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Oh nice, good to see you doing a TwiSpike.

Impressive as always. :twilightsmile:

A TwiSpike? Hmm It's been quite a while since I've read one of these.

"All my other students have started calling it ‘d-mail’ for short."
Is this a reference to what I think this is a reference to? :trollestia:

that image is amazing

to the feature box with you!

So terribly sorry, I'm loving this story and can't wait to see more!
But alas, I really can't resist this!
OH YEAH! COME AT ME!!! (Oh god whyyyyyyy....ಠ_ಠ)

I like this story and it is different because i have never read a TwiSpike before. My one criticism is why was Twilight so harsh and demanding when she first met Spike, I mean it just seemed a little off

that clop-ish part seemed kind of out of place, but all in all this is just amazing. I can see an entire storyline beyond this, but that would be up to you

seems pretty intresting:pinkiesmile: please continue this story, i really want to see were this leads:twilightsmile:
i,m sure it will be just as awsome like your other stories:moustache::moustache:

711191 Read "The Dragon in Twilight"

Sorry, lass, but you're in sixth place there. :facehoof:

TwiSpike? Butterscotchsundae? Let's do this :moustache:

I approve of this pairing.

great chapter. I look forward to the next

Update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update :pinkiecrazy: :pinkiecrazy: :pinkiecrazy:

Cmon! Update this thing already! :raritydespair:

Tbh, its not a pairing I'd normally support, but it was written well enough to keep me interested anyway. I'll be following this one :)

Yeeaaaah, that moment when you forget to refresh the page to see if ur not too late....

I was skeptical for the whole TwiSpike.
But I enjoyed this.

Keep up the good work im always glad to read your writing. :pinkiesmile:

It's been too long! As always, you do a good job, and I can't wait to read more.

I started this when it had eighteen thumbs, but I was the 45th positive.
You're fast.

awesome story

That was cute butters, not a masterpiece but definately a fun read.

Ah, a Butterscotchsundae TwiSpike fic? ^^ Consider this favourited as I eagerly wait for more. :twilightsmile:

The beginning part kind of worried me. I noticed a lot of run on sentences, especially with Spike's introduction. Could really use semi colons to combine sentences, or just make new sentences. We can still get the hectic pace of Spike bumbling around even if they're in separate sentences.

But, WOW, did you pull it out in the second half! I don't remember getting that excited over something since I first read Party of Two. "Why hadn't she just let him slip a claw in her?"

MOD EDIT: Please don't post huge images

Can't wait for more!

hmmmmm, I liked it!
And like many other comments I make on your storys, i'll start with "Im usually not a fan of..."

Im usually not a fan of Spike shipping, your PinkiexSpike confirmed that a little bit, I mean... he is a baby dragon after all. but acts like an adult sometimes. and seems mostly like in puberty. I'm confused.

Aaaaaanyways, it starts off pretty good, hope to see more soon!

Well, all I can say is that I enjoyed it, but the 'clop' bit was out of place. However, if there's a chapter 2 of some sort that makes it seem more relevant, then I withdraw that objection.

Faved and tracking!

Very nice so far. However, I'm not too keen on the idea of a baby dragon getting drunk. Then again, this is Butterscotch we're talking about so alcohol is probably always going to be involved some way or another.

A very nice first chapter, but there's one thing that irks me.

The flashback about her first.... 'encounter' with Spike can't be more than a few days after her entrance exam and last we've seen: he was an infant, there's no way hey could have grown up that fast.:twilightoops:

A nice distraction from my own writing, I must say.
I swear to Celestia Spike was awake the whole time he was rubbing Twilight and he's just trolling her. :trollestia::moustache:
Can't wait to see where you take this!

I would absolutely LOVE it if you decided to create this story into one as amazing as your "The Party Hasn't Ended". :pinkiehappy:

nice story
take my star and thumb
please.... :pinkiesad2:
no one else will take it.... :applecry:

712977 I normally don't like Spike/Twilight, but if a story's done right as both "The Dragon in Twilight" and this story was done...

Wow this is really well done. Keep up the good work.

I'm entitled to my opinion so I will say that I almost fully approve of this fic, but don't particularly like the implied fact that Twilight isn't a virgin (don't judge, it's just my preferance)

I gotta agree with beirinangu, though I'm just more pissed at Twilight. Save it for Spike Twilight Sparkle! Damn it! :flutterrage:

Favorited before reading

711179 What reference might that be of?

As usual kind of flowery and purple - as I read, I felt that at any moment I'd need a thesaurus. But it was sweet and cute. You have a true battalion of vivid imagery up your sleeves.

>dandelion wine
dat bradbury novel

Though I really don't know how he would react to the unbefitting interjection of clop into an otherwise low-maturity story.

B-b-but... Why it end? This makes me sad. I demand more of this fantastic story. As always you're writing has that something extra, that x factor. There is something to be enjoyed about TwiSpikes. So adorable that I can't help but squee.:twilightsmile:

~~FurryForlife~~ §~§

I try, I really do, but god damn it Twi x Spike is always just disturbing as all hell.

My body has never been this ready.

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Glad I couldn't help. :pinkiehappy:

Ah, inebriated Twilight Sparkle. She's delightful when she's drunk and it's been such a long time since we've seen her that way. In fact, the first story of yours I ever read was "Interventions are Magic." So far, this is just as good as A Dragon in Twilight and the first few chapters of Warming Up (boy, did THAT fic take a turn for the worse; no chance of that happening with Butterscotch at the helm, though). I'm psyched to see there's more to come.

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