I write romance with intimacies, not clop. To my readers, I quote The Bard: “We who prologue-like your humble patience pray, Gently to hear, kindly to judge, our play.” (Henry V)
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This is great - can't stop smiling: "Royal Family Discount"
Why does part seven have nothing in it?
7291568 I was wondering the same thing.
On a different note, THIS WAS AMAZING!!
7291568 Yep, was wondering that too as well.
Still, aww, great ending, I loved this series.
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I just finished reading these three fanfics and wonderful is the only word that I can think of to say to them. Yes I found them to be a little on the rushed side but over all the plot was well done, charaxter development executed splendidly and the ending perfect. All in all this was a series that I can hold as one of the top I've ever read and look forward to seeing more of your works.
Thank you for taking this time to write these and posting them for us to read and enjoy. I hope to see more from you soon. Against thank you.
7292882 Humble thanks for your words for my poor work.
Stormbringer.
7292894 I only give credit where credit is due and I meant ever word
And now onto night mares!
7292894 'poor work' my thestral flank, your three stories here has touched a part that I had forgotten how to use right, so don't be calling work like this poor okay goglin king.
on a side note I still would like to know what Pinkie and Fluttershy were up to.
7296099 Read Loves Etude...
7296129 PM me the link please.
7297561 My humble thanks for your kind words,
I know it's necessary for the story, but it's odd that a problem with vaginal and uterine development would also involve the clitoris. Especially since the labia are apparently well formed. The labia and clitoris develop from the same embryonic cells, which are separate from the cells forming the vagina. Sorry, when I see nits I just have to pick them. I have a serious problem.
7303040 I found with my 14 years in military medicine that there can be all variations of birth defects. There are no set ways somethings go wrong.
And hey, it's a story.
7297561 um no offense, but what stories? You don't have any stories published
7311860 Maybe the stories they collected and likes.
7312479 ya, that could be what they meant
7303040 Plus Apple Bloom only has the Labia Majora not Minora. It's the Minora that is connected to the clitoral hood.
ok, this is lightly better. and it was a very good way to tie everything together. But it really took years to AJ and Rarity to get married, wow.
7396409 They were happy just living together.
7403095 oooh!
7403095 will there be more stories to this?
8051329 I have considered this complete. Perhaps if I can get the other series finished, I have a some idea of some spinoff vs a sequel.
Very sweet and romantic.
8054638 Thank you for your kind words.
This is my favorite series of mine (so far).
Dammit Storm...You freaked me out with Granny. I thought the worst for a moment.
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You know me, like to keep them guessing.
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Very true you cheeky little shit. Almost to the newest story now by the way!
Best STORY EVER
I REALLY LOVE THIS SHIP
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Many humble thanks.
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Your welcome
Great series my friend. I enjoyed reading them
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I am honored.
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Your welcome my friend
Spoiler warning
“Blessed are you at overcoming all your obstacles. You’re tired and weary, but the rest from your labors is at hoof. You’ve earned the greatest reward life can give you,” said Twilight.
“What’s that?” asked Daring Dash. She was imagining riches beyond measure. But what Twilight said next touched an emptiness deep inside her.
“Your soulmate,” said Twilight with a smile, “me, I’m yours forever, my beloved.”
Twilight changed form, she was now an immortal Alicorn but so was Rainbow.
This was foreshadowed in the second chapter of the first story
man this was just to good all 3 parts we're i do wish there was a part 4 to this but is ok good job on all of them
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Thanks for your kind words.
Okay, so i have one problem with your stories, not the plot, it's rushed but it's executed nicely, the characters don't seem to be out of character, and overall i love a good ScootaSpoon story.
Now the only problem i have is this:
I would like you to binge the Star Wars prequels, then read your stories, they should have similar dialogue, because my god you put that level of cringe in the conversations, seriously, Scoots and Rainbow are your stereotypical 'Tough Girls', and are less likely to sound as hopelessly romantic as you portray them. Twilight, while being highly educated, does not take three sentences to get a point across.
Hell, the prequels dialogue was cringy, but it flows decently, this dialogue does not, and needs some serious reworking.
Otherwise good story.
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Sorry about being rushed, although I really don't see it. In this type of story, I don't try to be deep literature but a nice story that's easy to read and doesn't lose the reader's attention. I save the depth for my actual published books.
But thanks for the comments and caring enough to respond.
even in this timeline granny smith doesn't die
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I thought it funny to make it look like she had passed on. "Now that she's not with us".
some say if you break a pinkie promise pinkie pie will hunt you down to the ends of the earth. because she knows EVERYTHING...
btw this is my second read-through
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I hope you re read it because you liked it. Thank you.
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I don't know about anyone else, but if I re-read/watch something then it's good. that's why the number of rewatches for "a new generation" is easily in the double digits
realistically I'll probably come back in a few months to re-read it again