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Queen!Fluttershy is scariest pony.
Twilight and gang I'm warning you don't fuck up
Goddamn do I love this story
I can only pray that Twilight and the gang will come to their senses quickly
Keep up the good work my good man
Alright folks!
Betting pool is open!
How will this end up and how?
All scenarios are in since anything can happen at this point!
Why did Evehly give Fluttershy yellow and pink wings?
Finally we get to see how Twi and friends react to how married life changed Flutters.
And that, ladies and gentlecolts, is how you properly interrogate someone.
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pink from blood mayhaps?
*in response to Twilight's inability to process that Fluttershy had seen the cruelty that Sombra challenges and use measured cruelty herself on her enemies*
Twilight.exe has stopped working.
Twiley just suffered a Heroic BSoD... she'll hopefully reboot soon.
How quickly Fluttershy shifted from Queen to Friend when she saw Twilight has me curious. Moving forward, how well is Fluttershy going to be able to compartmentalize and cope with having, and more importantly, needing to have these two very different sides of her. How easily will Queen Fluttershy be brought forth by her Equestrian friends if they continue to be unyielding in the idea that their way is the right one because they aren't shedding blood and to hell with what atrocities the scoundrels whose blood they do not shed get up to when they can no longer see them?
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Perhaps Fluttershy might serve as the bridge between the two sides. As an Element of Harmony, she has learned about the benefits compassion. But as the bride of Sombra, she has also learned about the need to get her hands (or hooves) dirty when faced with a merciless opponent.
Perhaps there are situations where appealing to one's good nature can be effective. If Twilight had used the "Sombra" approach on Sunset Shimmer, she would never have become the heroine she is today.
But under Sombra's advisement, Fluttershy can deal with situations where you have to be tough, if not brutal, to keep the peace.
When faced with these barbaric pirates who are preparing Starlight for an excruciating death, kindness probably won't work.
Fluttershy has the background in which she can find the balance with kindness and pure brutality.
You spoil us with another chapter so soon.
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All of that is clear and without room for debate. My comment was pretty fluffy now that I've had a second look at it, but it boiled down to 'despite Fluttershy's initial reaction to seeing Twilight alright and awake, how quickly will Her Royal Majesty Queen Fluttershy come out to play if the Equestrians continue spouting hippie bullshit?'
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Depends on how far they push it.
If they go so low as to accuse Sombra of brainwashing Fluttershy, well, I can imagine the Queen will give them quite a talking to.
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If you think about it one is work mode and the other is seeing friends and family mode. Plus Flutters had almost a year or so to get used to this and folks are quite adaptable.
Oh Fluttershy, that’s not how you interrogate someone...show her Batman.
why are is she being taken away from her family? Oh wait, either a grammatical error or fancy talk. I hath failed at the fanciful talk challenge, AKA Early Modern English.
okay, yep. This I could see in equine society in a darker setting. There never really seemed to be much power for men unless they had blood-status in the show. Sexism against male because they're a minority. In a dark setting where everyone seems to be prestigious is imaginable.
aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaand here's where things get fun. Honestly, I personally agree with a decent-sized portion of Sombra's philosophy in this story, I guess more than I expected. I forget exactly which parts. I'll have to reread sometime. Perhaps once the war portion finishes, do a re-reading. Or something else creative. I don't know.
I can't wait for the next chapter XD
but I will :3
well this is going to cause some drama but ultimately i think they put their feeling aside for a rescue mission for starlight
I like Winter Lilac.
Wait, does she have some kind of split personality? She went from Ruthless QueenShy to regular Fluttershy from one moment to the next. Though how will the "innocent" Equestrians treat her? For now, they are enjoying their reunion, but will surely tell her how "barbaric" her new subjects and especially her husband are at the next opportunity.
Worst move; insulting her unborn foal.
Great chapter cant wait for more
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More like living with Sombra and learning how to be a proper Queen in that Northern Realm has made Fluttershy bring out her darker and harder persona, that normally is buried deep inside her. Not to mention that we already know that Fluttershy is capable of changing herself to the point she actually forgets her old shy habits, or do I need to remind about personas like Snobshy, Hipstershy and Fluttergoth? She spent over a year at least as Sombra's wife and the rightful Queen of a land that was once filled with corruption, violence, and other atrocities. She actually HAD to change in order to mentally survive it. Equestria's morals would be met with brutal force here, where mares like Fluttershy were kidnapped, sold, beaten, raped, killed and even eaten on daily basis.
My fav quote here, that gives me the hibbie jibbies:
Holy crap
Another great chapter... You outdo yourself, Mick; any more, and I think I’ll have a heart attack from too much tension. In a good way.
Winter Lilac, Shantae, and Ethereal Moon are such a treat together. Definitely missed Shantae.
10171292 That's why she's the queen...
10171300 If this chapter and the ones that led up to it are any indication, your warning falls on deaf ears. Was a treat to see those three get some humble pie, courtesy of Lilac.
Please remove the Discord tag, it's too far into the story without an appearance at this rate.
Other than that and the too much Starlight, it's been an enjoyable read.
I enjoy these chapters, every time reading one.
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Can we see her killed off yet she about as Annoying as the... What the damn name of the showpony that always speaks in third person?
To the author of this story why were you even be worried about someone who study medieval history about weaponry in the Story for?
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**laughs in dark eldar**
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It's just a style choice. She has her own way she likes to do things. Nonconformity: It's the mark of a good artist.
I hoped that the death and destruction would break Twilight's black and white moral code, but maybe just meeting Fluttershy might be better. Smashing every preconception and all understanding for Twilight would certainly change something in her head.
This whole thing left a not in my got. This cliffhanger is awful. Each and every chapter of this attack must of been a pain on your readers.
I cant wait to see what you do to this not.
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Oh my god your a monster, almost two years, and this is what you gave us? this pain, wrenched and drawn out, sometimes for months at a time? so cruel.
How long do you wish to string us along with baited breath, for the nightmare that was a romance to end it's carnage on the cast?
How can glimmer survive the feasting table, or do you have the balls to see her dead?
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That's a fair criticism. However, I do plan for him to make his grand entrance near the end of the story. To be honest, he was supposed to make his appearence much earlier, but then I had the idea for the pirate arc.
I'm glad that you're at least enjoying it, though. A little bit of constructive criticism keeps us all humble.
Loved the new chapter. Can't wait for the next one. I wonder what Twilight is gonna wonder about more, Fluttershys Pregnancy or the fact that she was ordering someone to be tortured.
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Nothing wrong with torturing a pirate to gain information hell I would find it extremely funny and amusing to torture a pedophile because scum like them deserve to be treated like animals.
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After all there is the old saying the ends always justifies the means
Nothing like griffon torture to make your morning
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And bacon. Lot's of bacon. I'm talking copious amounts. Just, a whole slaughterhouse worth of.... You know what, I'm just going to lie back with my mouth open. Go get the shovel. It's made of bacon. I plan on eating it once the bacon is all gone.
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they get creative in Africa . last time I was there a year ago, they hung two by their ankles and took turns cuting small slices of meat off of them .. took all day.
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I thought they did that in China to those whom are accused of treason.
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If you think Sombra is OP, either you didn't pay attention to any battles or you haven't bothered to read that far into the story and just decided to make an assumption
Twilight, don't say something you'll regret
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In all seriousness, when you made Fluttershy angry, that is when you've really screwed up.
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I'd personally suggest adding an OC tag too. There's a lot of important supporting characters and it would be easier to add this to OC groups or to filer by the tag if it was there.
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That's rather offensive to the poor animals.
This should be 'nearby' right here. You whipped out the old homophones.
I hadn't realized you were aiming for medieval specific structures and the like with your fantasy. I always got a rather early/pre-Renaissancevibe from the work you put into settings like the Northern Realm and the exact happenings of the story. It's hard not to imagine your Sombra able to stand alongside the ranks of a horse Cosmio de' Medici, after all.
One thing that really stood out in this chapter is just how well you do combat. You really take all the best of powerful fantasy prose and weave it into something intense and violently charged for your combat scenes. It's thrilling stuff, and I've been out of combat writing for a while. Next time I need or want to write some good ol' action, I'll have to come back and take a few pointers from you. Your stuff really balances the potential for violence that comes from both spells and swords alike. That feels very realistic to the setting you're building here.