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klepto awesome
I sure enjoyed it^^ Dash seems in desperate need to get laid though^^ I wonder just how long shes been bottling everything up inside her. So yeah I'd like another chap^^ One question though.... why did Fluttershy try to steal "your" stuff?^^
its pretty good. It seemed a tad bit rushed a bit, but i liked it
Why did fluttershy pick pocket and steal?
Flutterthief! So... damn... adorable.... HHHNNNNNG!
MOAR please
this is great! keep up the good work
The love between two sapient species is OK in my books.
More would be great if you're up for it.
I would love to see more dude.
Keep writing, please!
flutter's is a thief?
2134951 then you might not like that RD isn't a sapient... She's a pony.
Awesome, please continue.
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Uh, her body is irrelevant. She is a member of a sapient species that look like Ponies with Human like minds.
2135234 sapient usually means either wise, or acting wise, or a human of the species Homo sapiens
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The ponies in MLP are sapient, bottom line.
I post this, go to bed, wake up, and have 51 notifications. Holy sh-t.
Oh, and yeah, Fluttershy's a klepto
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She's a kleptomaniac, which means she has a compulsion to steal things. Usually small things, like candles or bits or suckers. There's no reason for it whatsoever, kind of like a bad habit.
2135310 I think you guys mean sentient... Like capable of higher thinking...?
Yay!! Ya got your self a Horny Rainbow Dash, Thats A Win!!
MOAR!
MOAR!
Looks like I'm continuing this story...
wright more plaez
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ACHIVEMENT UNLOCKED
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Derp, yes, sorry.
More. Now.
Looks like the only complaints are pacing and paragraph size, this will be noted for future chapters.
Constructive input, it's a good thing!
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It may be closer than you think.
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lol, not like i've got much else to do. time to hurry up and wait
Sorry for the long wait! It's extra long to make up for lost time.
great chapter! keep up the good work
Sweet chapter, my good man. Ivan is about to learn how committed Twilight can really be.
2213727 Dun dun DUN.
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*Looks over shouder*
The wait was worth it!
Considering how bureaucracy works, if he filled out the paper work now and sent it in, it would be about 2 months before they might even review it. The other option is to just wait an astounding 60 days, which will go by rather fast.
Wow I was not expecting this much awesome from this story I thought it was going to be another run of the mill HiE ship fic but this chapter blew all that thinking out the window. Keep up the awesome work
LETTERS FROM THE EDITOR! *loud fanfare plays abruptly*
ok, so a disclaimer here before i post this, at this time i actually have exactly as mu... ok, only slightly more knowledge about the future of this fic than any of you, save sneaky of course. the following comments are mine and mine alone, and after re-reading it a dozen times or so i am sure this is spoiler free regarding this story.
also while i'm at it i'll explain something real quick, now i don't capitalize letters, or always use proper grammar or punctuation in comments. this is because i KNOW how to do those things, and i love to piss all over grammar-nazi's parades. just fyi
2218920 i'll admit to having a slight influence on that... all i really suggested was naming "you" as i got tired pretty quickly of so many 2nd person fics having "she says your name" guh.... anyhow glad you appreciate this work, even if my contribution is rather small, some other suggestions of mine though have shaped the future of this fic, and i excitedly await my next bit of editorial work. 'dis gon' be gud!
2217463 yeah... this is bureaucracy run by twilight sparckle. got a funny feeling she's kinda like hermes from futurama, master "in" pile sorted out and done with one 2 mintue musical number, at least that's my personal head-canon for princess twilight's administration, sneaky's may differ. also waiting 60 days? you really don't know our lavender librarian very well do you?
EDIT; [powertrip/off]
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I thought I called him Anonymous, and you said I should give him a real name. I thought that was what the name thing was about...
2227910 come to think of it, i'm pretty sure you're right, but i guess "anonomous" sounded a little too much like "she says your name" to me... anyhow the "you" character having a name was what was actually important to me at the time i guess. kinda the same thing really, but kinda slightly not...
Ivan... word of advice here... It's Pinkie Pie, DON'T question it!
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great chapter! keep up the good work
can't wait til' the next chapter.
As Spike put it once: This won't end well...
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That's all I have to say.
Of fucking course.
Oh, and by the way. I need your guys's thoughts on something. Should I write clop? If I do, I'm posting it on my pastebin, since this is a teen-rated story. It would be my first time, but I guess there's a first for everything...
So yeah, what do you think?
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I say be adventurous and give it a go. I'm certuain you'll do fine with it. Plus, if its clop relating to this story, it will be a supportive bit to the story between RD and Ivan. But still, if not, I still say, "Go for it!"
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Yeah, it'll be for the story. My proofreader complimented me on the more 'sensual' parts of the chapter, if you know what I mean... Made me wonder if I should give it a go.
When there's clop, I'll give you guys a link to my pastebin. Just gotta clear it of all the weird shit I used to write when I first started.
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Cool. Cool. If you're going to be posting a link, I'm cool with it, but in the future, I assume you'll be labeling your story to have clop in it just make it seem more fitting and probably be placing it in the actual story here.
Anyways I'm pretty sure your proofreader enjoyed your 'sensational' writing.
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