good.jpg

Asashi - Dark Fist Inari
Asashi - Dark Fist Inari #5 · Mar 9th, 2015 · · · Lost Soul ·
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I already have a bad feeling from the majority of this chapter alone that this guy is just another spineless pansy-ass.

DeathsShade
DeathsShade #6 · Mar 10th, 2015 · · · Lost Soul ·
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5715971 I hope that I can prove you wrong.

The next chapter is now in the works and is about 3000 words long at the moment thanks to what i had already and me spending my lunch breaks writing.
It is mostly build up if my plans pull through Chapter 3 should be when things begin to set off.

Captain Brony
Captain Brony #7 · Mar 19th, 2015 · · · Lost Soul ·
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Like and tracked, next chapter I might Fav it.

Crescent Nebula
Crescent Nebula #9 · Mar 27th, 2015 · · · Those Who Walk in the Light ·
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Oh Chrissy it's so adorable when you scheme terrible little plans

Shadow-Dancer
Shadow-Dancer #10 · Apr 26th, 2015 · · · Lost Soul ·
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interesting but who the hell did this man lose because all I know is that two are dead supposedly by the two sisters but no way to get a connection to the dead other then that interesting.

Asashi - Dark Fist Inari
Asashi - Dark Fist Inari #11 · May 27th, 2015 · · · Those Who Walk in the Light ·
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Keep it coming man, it's taking you too long.

Psycho Pwny
Psycho Pwny #12 · May 28th, 2015 · · · Those Who Walk in the Light ·
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Awesome! I'm looking forward to the wedding.

doctor_n
doctor_n #13 · Jun 27th, 2015 · · · Those Who Walk in the Light ·
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Really liking this, keep it up!

BBkat
BBkat #14 · Jul 7th, 2015 · · · Lost Soul ·
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"You know Sandro, it's like in all those old stories, the ones that really meant something" the spirit of chaos took on a suspiciously Irish accent "full of darkness and danger they were, and sometimes you didn't want to know the end. Because how could the end be happy, how could the world go back to the way it was when so much bad happened. But in the end, it's only a passing thing, this shadow, even darkness must pass. A new day will come. And when the sun shines it will shine out the clearer. Those were the stories that stayed with you, that meant something, even if you were too small to understand why. But I think, Sandro, I do understand. I know now. Folk in those stories had lots of chances of turning back only they didn't. Because they were holding on to something."

Discord's a fan of Lord of the Rings? :p

Noticed multiple spots where you forgot the capitalize the start of a sentence, such as here-

"well not anything that you wouldn't be able to reverse anyway" He added as an afterthought

Kage no Brony
Kage no Brony #16 · Aug 28th, 2015 · · · Lost Soul ·
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"I know, but when one follows the path of the avenger they should dig two graves,

Two graves, two sisters. This dude's got class. :moustache::trollestia:


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Dude, you stopped reading halfway through, didn't you? It's said at least twice!

Any good that this world had left in it died with my daughters.

What I did to myself so that I could live with them forever, so that I could watch my daughters grow up

platogkrone
platogkrone #17 · Sep 30th, 2015 · · · Lost Soul ·
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Lost Soul





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Rocka Leone
Rocka Leone #19 · Feb 7th, 2016 · · · Those Who Walk in the Light ·
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More, More, MORE, mmmooooorrrrrrreeeee!!!!!! :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

Blaze the draconic mage
Blaze the draconic mage #20 · Apr 8th, 2016 · · · Those Who Walk in the Light ·
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This story is sad yet intresting make more please

Vigriff
Vigriff #24 · Jan 19th, 2018 · · · Those Who Walk in the Light ·
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Shame that it seems to be a dead fic.

Pete100
Pete100 #25 · Mar 11th, 2021 · · · Lost Soul ·
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The figure was an abnormality; he stood tall, taller than most creature except the Others, who lived so far north that even the windigos would die from the sheer cold of the place.

Others?

He needed a way to make his friend see things from his perspective, after all eve if he could defeat Celestia and Luna and the element bearers on his own(well the elements might has well be ticked off that list as he had already stolen and hidden those away) having someone on his side immune to the power of the elements of harmony and willingly.

So he just want to use him?

"And what could they take from me? my life? that would be a mercy" he reached up a pulled down his hood, breaking the enchantment concealing his visage from Discord.

"Look at me Discord, look at what I sacrificed, What I did to myself so that I could live with them forever, so that I could watch my daughters grow up, So that I could be there for them"

"I've got nothing left to lose" His last words were barely a whisper.

What happened to his face?

Discord's response was to reach out and using the claws of his feline created a small cut on his avian hand, before firmly grasping Sandro's extended Hand.

Did he make some sort of blood oath?

Pete100
Pete100 #26 · Mar 11th, 2021 · · 1 · Those Who Walk in the Light ·
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If one were to look at Princess Celestia as she listened to the final few visitors to that days court they would find her an unsettled mare. This was a fact the Canterlot nobility were more than happy to take advantage of, and in that week’s day court alone Celestia had stopped nearly double the normal amount of political schemes from the Canterlot nobility.

How did they take advantage of it?

The disgruntled unicorns, knowing better than to argue with the pony that controlled the sun, left quietly though that did not prevent them from giving each other their fiercest glares as they left (which would have been hilarious to watch for any non-pony to watch as all it accomplished was to make them look like they were pouting foals) while the rest of the day court ponies streamed out behind them, sans those of the royal guard.

I feel like even if I was a pony I would probably find it funny.

“But Spike, Without the Elements Princess Celestia might think that me and the girls can’t help protect Equestria from Discord, and if she thinks we can’t help then she might not send us a message, and then if she realizes she needs help then she might not be able to send a letter, and if we don’t come and help then she might get really angry or disappointed with me and send me back to magical kindergarten.”

How does spike deal with this bullsh*t?

“Hiya Twilight I've got a package for you from someone called Anarchy Bringer” she began laying said large package on the ground in front of her, “he really wanted me to give this to you, he said it would cause all sort of fun, and then he gave me a whole plate of caramel kiwi muffins they were delicious”

I know where this is going.

The only thing that could go wrong now is if Discord miraculously showed up right in the middle of the wedding ceremony and revealed her deception to Celestia and how likely was it that that would happen.

She just had to jinx it didn't she.

Wait, is that really gonna happen?

“Twilight do you have any Daring Doo book? I really, really love them but the book store in Cloudsdale only has the ones that I've already got.” Twilight was taken aback momentarily. Did Rainbow just ask her for a book? An actual proper book with words? Paranoia instantly took over and Twilight found herself scanning Rainbow with every spell she knew that could identify fakes.

She has that? That could come in handy.

Now and for the past several months, Lorekeep had been reoccupied in the name of two beings united in their desire to bring low those who had wronged them.

Lorekeep?

He lifted his right hand to his ...chin? it was impossible to tell thanks to his magic but it seemed like that was what he was doing "It must be extremely painful to the spirit, to have the very fabric of your being shredded continually and yet be unable to die, It must almost have been as painful as what I feel every day."

What does his magic have to do with touching his chin?

Discord seemed to accept this while writing off the last part as just something his friend would deal with in his own way" Your messing with necromancy, the last thing I heard you'd sworn to never use that black magic again after what happened the last time."

?

Nitro19
Nitro19 #27 · Aug 19th, 2023 · · · Those Who Walk in the Light ·
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Nice story, shame its dead, would like to see more of it.

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