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Okay...we have a team of unicorns now and Twilight just ruined Sunset's education. Got it. Here's hoping we find out what happens next soon.
It'd be really funny if Twilight and the team she assembled ruined a romantic moment between Sombra and Shy while trying to save her.
this is going to be interesting
8120296 What? Do you hate flavor? Because it sounds like you hate flavor.
~Crystalline Electrostatic~
19:58_4/25/2017
8120417 Yes, I do.
8120338 I hope that happens. It'll be the funniest thing ever.
The heck is she planning?
Twilight builds some kind of Unicorn invasion force? Does she want to use an insanely powerful spell? Starlight, Moondancer, Sunset, so much collected Unicorn fire power at once for angering Fluttershy in the end, because she may doesn't want to be "rescued" any longer.
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Then, again, it could also be tragic: Sombra could revert to his monstrous self, and scare the frightful Fluttershy away.
...........................
So Twi just going full "AVENGERS ASSEMBLE" here?
She does know that she wants to fight the guy who SCARES CELESTIA OUT OF HER WITS!!!!!!! Right?
8120429 AH! A FLAVOR NAZI!! EVERYBODY FLEE! WE'LL COME BACK LATER AND KILL IT WITH SMOKED BRISKET AND GRILLED VEGETABLES!
~Crystalline Electrostatic~
20:39_4/25/2017
Celestia knows what he's doing to her this very moment?, like she knows that he's surprisingly been treating Fluttershy with respect and that they've had sex twice?, that's creepy.
8120515 I'm done.
8120553 I wouldn't call the first time 'sex' per say.
8120606 yea I agree with that, but it's still weird that somehow Celestia knows everything
8120491 I think Fluttershy is going to protect him.
8120338 Like I said in an earlier chapter: This is classic Beauty and the Beast. It'll be wonderful to see how this all pans out.
The only thing I want to say is that these past few Super short chapters could have been combined into one singular chapter and it wouldn't have made the flow any different than it currently is, It would only improve it.
Nice to see an update, though these last 3 chapters should really be combined into one larger one.
Unicorn Squad! ASSEMBLE TO FORM VOLTRON!!!
....wait...
You're going to regret this, Twilight.
And with that the last of the Twilight clones were summoned. This is going to get weird people.
8121885 Weird... Like, making out with your step sibling weird? Or marshmallows on pizza weird?
Somepony is going to get yelled at. I just know it.
8155393 Froh, dass Sie es mögen. Neues Kapitel ist fast fertig!
Sunset, when your sovereign calls, you answer.
Seriously, you're at least thirty and hanging out all day with highschoolers. It's a little creepy. Just...go back to Equestria already.
Anyway, can't wait to see what Twi's planning.
I can't help but feel like this is Twilight losing her shit and not thinking as straight as she should... I mean damn... first order of business should be 'surveilance'! Not 'gather the OP genius unicorn army!'
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ALWAYS GATHER THE OP GENIUS UNICORN ARMY FIRST!
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ZUFÄLLIG DEUTSCH!
Thank you Google translate.
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...Yeah, for someone with as much intelligence as Twilight, she has a rather small brain.
Ok..... as a heavy story this is, bringing in Equestria Girls series makes it a little bit odd. High school girls seems not belong to the world which contain rape, kill and betray.
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I hate super short chapters. For some reason my account never marks them as read unless I manually click the check box for them.
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To be fair, Sunset is quite a bit older than twilight, since she was Celestia’s previous student
Oh shit, it's the egghead dream team.
I know its going to be more serious than this, but I can't help but think of this picture (without Trixie of course) by NCMares when I think of these four getting together.
All unicorns i see
When something comes after dialogue like this, it doesn't need to be capitalized.
I like the touch of hugging human Flutters and that you don't neglect the inherent magic of pony in the story you're crafting, which even shows through in these little snippets of unicorn friends assembling to Twilight's call.
It would be ironic if while Sunset is away, Fluttershy meets Sombra from Equestria Girls/human universe, and they start dating. Sunset comes back and almost has a heart attack by the news. That would be interesting.
Wait... Sunset Shimmer is gonna be in the story?
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I’m not being silent. I was unable to respond due to me dancing around the entire apartment.
We're bringing SUNSET SHIMMER into this?!?!?!? Welp, all I can do is keep reading
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I agree
Well the odds of something being set on fire just dramatically improved, I can only approve of this.
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Good thing Sunset isn't really a highschool girl.