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Hand-Made
Dedicated to hand-made quality reminiscent of old-world charm. Specialization in anatomically correct fillies/mares having fun with human males. Thank you for reading and commenting.
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This is very well written. Even though I don't like much human stuff in Eqeustria , I couldnt look away
5483787 My thoughts exactly.
Nice.
Ah, I do love some elegant clop.
I could see a great story evolve from this, perhaps some background info beforehand but still...yes, t'would be fantastic!
Nicely done my friend
You deserve a medal for this.
5484220 Figured you'd like this, seeing as it is practically impossible for you to write something that would not warrant the Dark tag. Kappa.
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What can I say, I love the dark side
Two fics from Hand-Made in one day? My penis can't handle it. Great fic!
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if you know what I mean.
You like the dark side of the moon I bet.
Very nice! The 'winking' gets me every time! Anatomical correctness is so hot to me that I even made my own, if somewhat short, anatomically correct fic! They seem to be into some hard roleplay, although I'm not too surprised.
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This is really nice
This was all kinds of tasteful.
You could take the clop out of this entirely and you'd still have an interesting potential story on your hands.
I loved this. It isn't often you see such archaic eloquence in a clopfic.
Bravo! A lot of fun to read, the roleplay was a nice twist. Love me some Nightmare Moon.
In the words of me, Freddy Fuckbear (or fuckboy if you like) Yes. Inhale my dong Princess of the Night.
holy shit this was so good. this is why youre god tier hand-made
Now this is why you're godly-tier.
What is he, Napoleon?
I confess, I wasn't sure what to write as a comment here. On one hoof I just wanted to say 'wow, I like it because it hits all the high points of a story I enjoy' and on the other, everyone's written what I wanted to say. Well, rambling time.
This'll be long, so tl;dr friggen' right on: it hits my kinks, Anon's coolio, humans are neat, but damn it Hand-Made you are a tease!
I'm not going to say a lot on Nightmare Moon, because I think the representation nailed all the high points of her character. Her method, her mode, and her overall authority really shine through with both the language selection and her overall posture. The equal venom and arousal centered in her character through reversals in her personal power really do suggest that personal touch in vulnerability. The actual story and involvement of role play and power-play without being just about S&M or the like is something that touches on a few things I personally enjoy
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But enough about my little kinks, the actual execution (pardon the pun) was superb. The descriptors set the scene exceptionally.
You know, I like this anonymous character; I'mma call him Rex. Anyway, he's martial without being barbaric, and he's confident without being egotistical. Just some of the initial choices and images associated with him are a really nice twist. Rex starts off feeling like a more realistic style of knight, one who could be anything from an 'Arn-like' chivalier to a more fantastical Grey Paladin, capable of braving the slings and arrows of some hellish quest to reach the vile demigod. It starts off feeling like a chapter from one of those older fantasy novels and that makes it engaging.
The early personality feels like it's not an exploitative piece, but that Rex feels more like the classical representation of many of the lesser Arthurian Knights.
It's quite amazing how before and after the story, this overall view can change; any hope of initial 'holy' vengeance just turns to a facet of emotional sadism in that sense. Given that his new lines themselves espouse the merits of 'self discipline' it further cements the initial positive aspects we see for him. The tonal shift is a little more gradual, changing Rex from the tempered hero, to the tempted hero, before morphing into an anti-hero, and then outright ending with that fantastic reveal of being a co-conspirator villain.
His actual personality oozes a style of confidence that seems under-represented; it's not the 'I can sleep with whoever I want, babe' pseudo-suave (IE: greasy) archetype, but one that has already considered the outcomes and isn't going to have others second guess it. It's not hard to see later on: the post coital stroking of Nightmare Moon despite the intrusion is perfect; it doesn't feel like it's to prove anything, or that it's exploitative (given that both intruders are unconditionally insignificant, what is there to feel about getting caught, or being in front of a room of them if they chose to copulate. Others are more like tools and less like people), it feels blissfully powerful and unrepentant.
I love this in the character. The actual reversal, equating Nightmare with everything that he did, then affecting her speech pattern to truly usurp her place is really very very neat.
Rex's whole air and mien really reflect ambition, and some of his actions go beyond just participating in role-playing sex. I mean, he actually cut Nightmare Moon's neck, and she is a queen while he's more or less a prince regent at best or a chancellor. There is still a power differentiation here and that makes them unequal partners. It also makes that action, and his personal choices and actions all the more fascinating to ponder. I mean, in almost any monarchy he'd get death for drawing royal blood, and he still went ahead and did it. He took it upon himself to call up military support, to finance levies, to handle some negotiations, and all for the aim of land and tax wealth. That is outright king-making material that would make nearly anyone in power nervous. So where does it begin, where does it end?
The word 'knave' is hard enough to deliver seriously in almost any context, but I think this actually manages to pull it off without sounding too kamp. (By Jove, we caught that rascal now, eh wot?) The language works here, and that gets my respect. It's also a wonderful little turn around given the first words from Nightmare were about the protagonist being a commoner. It's an equalizing insult that shows they're generally about on the same level, making the grand reveal really quite fun. That said... I think knave is a masculine word, so that is sort of interesting.
Again, a lot of the choice in grammar and heroic early-modern English prose is really just enjoyable to read: heading 'hitched' used in that context, as well as latchlock, and demesne takes me back a bit. We don't bandy about those in modern parlance anymore, too bad. While we're on the subject.
Stop me if I'm wrong, but is that a play on 'le petite mort'? I think Shakespere used it on occasion too 'I die' but you don't see it in English with any regularity, and we haven't for quote some time.
Going back to the story:
I'm just going to leave that there... the way this final portion speaks is absolutely infuriating and tantalizing to me. The protagonist's singular order, his plan, his creation of these things, all show his interest in Angle barley and a talents of Gryphon gold; but is Nightmare interested in it too? This is just an awesome introduction and could make for an absolutely enthralling adventure series.
No this isn't a “moar pleez” plea, this is just stating that it's a damned good example of how it's done: it builds anticipation, intrigue, and plants that seed of doubt about two less-than-perfect characters. Who is going to turn on who first, what about Celestia, and of course what is up with the batpony and dark ages warriors?
I like the combination batpony shadow guard and human warrior in mail. That the human captain nominally outranks the lieutenant, but is still in a rather 'comrade' like relationship with Dusktooth makes it feel like the leadership and regality is purely at the apex of the hierarchy. Beneath that isn't some ultra-rigid strata between each rank, but they still have a rapport. It's also just as brilliant that he tries to save their hide some measure of agony by subtly reminding them that they are a different shift and try to deflect blame. It says 'these two, the Queen and the regent, have power'.
… part of me nearly squeed at that, but one does not submit so lightly. I love that turn of phrase.
New troop levies from the west, a dispute in land, the shambles of treaties, a deliberate provocative response to diplomacy to find a pretext for the use of force, the idea of New Esssex and Gryphonia (thus, who is the analogue of the protagonist) it's a teasing peek of things I find incredibly interesting.
Where did the humans go? Will the 'power-play' turn into something more overt with a clash of powers? Will 'Rex' like his new powers? Would he be an anti-hero, would he turn on Nightmare? Would they just make for a 'cute newlywed' couple that go to take over the world? Will Rex turn into a Sombra-esq super villain prompting Nightmare to be the hero? What dignitaries and what is their point of view? It's not that I'm going to be thinking about this for days, it's that I have been thinking about them. I just love the concept; it's a compelling and delightfully grand story. Hand-Made, you tease us so.
So yeah, I loved it.... even if 'estrus' reprieve' sounds an awful lot like a place you'd stumble across in the Elder Scrolls or Fallout
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Is all of the actual stuff that would include pain (such as the "sword") an innuendo, as in not actual hurting?
(I plan to finish reading this, though the thought of the sword in the neck not being an innuendo was a bit of a scare for me lol)
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this guy is awesome 
hehehe great fic man
I kinda feel sorry for ponies trying to sleep...
"Oh for buck's sake, they're at it again...why can't we move to Appleloosa or Trottingham?"
"We can't afford it..."
"And you're too busy imagining what you're hearing, aren't you?"
"...."
"...so was I."
Nicely written~♡
5872426 Or..
"So that's how many times this week?"
"Third hearing it."
"Still amazing to hear the royals from the other side of the castle."
"...."
"What?"
"When this shift ends remind me to buy earplugs."
"Why?"
"Just do it"
I'd like to see a story about this. Where is Celestia and Luna? Twilight and the elements? How did Nightmare Moon and a Human become rulers? Why are the Gryphons attacking? And how will the human and Moon retaliate? I WAN'T TO KNOW!
This was a delight to read. Thank you.
Small mistake:
The formality of the prose makes me think this might have been nicer if it was stated from the beginning that this was all a role play. I kind of had the feeling that was the case early on, though.
bit OF blanket