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Stormbringer


I write romance with intimacies, not clop. To my readers, I quote The Bard: “We who prologue-like your humble patience pray, Gently to hear, kindly to judge, our play.” (Henry V)

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Okay... that's, not how I expected that subplot to go at all...

Also, Sunshine? Sunshine and Rainbow? Geez, I'm having Fallout: Equestria flashbacks.

Nice fanfic, I didn't expect Scootaloo and Silver Spoon to get together, but I'm not complaining.

Very beautiful story! However the personalities of both Rainbow and Twilight just seem "off" Twilight is more frantic and less "calm" while Rainbow wouldn't be as mature as she is portrayed in this story

7289693 Time and love can do things to ponies.

I am in a mess of tears :fluttercry: :raritycry: :raritydespair: and i blame you stormbringer

7310634 I've been the reason for many tears. Usually for the wrong reasons! :raritywink:

7289693 Twilight calm? Lesson Zero, she's a neurotic wreck at times. And finding your center and finding somepony to love will mature a pony.

I laughed so much at the 'I'm a Unicorn' part I thought I almost woke up my parents!!!:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

7377859 It's the least I can do for such a great story! XP

Just when I was wondering about the dream... kind of dissapoint it.

8049631 Sorry, no. At least not biologically.

Bet: the father is time turner hooves

"Beg pardon?” said Rainbow.

Rainbow said that?

"Beg pardon?” said Rainbow.

I have to say again..

RAINBOW said that?!:derpyderp2:

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Um Scootaloo is a filly, Rainbow had a colt.

7289693
It has been 6 months of marriage later, that will change a lot for a pony.

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“Beg pardon?” said Rainbow.

She wears dresses and makeup , she has changed a lot since getting married.

“I thought as much,” said Twilight sadly kissing Rainbow, “I’ll give you what you want. Goodbye My Love, remember your wife always loved you.”

There was a flash of magic and then on the lawn was now a grave, the Headstone read:

TWILIGHT DASH
SHE COULDN’T LIVE WITHOUT RAINBOW’S LOVE
AMICITIA MAGIA EST

Rainbow fell to her knees, she could see the soul of Twilight ascending to Elysium. Rainbow was wanting to die as well.

Rainbow that's rough

“You aren’t going to test her are you?” asked Rainbow kidding and winking at the princess.

“Are you never going to forgive me for that?” said the princess laughing at the question

.

NOPE

‘I’m so glad you’re here. Please take care of my mommy for me, I’ll never get the chance now. Tell her it’s not her fault, I’m not mad at her and I’ll always love her.”

Sunshine was taken aback, the time and description was exact. Could it have been the spirit of Storm Cloud giving his blessing to Scootaloo, and forgiveness to Rainbow? She never really believed in such things, but this was hard to discount.

You have magic in your world come on, it can't be that unbelievable particularly since you found Rainbow can use magic despite being a pegasi.

“That’s right,” said Rainbow, “the only thing special needs about you is your mother and I will have to start watching you closer.”

“Yes,” said Twilight, “kissing another filly, who ever heard of such a thing?”

“What happened to: ‘Do I have to like girls too’?” asked Rainbow.

LOL

In fact, Sweetie Belle was a little jealous Scoot’s levitation was much more advanced than her own. But not too jealous.

At lunch and recess, she was glad the CMC always hung out together, by hanging out with their friends, it wasn’t so obvious she and Scootaloo were trying to stay close. She was happy Scootaloo was paying as much attention to herself as well.

Cross race talents they happen.

“I’m sorry for this everypony,” said Filthy, “know she’s never been taught by myself or my wife to think like this. As I said, my wife’s sister Ruby is a mare-lover. And Ruby has always been a kind and loving pony to Diamond.

It’s funny looking at these docs made before episodes like “Crusaders of The Lost Mark” and know just how false the comment about DT’s Mom is

“How marvelous!” Exclaimed the princess, “I must meet my new niece.”

“You aren’t going to test her are you?” asked Rainbow kidding and winking at the princess.

“Are you never going to forgive me for that?” said the princess laughing at the question.

Rainbow has recovered better from that than how Shining recovered after all what Celestia did to him still gives him Nightmares

.....huh, ok. welp, aside from the (mind scarringly) cringy way RD and TS-D they address eachother, this fic is pretty good so far. Needs some work tho.
(Seriously? 'Unbelief'?)
Edit: i mean no offense, or to sound condescending, so apologies if i pissed you off.)

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