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Stormbringer
I write romance with intimacies, not clop. To my readers, I quote The Bard: “We who prologue-like your humble patience pray, Gently to hear, kindly to judge, our play.” (Henry V)
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I'm very happy with what you write. I wounder what will happen next please update more on this story soon
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I hope to have The Derpy I Know And Love Volume 3: How Pinkie Got Her Groove Back out later today. Standby.
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I am going to have to keep reading. It is always good to see more PinkieDash influenced stories.
At the risk of sounding repetitive and also hoping not to reveal spoilers, I am still impressed by the elements of realism you bring to the pony world with your writing. Sure, our world would be a wonderful paradise if nothing adverse ever happened to anybody, but alas such is not the case. Our loved ones can get illnesses or be seriously injured. We can find ourselves the targets of prejudices based upon ignorance and confusion. People from previous relationships can unexpectedly reappear and attempt to wreak havoc upon our current relationships for reasons that are often irrational. These things happen to real people in the real world all too often. While I'll admit that the parts of the story where bad things are happening to the ponies may not be my favorite passages to read, I must also admit that they bring a feeling of realism to the story that many of us can relate to regardless of gender or any other categorical factors. This is one of the main qualities that I have noted that sets your stories apart from the average fandom sex fantasies and it is something that I consider admirable.
Furthermore, strictly from a writing perspective, a story about a perfect world full of perfect people where nothing ever happens would be immensely boring. "Once upon a time there were two happy people who fell in love and nothing ever went wrong so they lived happily ever after. The end." I may very well have just written the world's shortest fairy tale ever there. Nobody is going to be interested in reading a book like that, and they definitely are not going to pay for tickets to see the Broadway version. An interesting and entertaining story needs protagonists who have goals they want to achieve and adversities and adversaries that they must overcome to reach their goals. From everything I've read thus far of your writing, I think you have an excellent understanding of such concepts as well as a knack for the proper timing of such story elements. Again I must say well done and I look forward to reading more.
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Again, I blush at your praise.
Don't you try anything mr.
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We will see...
...he did it
that was intense. it almost made me cry which is high praise from me