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I hope we'll get to see Shantae again. He seemed like a pretty alright guy, and his interactions with Ethey were quite funny and enjoyable.
Yes Starlight... embrace the dark side.
And stop playing the higher moralist if you don't know a thing how life is treating others outside of Equestria.
I think we found our Ensemble Darkhorse in this story.
A very nice portrayal of the King's court. I read Shantae's lines in Yondu's voice (Tried doing Gambit's, but failed )
Ethey with those sick burns, though.
Huh...And here I thought they were just loaded
Okay, this chapter was fantastic! It was entertaining to see Sombra holding court while Fluttershy nuzzles him and acts as if she’s on a date. The cases themselves were entertaining as the issue of the gambling ponies showed that Sombra could be draconian with his punishments if the guilty party tries to scam him while also showing him to be compassionate with loans if someone in need requires them. Shantae and Ethey’s arguement was downright hilarious, especially with how he makes her blush, though Blueblood and Ethey’s arguement at the end was equally hilarious. Overall, this chapter was great and I hope we see a new one soon.
P.S: Will Fluttershy at one point inevitably tell the rest of the Main 6 and Starlight how her private time with Sombra is like? Would be funny to see the girls’ reactions to finding out that Sombra is a caring yet experienced lover.
I have a feeling that Starlight might wake up next morning in bed with somepony
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I knew I wasn't the only one thinking of Gambit!
of shit shes coming around
come to the darkside starlight we have boooooze
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so starlight just might take the deal if only to be smashed all the time
Well, what can I say. Another fine chapter. A rather entertaining and interesting way to see how Sombra and everyone else functions during court. I really enjoyed it. Welcome to the madhouse Starlight...you'll fit right in
I still wonder when Twilight and Sunset are gonna wake up
Keep up the good work my good man
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I was reading the lines in his voice
Now, I wonder where you got that name from.
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Me to I thought they was loaded as well but would most likely be more easily detected then being magical
Yay, it updated!
YAY NEW CHAPTER!
Once again you never fail to impress with your writing.
Nice to see How Sombra handles disputes and crimes and loan requests in his kingdom. And Also i got a good shock from the Cannibal Pirates but it's also a really nice touch.
Another thing I loved is how the Throne is basically A love seat lol.
Oh and...
I Absolutely LOVED that Game of Thrones Reference.
Fluttershy and Sombra's courtroom nuzzling was sweet. Not disagreeing with any of Sombra's rulings and I think Fluttershy is having a softening effect on him. It's funny, that one stallion was all for violence until it was his turn to get a few licks. Starlight is being so self-righteous I want to strangle her, so good job keeping her in character.
All in all, good chapter.
This has made me smile.
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or better yet, we have kites
I feel a bit bad for Ethey. If she tries to date someone her age they look like a pedophile, if she dates someone that looks her age (which would be gross) she is a pedophile. No winning.
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Shantae doesn't seem to mind
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Good point. The real question is it a matter of he like her for who she is and can see she's not a child or that he has a thing for children? I hope he doesn't but only you know the answer to that.
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Shantae is a figment of my own creation, so I have the ability to let him address you directly on this.
(clears throat)
Shantae indeed has an affinity for da children, but not in da way dat you imply. Shantae merely teases de petite adviser, because he loves to see her blush. Oui, she is a rose in bloom, dat one. Ethereal Moon, ma belle fleur~
As cruel as the whipping is, you know that that guy WON’T be cheating or lying again. Not to mention this should also placate the masses.
“He paid what he owed! He’s square with the house.”
In a messed up way I kinda wish these things were common place today. Not whippings, but a form of stockades or public display of one’s crime or behavior.
Too many people unflinching at typical punishment.
Thanks for the update! I was out in the sticks when I saw this update, climbed to the top of a hill just so I could get enough of a signal to load it.
WORTH IT!
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I live in the middle of bum-plowing nowhere. My house is the only structure for about five miles in every direction, if you don't count the water tower at the edge of a nearby mountain pass. Trust me, I know what a shaky connection is like. Many a Killingfloor and CS:GO session has ended in disappointment because of it. I am however flattered that you'd go through such lengths to read my latest chapter. I lift my mug in appreciation 🍻
Question Boomstick Mick: Is Sunburst going to be in this story at any point?
Ethey is all the me I wish I could be. Such savagery is so inspiring.
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Celestia has a history of procrastinating.
Love the story! In all sense here, is there a villan? Twilight DID try to kill a king, which is treason. But if you put things in her perspective, you would see that a friend is trying to get another friend back, by any means necessary. But I don't trust Blueblood, he is a snobby wannabe prince that has no manners. Wow that is hard to tell lol give me 1397564728102938574 million moons to think about this...............lol
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Next chapter is gonna be kind of a short one. I haven't been writing all that much lately because I've been on vacation. The chapter is going to be written out through the first person perspective of what you might call a 'villain,' so that might be something to look forward to if you're in to that kinda thing... So, read it if you want, or don't, I guess, if you don't want to... I don't know... *eyes go derp*
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"He gave me enchanted dice!"
Cue the Megan Trainor... Did I mention how much I love Ethey?
There's an oops with Fluttershy's name there.
Also, considering what we learn of Celestia and how she rules through Sombra and New Haven residents, as well as what's implied from/said by Equestrian characters like Starlight, I really wonder how she's an effective ruler - something this Sombra clearly is. Also considering the focus on it being Celestia's rulership that's questioned, I wonder how these ponies would see the treatment of Luna, Cadance, and Twilight - or if those three are going to start to feel cheated by Celestia in some way.
Oh please, I would watch it just for the humor of watching the screechfest it likely is.
I KNEW IT! Your dice are loaded!!
Sounds reasonable....except that it should be 48, if court is every two days? At least, if the idea is to let them cool off, it doesn't seem to make much sense to let them go home to get riled up again.
fluttershy's—> Fluttershy’s
Sombra's punishments may be cruel but they are just.
And I can't get enough out of Blueblood's insults from Ethey!
I'd so love to see art of your characters
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I think I posted illustrations of the major OCs way back, but I'll repost them on my next blog.
I read this in the voice of Raymond from Princess And The Frog.