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What to do with my life now

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HOLY FUCK :D This was by far the most amazing story in the past 3 years. (Well close bonds was my first but this is second :3)


Its a good story and you nailed the comedy part. To be honest I would like to see a squeal maybe with him and Luna.

What do you think? Should I do more of these types of stories?

yes this was funny as hell!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:derpytongue2:

Yes more!!!!

Yup, continue this! Really well written.
And for all the new readers, you have to read the paste for the epilogue.

I dont understand why you chose to leave the epilogue out. It was very good written and too cute.

We demand this to continue, as it would make for a funny premise. Imagine Celestia's reaction to hearing he fucked an alicorn into the ground and continued after, though it would be funnier he got her pregnant too. with reinforcing his will over her as her master. ;)

Reforming her through lust and domination. Which if they learn of his special lasting they may both be roused and fealful of his rutting power.

6887714 I second this. I enjoyed the pastebin version more because of it.

Give us that preggo Twi fic too fam.

I left the epilogue out because at the time, I didn't feel it fit into the theme of the story and to leave this open for continuation, should I feel like it.

I actually have some really wacky ideas were I to continue this, but it's not getting as much attention as I hoped it would, so it'll probably remain a one-shot. I may convert and add the epilogue though, since everyone seems to like it so much.

And to posting that Twi story:


6889574 put it in the 'human in equestria' group or other such, certain groups may get more viewers. or a human on royalty group.

All I could imagine at the end was that he just turns into giantdad and does "well, what is it"

Humans are sex gods to ponies.
I like it!

I've always liked HiE stories that are accurate with the fact that most equines (hell, most creatures in general) generally don't last more than a minute or two.
I have to ask though, was the whole "20 seconds" thing really a joke to insult him, or had Luna/NMM actually never had a stallion last longer than that before?
(Luna and Celestia would no doubt be revered as the most attractive mares alive, so it wouldn't be surprising to find that the guys just couldn't last as long as they normally could in bed with the royal sisters.)

I REALLY want to see a sequel to this.

(I keep imagining luna trying to convince celestia to screw Anon.
"Celly, Celly! You HAVE to try this! It. was. AMAZING. There has never been a stallion on Equus with even a fifth of his stamina!")

I've been looking for a story like this for some time, but haven't had a chance to write it myself.

“Uh… Round two, anyone?”

i think i would like that.

queen Umbra/r63 Sombra getting dominated next?

Hilarious and factual, stallions don't generally last longer than 10-30 seconds. And once they're done, they're done for the rest of the day.

So...yeah, I suppose even a quick shooting virgin would seem like a sex god to these ponies :trollestia:

6889635 Damn. I think you were right. :rainbowlaugh:

No promises, but if I can think of some way to top this chapter, then you guys will know.

6899952 *poses it's inky appendages as some deity might.* We art filled with wisdom, though the timing of it is always needed. Unless we speak of causing doom or corruption.

Comment posted by marawlyk deleted Feb 3rd, 2016

Sequel, this needs a sequel :pinkiehappy:

Twenty seconds?! That’s c̳̲̤̞̻̓ͮͯͣḥ̡͙̜̖̤͔ͫi̶̢͓̖̺̼̥ͨ͗͂ͦ̂̒̿̂̕ͅl̵̤̭̤̝̺͔̦̚d̢͍̭̯̩̠̖̗͍̣̎̈́̓͛'̯̹̳̟̪̅̾́̿̐̋͘͟s͈̯̺͙̭̙͎̾ͥͫͧ̄͟ ̢̎͗̑̊͏̣̬̜̘͎ͅp̲͓͓̙̼͇̭̅͗͞ͅͅl̼̦̖͗̌a̸̢̫̩̱ͯ̚ͅỵ̨͙̞̞̆͒ͫͬ͝!̶̨̟̱̼̼̫̝̟͂ͫͦ̉̍̿ͥͨ͊”

WOW, ummm are you ok there?
You err, seemed a little of there.

This is great :rainbowlaugh:

O1 #27 · Feb 8th, 2016 · · ·

She reels back, momentarily blindsided by your falcon punch.

You should at the very least remove the part in the description that says this is green text, it doesn't read like it is to me personally and I wouldn't really notice if you hadn't said it was. The reasoning being that green text is against FIMfictions rules, if a mod sees your description they might remove the story.

It was a fun story though, I hope there's a sequal for me to find in your library.

Round two?



:pinkiegasp: “Woah! Nopony told me it was gonna be this kind of party!”


“Holy shit a talking horse!”
In her surprise, she lets the rock drop. It hits the ground with a loud clack! She sees you, and the two of you freeze. You stare at each other for a few long moments.


Change the characters name to something else from "Anonymous" to something else. It's too generic.
EDIT: 10/23/16 i.imgflip.com/pq444.jpg

Please good sir, may we have a little more sequel?

“Are you… a sex god?”

Considering this guy basically Sparta-kicked a horse across the room, then dominated her right after being stabbed in the shoulder by her horn (with nary a mention of bleeding or pain), this is absolutely a fair question.

We require a sequel, I can't help but love the idea of a submissive girl/mare.

Oh, she touched his tralala... Hmph, excuse ne, but we do CERTAINLY require more!

Ayyyyee Sequel please, but for now im downloading this one and adding to the collection!

Well, you don't see that everyday. I'd be interested to see what all else come of this.
Keep up the good work. Deus tecum.

Please write round two with them watching. Please. :applecry:

I want more!:flutterrage: Um...please:fluttershyouch:


Beyond exceptional, beyond sexy, and beyond funny.

Most excellent.


“Uh… Round two, anyone?”

That is fucking funny as hell.

Need sequel!:pinkiecrazy:must have sequel!:pinkiecrazy:

This story , sequel NOW!

I'll be honest here, I really did feel bad for Nightmare when she was pleading for mercy. :fluttershyouch:
Is there a continuation/sequel to this?

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