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Clowns really are disturbing...
Also, the old stallion reminds me a bit of Barristan Selmy from Game of Thrones...
Hooray an update! Interesting side characters, with understandable motivations. Hopefully we get to see more empire building.
yay another chapter can't wait for more
oh my celestia, an update! I've been waiting for this it was a good chapter. I eagerly await more of this story. Its in my top 3 of alltime favorites
This chapter was so awesome
Can't wait to see what happens next
Okay, this chapter was awesome. I really liked Clash as he seems to be a spry old stallion that wants to make a difference using his military experience rather than retire peacefully and Ethereal a moon was absolutely hillarious with the way she burned some of the guards. Also, congrats to Fluttershy for acting like an assertive queen since it seems her husband will reward her with some nookie. Thanks for the awesome chapter. It was worth the wait.
Who else thinks Celestia planned that? Old hag keeps meddling in everything these days.
Yeah. I would be blushing too after that.
They say beware an old man in a profession where men usually die young. I say take that man and make him train your recruits. Clearly Somba understands the value of an experienced soldier.
its always a good day when there is an update for this fic.
It is interesting:
Fluttershy is forcing a ruthless despot into revealing a more humane side.
Sombra himself is forcing the Element of Kindness into developing a backbone.
It is weird to say, but I think the two might be helping each other.
As I've said, however, Fluttershy still needs to be very careful about Sombra. He doesn't have a bad reputation for nothing.
At least Fluttershy's easing herself into the groove of things one step at a time. Those visiting guards were assholes.
7871406 Really? I kinda thought of Geralt from Witcher...even though I haven't played the game.
This story might be the most exciting thing that I've read for a long time, I'm glad you've updated! Keep up the good work
I very much like this story, it's unique in the whole SomShy pairing in my opinion.
Right now there are a few things that I am hoping/expecting/guessing (take your pick) that will happen:
1) Sombra and Fluttershy fall in love - right now, Sombra is simply fascinated with his new queen, while Fluttershy may not fear him as much as in the beginning, any affections she feels now are new and undeveloped, what I'm waiting for is when the two of them, or at least Fluttershy, decides that they truly fell in love with their spouse.
2) Confrontation with Discord - it is clear enough that Discord won't take well to this whole 'forced wedding', especially when the 'foalnapped bride' is his dear friend, I can already see him going to that little kingdom and either teleports himself and Fluttershy out of there, or goes in like Genie from Aladdin would, a full Rambo/Shwarzenegger-commando get-up to save her... man, that's one bizarre image...
3) Confrontation/Meeting/Reunion with other Mane 6 - like it was said in the first chapter, Twilight won't rest until she saves Fluttershy, so I can see them either going the mentioned before Discord route, or they actually get invited by the young queen for a little reunion, like a tea party, once the residence is up and running, and there Fluttershy reveals her feelings about this whole marriege and how much she got to know her husband.
4) Sombra vs Angel Bunny - I think that this one is self-explanationary. Fluttershy will never let go of her pet, so this confrontation is almost 100% sure.
Can't wait to see how my predictions will play out. Either wrong or right, I sure will be following this story!
I wonder what the next's chapter is about
Wow, I really like this interpretation of Sombra and I look forward to later chapters that reveal why he's no longer the tyrant from ancient times and why he has decided to no longer enslave to hurt people. Please update soon, I can't wait to start reading.
Discord hurt other because he wanted a laugh, not for the sake of hurting.
Omg, please tell me you were referencing Kung Pow there. That movie was comically stupid (in a good way) and it's rare to see a story that does reference it.
Instant and easy cliche response denied because story: "And when one battles monsters one should be wary lest you become one yourself!"
Seriously, half this banter in support of Sombra I could defeat with any number of one-liners taken from dozens of literary sources. Ain't much intellect floating around in this Equestria, that's for sure.
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I love your profile pick lol
I am very entertained with this story. It's a fascinating mix of literal world building, potential for unique character development, and a sort of "Beauty and the Beast" vibe to it. It's also fairly addictive, though I wonder when Fluttershy's past and Ponyville will catch up to her.
It's official: Ethey is my favorite.
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I like the doggo in your pic. I'm a lover of all things doggo
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Thanks! It's my pupper Petey when he was little. Hes cute now, but back then he was so 'adoracute' that a couple of girls wanted to stop their pub crawl to pet him! Look up Great Pyrenees puppy pictures and you'll see what I mean. Actually, my parents just got back from Tractor Sunday with my grandfather (everyone drives their tractor to church and they have an outdoor service, pig roast, and basket auction) and they brought Petey along. She was keeping him on a short leash, but he kept wanting to check out the row behind them. So my mom finally turned around to see an entire family of five making kissie-faces at Petey and trying to pet him!
(I'm back!)
Seeing this word in ponyfic is really weird; I totally get making adaptations and that there's some terms for which a pony substitute would be poor, but 'holocaust' is just too rooted in people-things for it to come across well in a story about ponies. Ethereal is a lovely little lady full of great retorts, but 'genocide' would work just as good for her joke, too.
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Critique noted, but the term holocaust is not just limited to 'Thee Holocaust' of WWII. Genocide and holocaust are technically synonymous with each other, as they're words that can describe a megadeath or mass purge of a certain group. There was a holocaust during the fall of the holy roman empire at the hands of Napoleon Bonaparte, there was a holocaust during Ivan the Terrible's reign, there was a holocaust during Mao Zedong's so-called 'great leap forward.' A holocaust is not merely limited to what the Jews and Catholics faced in 1940s Western Europe.
I have a feeling that you’re gonna get a lot of angry calls soon...
Hey, dude, you need some ice for that second degree burn?
Oh, my god! I thought Celestia was the godess of the sun, yet here you are, dishing out burns of higher temperature than the core of the largest star in the galaxy!
Good job Flutters