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Yay! At last!
not gonna lie nice use of a time skip
Great update. Using the time skip was ingenious. Thankfully Fluttershy stopped Sombra from doing anything too hasty with her progressive pragmatism, I don't know what I would have done to them if I were in Sombra's hooves. Probably something unpleasant.
I imagine that they will have to sign a more formal treaty and discuss recompense and reparations if and when Sombra releases his prisoners.
Two former villains in an epic verbal duel? I can hardly wait. But so far all the waiting has most assuredly been worth it.
Phew she's alive, tell mr Twilight is going to get her flank kicked for this, this was her dumb plan and her friend who she left out in the snow without a car in the cold almost died bitch.
Good chapter by the way.
Celestia is not going to be happy with this, Twilight just cost her a massive amount of land, and while yeah she wasn't really using it, it is still a loss.
very nice use of the timeskip
So...they all lived? Darn...welp, at least we know see where things are going with this. I'm actually surprised that Sombra would allow Fluttershy to go this far, considering everything they've shown. I thought after being attacked, and by Fluttershy's friends no less, he would be more...returning to his old ways. I did like the fact that the doctor thinks they came to kill Fluttershy. Nice to see both sides have no idea about the other.
Also, I hope there's a 'Surprise! I'm pregnant!' from Fluttershy next chapter. That would be great, especially if with see Starlight's reaction...and the others' reactions as well.
i'm on the edge of my seat !
i need more, great chapter as always !
I just found this yesterday and I caught up! I have to applaud you; this is perfect use of timeskip.
I like the idea of King Sombra here and Fluttershy being actually equal to him. You also did the character development perfectly for all of the characters here in this story. I would suggest you to tag it alternative universe since all of this didn't actually happen in canon My Little Pony.
I remain in eager for next chapter to come out soon as possible; I would love to see how the dialogue goes between them.
Heres hoping that Fluttershy is preggers by now. I really wanna seee a royal baby. To much cute. <3
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Actually, I want her to early pregnant just so the hormones kick in and her dialogue goes crazy. That would be so awkward and funny. She just walks up to Sombra and Starlight, constantly having mood swings.
So has anyone from the human world inquired about Sunset's disappearance?
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That's even better! XD
Wonderful chapter mate, and I like the way you've explained the time skip.
Keep up the lovely work!
I can guess who the Ambassador will be.
Thank you for continuing this; as others have said, nice use of the timeskip, as well as describing what King Sombra did to Twily's 'rescue party'.
I wonder if Twilight and her friends will be put on trial. That would be an interesting story arc.
Alright, another great chapter! I actually have only one nitpick here:
It should be Crystal Empire. That is the only thing that caught my attention.
I love this part with Blueblood! Celestia used this whole thing as a chance to get rid of her obnoxious nephew from Canterlot! And I also love how it was Fluttershy who played a peacemaker between her husband and Celestia over this whole ordeal. Though, I did get the vibe that Sombra has some plans regarding Starlight, and taking his old ways and customs into consideration... Royal Mistress? Or maybe a student in magic after that display of raw power and quick thinking?
Well worth the wait. But I need MOAR!!!
Glad Sunny is okay.
Really hoping Flutters has a cute baby bump. It’s diabte inducing!
No offense, but I actually had to check whether this was an anthro story at the beginning of this chapter (what with all that ankles/wrists stuff)... it was kinda confusing, after having been away from this one for a while whilst awaiting an update. Otherwise, looking good so far; I look forward to reading the rest of this one as it continues to progress
Yay updates updates I love updates!!! But gah your going to kill me with these cliff hangers!!! Seriously dude I’m chomping at the bit here!
Not going to lie, this is exactly what I had imagined.
Darn you cliffhangers.
That was a lot of foreplay; I'm all hot and bothered now!
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Most likely, I doubt that they would forget about her.
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Yeah, Twilight's going to have her hide tanned.
So Twilight and her brilliant plan did not only nearly cost innocent lives, but Celestia had to give up a lot of land and Fluttershy and Sombra founded their own sovereign kingdom as a result? And that directly between The Crystal Empire and Equestria to spite them even more.
A political disaster at its finest.
....👏👏👏 GG Twilight, GG. Please, you have to show us the other princesses reaction to that when Twilight is back in Equestria and have their "talk".
I need more, dammit!
damn cliffhangers
i love how everyone making her think Sombra wants to bang her. the real twist would be if fluttershy was into it.
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Oh My!
awww, that time skip saddens me. I prefer to see the struggle more than the fruition personally. Now Sombra and Flutters are set up nicely, kind of an impressive amount of improvement for only six months as well. I dunno, with the struggle to make the mansion done, and them gaining land and dominance, it makes me feel like there isn't much left before this fic ends. Or a new struggle comes about, but it'll be hard to top watching Sombra and Flutters struggle to hold the place together and improve on it.
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Maybe not, but I think colorful talking cartoon ponies would fit under the "not suitable for depictions of rape or violence" category as well. It's just fan fiction at the end of the day.
Oh god I reach the bottom, can't wait to see the rest of the story! Although in my option this story should be placed in a alternative universe which can be build with total individual character and background story. It can fir more with King Sombra style Equestria Gril is really not a good match with this storyAnd I still reallllllly dislike Starlight. But in conclusion, it is still a really good ship! Give me more Sombra-Fluttershy ship!
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What was your ship?
but he's with flutter shy and why is he hitting on star light
It sounds like Sombra is interested in Starlight since she was the one who put up the hardest fight against him. I'm guessing he wants to make a proposition to her.
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I'll take The Rapists for $400!
Am I the only curious to see Sombra meet the rest of Fluttershy's family? It's always awkward meeting the in laws.
This went far better than expected. The timeskip was both surprising and well-executed
8611560 I wanna see Sombra make Zephyr his bitch, much to Fluttershy's amusement
Well worth reading.
I look forward to these updates more than any other story on FimFiction, I hope you have time to write more!
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I hope its not marriage-I think Fluttershy would kill him.
This was a great chapter. Appose should be "oppose" though.
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Nah. Sombra doesnt strike me as the polygamy type.
I wonder how the human world is reacting to Sunset’s six month disappearance. She would be severely behind in her studies, there would be missing persons cases, and the question of who to blame and what not would be in the air for a while. In short, Twilight had just ruined a large chunk of Sunset’s lifestyle in the human world! I wonder what will happen next? (And I wonder, will anyone will defect to New Haven?)
Great story by the way. I really enjoy this!
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My dude... Are you TRYING to get kicked out of the orphanage?
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I imagine so.
Gulp.
When will the next update be?
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Thanks.
4th line, it's, not it's.