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Sunset Shimmer has a nightmare where her friends abandon her because of a scandal that she never commit. However, she finds comfort from a person she least expected.

(Cover art by Cookie Encylopaedia)

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That was AMAZING!!!!!

That was such a cute story

This certainly echoes more than a few fan opinions on the IDW comics, let alone that particular comic

I Like how that comic was retconned as a dream, a lot

6990571
That idea came out of nowhere and this is how this story is here.

Some of the wording sucks. I want going to say anything but can you fix it?
"I didn't told you or anyone because I didn't wanted to worry you," Sunset Shimmer gave her a sad look.. That's just bad English. I didn't tell

Comment posted by RNBW deleted Jun 2nd, 2017

Eh, better way to deal with it than most. I can actually see this as canon.

6990589 I was being serious, I'm glad that's the idea this story was based off of, I didn't like how the Humane 5 acted in it, how they were so easily convinced into not believing their friend, it actually makes more sense that it is a nightmare that sunset had based on her fears.

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Agree with you. The comic was very ooc (out of character). I consider the comics, all of them, as non-canon.

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Don't forget to hit the like button. :twilightsmile:

I'm glad you liked it.

Comment posted by RNBW deleted Mar 6th, 2016

Now that was a nice read.

I'm glad the Anon-A-Miss thing was made into a nightmare rather than having actually happened. I haven't even read that issue of the comic (or any of them for that matter) and I consider it the textbook definition of Bad Christmas Special.

I'm really glad the comics aren't canon.

Thanks for this, I always love something short and sweet.

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You're welcome. You can check my other stories if you want.

Remember this?

Man, I should of asked you for more details. Great story by the way :twilightsmile:

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Yeah, I remember. Watcha think of the story? :rainbowkiss:

I love it! Because if you I now ship Sunset and Rainbow. :fluttercry: that is a good thing!

As soon as I read the title I thought "except than one time with Anon-a-miss :trollestia:" and it turns out to be a nightmare in this story. :rainbowlaugh:

And I love how the staff considered this story didn't need an Alternate Universe tag. :rainbowwild:

This was cute. I feel the narration could be better, but I have no idea why I feel that way nor how to improve it. I can however correct a few mistakes and typos.

A nightmare she never thought it would return.

A nightmare she never thought would return.

Her friends were... Abandoning her.

Her friends were... abandoning her.

'You don't belong here,' Sunset's stomach dropped just at hearing those words.

'You don't belong here.' Sunset's stomach dropped just hearing those words. (I'm not sure about this one)

The first nightmare began two days after the Fall Formall

The first nightmare began two days after the Fall Formal

poured the tasty liquid of lemonade into the cup.

'poured some into the cup' flows better.

"Sunset... Is that you?"

"Sunset... is that you?"

and quickly brushed her tears

and quickly brushed away her tears

Rainbow Dash wasn't 100% convinced

Rainbow Dash wasn't entirely convinced

She began rub her shoulder

She began to rub her shoulder

Comments;

"No. Being the Element of Loyalty means that I have to help you when you need it, so let me help you."

I always feel like the characters justifying their actions by "this is my Element" is off, and that's the case here as well. I feel like something like "I hate seeing you cry" would have been better.

"Thank you, Rainbow."

And then they kissed. :yay:

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Fixed some things. I hope you enjoy it. :yay:

And I don't like lesbian ships. See my blogs.

7438535 Yeah, I liked the changes.

And I don't like gay (or whatever the correct word for male/male is) ships so we're even!

I really liked this. It was heartwarming. :twilightsmile:

"I will never leave you behind," Rainbow softly whispered into her ear.

Uhh that will only last till anon-a-miss starts

Aww... I liked this story. :twilightsmile:

By the way, I can't leave another like, I left one when I first read this.:twilightsheepish:

Ahhhhh, loved it! Rainbow and Sunset are perfect. <3

Very caring and nice to watch.

Part of me does wonder if Anon-A-Miss was a long nightmare for Sunset with how it's never brought up again, the group acts out of character, and the small inconsistencies.

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That was the idea behind this fic. That the comic was a nightmare, and given the amount of Acussation Fics thrown, I wanted to do something that doesn't ends up demonizing the Rainbooms.

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