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Just trying to think on what to write *shrugs*

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Despite knowing each other since childhood, Rainbow Dash and Fluttershy aren't best friends. They're more than friends, they're sisters.

Not by blood, but from the heart.

(A one-shot collab with Harmony Pie. Also, dedicated to Quitty Pie)

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D'aww... Really loved the first meeting scene with Rainbow standing up to the bully and helping her sis in all but blood. And yeah, Harmony's a great author, perhaps one of my favorites on the site!

7131023
Darn right. She's awesome. :rainbowdetermined2:

Short, sweet and innocent. Impressive.

7131114 Yep, and this is coming from someone who normally reads things like Doctor Who crossovers.

7131139
Umm, I don't read Doctor Who crossovers.

YES!! It hath arrived!:pinkiehappy:

Also, you do know she not really my sister... right?:twilightsheepish:


Quitty Pie just started it for some reason because I was younger:derpytongue2:

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I know, but you called her big sis. Just like Fluttershy to Rainbow. :rainbowkiss:

Wow. It's all so cute! So amazingly cute! I think I'm happily dying from the cuteness!

:facehoof:7131145 I meant me, actually. My bad.

7131234
It's alright, dude.

7131264 Yeah, I notice I have a tendency to put my foot in my mouth, so to speak.:twilightblush:

The way you described how Fluttershy and Rainbow met reminds me of this fic of yours.

7131623
Yeah, kinda similar.

I think it'd be better if the title didn't reveal the 'twist'.
You write it very... 'Shippy', which might have made for an interesting twist ending, but I (correctly) assumed the title was telling the truth so it kind of ruined it.

7131971
I didn't meant a twist ending.

7131985 Well, I was saying I think it'd been better if you did make the ending a twist.
You're free to disagree, of course, but your intent doesn't change my opinion on what makes for a better story.

7132027
Understood. :twilightsmile:

This is a very sweet short story! :twilightsmile:

7131023

You... you really think that? Aww, thanks:heart:

kul

We need more friendshipping stories like this man. Or should I say, sistershipping?

7132424
Yes, sistershipping! I like it! :pinkiehappy: (not incest, of course)

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At least Rainbow scared the crab out of the bully.

7132506 That's right but still, it was a shocking moment that hurt my heart a bit...

7132510
I feel ya. It also happens to me, but when Rainbow is the victim.

I highly approve of this fanfiction.

GG/10, might read again.

I actually cried in the last act, when Rainbow Dash says she'll be always there for Fluttershy.:fluttercry:

I think you're the best Flutterdash writer I've ever read.:rainbowdetermined2:

"Hey!" she shouted, attracting their attention. She folded her arms, watching as the tallest, and presumably the leader, looked up in annoyance. "Yeah, what?"

Two people cannot speak in the same paragraph.

I LOVE FRIENDSHIPPING!!! :pinkiehappy:

Or, sister shipping? ? Oh whatever. ..
This is so warm.. I love it!! :heart::heart:

This is so sweet!^-^:raritystarry:
I WANT A SISTER! WHY CAN'T I HAVE A SISTER?! WHY?!:raritydespair:
please... I'm dying here....:fluttershyouch:

I loved it. 2 thumbs up.

Wow...this story was so nice.

I AM the 100th like for this story!:ajsmug:

Well... this beats my fanfiction and then some:facehoof:

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Hey, don't feel bad. Your story is still good. :twilightsmile:

And thanks for the fave. :yay:

7615262 A)Oh? Wait, which one? B)Thanks.

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A Friend in Need, of course. :pinkiesmile:

You're welcome. :scootangel:

Beautiful. Simply Beautiful. This is exactly how I see Rainbow Dash and Fluttershy's relationship. I love it! :heart::rainbowdetermined2::yay::heart:

BTW I heard those bullies went on trip... to the Rainbow Factory. No one has seen them since.

An adorable little fic. Great character writing, and a nice usage of classic tropes to set up the relationship. I will say that the short length of the fic meant said relationship lacked a bit of depth. I would've liked to see a little bit more dialogue to build the platonic relationship, but this is a relatively minor point.

Heartwarming all the same :).

Tears flooded Fluttershy’s eyes at this, but those tears were of joy and happiness.

This line is rather redundant. Joy is a synonym of happiness.

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Praise should go to Harmony Pie. She helped with the fic.

This is exactly how I see my best friend. We grew up together, close as peas in a pod, and we aren't related in any way, but she's every bit my little sister.

That was some adorable Flutterdash interaction

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