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Hopeful Soul
I'm just some 29-year old dude from Canada hoping to become a screenplay writer one day. That's all.
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......You know this was going relatively fine until you turned it around with that whole Prim......I don't even know what to classify that as. It just made me feel horrible for reading some of this and I felt bad for AJ. I would have decked that lady if I saw something like that happen.
I mean it's not a bad idea in theory as there would be some humor if it's played for laughs, but there wasn't much to laugh at here. I mean she got her bass fixed, big Whoop, after this happened I'm amazed she didn't take Prim to court and sue her for all she's worth. That's what a sensible person would have done.
I honestly' don't know what else to say but this for Prim or atleast this version of Prim
But you did a story where the scumbag who violated the main character gets their comeuppance and main is given help. I was starting to think you're stories were incapable of showing such traits.
Rating changed to Mature. You're going to need to tone down the explicit content of this story if you want a Teen rating.
7281853 Ok, sorry
Nice story, a bit awkward, but you pull it off perfectly.
Loved this story, thanks for adding it!
Hmm, an interesting piece to say the least. I am one for the 'art-house' stories like these, but there are some ... issues that I can't quite place my finger on that bug me here. It may be some OOC use of Prim Hemline, and the mass inclusion of all the HuMane seven. I'm just not quite totally sure. Brain says; hey, not bad. Gut says: whoa not so fast.
So no up vote on this for now, but I'm not going to spit-roast and baste it. I am going to have to make a new bookshelf for 'Undecided.'
Good writing, and I hope to see more from you.
after reading a few of your fics im noticing that you have a fetish for ass!!! Your an ass man!!! I love it !! So am i !!! PLEASE PLEASE MAKE MORE RAUNCHY ASS FICS!!!
Im glad everything worked out in the end