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very nice, very nice. Always great to see an update for this story. I really like your take on sombra. And to watch fluttershy chip away at him to bring out his better half. looking forward to more
I think this could have kept the 'Teen' rating... It's not particularly graphic or gory, at least compared to some other action-scenes I've read that were rated 'Teen"
~Crystalline Electrostatic~
20:19_5/14/2017
King or monster? The line has been blurred.
Great as always
Loved this chapter so much. I enjoyed watching just how emotionally intimate and close Sombra and Fluttershy became in this chapter, especially with how Shy woke Sombra up. Likewise, it was entertaining to see Sombra show his pragmatic/kickass side in the fight scene against the bandits at the end. Thanks for the great chapter. Hope the next one comes soon so that we can see the aftermath of today's battle.
Yes! YES!!
More story! More blood!
MORE SHIPPING!!!
Great chapter. I look forward to see what happens next.
Nice work. Keep 'em coming, I like the necessary bruality outlook sombra brings. When you want justice where civilization doesn't exist, there is always a cost...
I forgot about those three. Poor bastards...At least they've been properly avenged. I almost thought the minotaur's group were hired mercenaries before all this happened.
8163645 Considering his noble deed, Hail to the king, baby.
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Despite Sombra's attitude and snark he did kill them in a quick and straightforward manner, and only after being directly attacked. Monsters would do far worse over far less. In this case his behavior is that of a king's, if with a more personal method than the usual "off with their heads!" approach.
8164391 hm. A fair point.
Amazing chapter as usual
on a side note, you might want to make a post for those with the filter on, explaining that it is 'cause they might warrant your story good enough to take it off if they knew it happened
I am now caught up
and now for the wait
i can see this coming back to bite sombra in the ass. cadance might think he killed her guards. whether he likes it or not he needs to open up communication with them or risk a conflict.
Also im still waiting for discord to poof in on them while they are having sex :P
I already had the feeling that these three would somehow pay for their arrogance to leave without any form of support in these lands. The Ponies claim to be "elite", but probably solely for non-lethal combat. In the moment an enemie just wants to bring death they lose their shit, because they can't handle such a level of violence. They were pricks, but didn't deserve such a cruel fate.
And Fluttershy seems to see that "Kindness" is wasted on such beings, they would try again and again until they have you dead and it's nice to see that she tries to bring out Sombra's softer side.
I already fear that Cadence, Shining Armor and Equestria will immediately think that Sombra was the one responsible for their deaths and somehow blame him for everything. It wouldn't surprise me at least, they just see him as a monster and tyrant.
Where has this story been all of my life? More. I need more.
This is the kind of story that I absolutely adore: One I just want to read over and over again, and I never get tired of.
I am curious as to how everyone's favorite Chaos-Magic wielding reality warper is going to react once he hears Fluttershy has become a bride.
Hmn. I wonder, what with how the new royal couple have started to fall in love, how long will it be before Fluttershy grows heavy with a foal?
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The only way that bit before Sombra twisted Tauren's head off would have been better would have been if Sombra's reply to Taurens pleas for mercy had been something like, "I'm sure those three little birds said something similar to you."
8168518 Are you Dothraki? Because you're a straight up savage.
8166073 I don't hope to soon. Maybe in this universe they have heat-season, who knows. I want to see Fluttershy being the assertive epic queen where she at one point kicks flank (no matter in which sense) before she is with foal. Well, it's at all depending on what the author decides anyway.
It will surely already be hilarious to read how Twilight's "Rescue Plan of the Century" with the most powerful Unicorns she knows will end in a disaster. They all think she's depressingly miserable with her situation and in the end Fluttershy just tells them that she is everything else than pleased with their actions.
8170447 I'm reminded of Hades and Persephone. A powerful dark figure abducts a beautiful female and marries her - only for her to end up softening his cold heart and they fall in love.
And yeah, a flank-kicking Fluttershy would be pretty boss.
8170608 The problem with that analogy is that in the original telling of the tale, Hades did NOT abduct Persephone. They eloped, and as I recall, it was Persephone's idea. Demeter was just pissed off about it. Which fits, given that, of all the Gods/Goddesses, Hades is the only one to be genuinely decent. While he was rather strict about thing, that was only because he HAD to be. Let one mortal free from death and EVERYONE would be clamoring for a similar exception.
good work can't wait to see what happens next.
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I'd recommend changing it up with how Fluttershy is referred to in the last paragraph with other words instead of merely 'her.'
8183506 Looking back at the way that paragraph is structured, I agree, and I certainly appreciate the advice. I'll sober up a bit first, then I'll get right on that.
If this turns out to somehow be Sombra tricking everyone to think he is good. I am OUT!
If not... you have me hooked!
8194937 You've been watching too many M. Night Shyamalan movies.
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But seriously. Great story! You paint a vivid picture and weave an interesting yarn.
Updates to follow? Soon?
8195233 It'll be a bit. I only write when I'm sober, and I feel like shit by the time that happens.
Sombra seems to have a strong sense of honor. It might be like to him possibly recover the bodies of the guards or if not possible, bury their heads and give them a military funeral.
I love this chapter i cant wait for the next one When will it come out Please be soon doen with it but Please do it on your own pace
Who want's to bet Fluttershy will decide to, instead of visiting her closer friends, ask Sombra if she could go visit Discord?
Are you going to write snotter chapter of the story soon ?
I want to know what will happen with Fluttershy and Sombra's relationship.
Please writer soon.
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Sorry this response took so long to make. Another chapter will be up shortly
Yay can't wait
At this point I’m rather convinced that several, if not all of the Mansion servants are some form of construct from Sombra
Sombra is badass. Nuff' said.
... Is that a veiled Helsing reference I spy?
Wait, where’s Luna at night?
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