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It is funny how Equestria is seen all a mighty place but even the movie has shown how weak it is. Sombra is right.
Keep on, nice chapter.
Is that (winds of change) a lego ninjago reference I spy?!?!
...darn. I'm not sure if Sombra is lying here. It feels a little ham-handed, but...I really did like how this ended. I mean, we know that Twilight is forming a team to take down Sombra, so it'll be fun to see where this goes if he's not lying here.
This was a great chapter, probably one of the best. It shows Fluttershy's struggles really well.
This story is just sooo good.
After seeing the movie the concept of slavery outside of Equestria here is oddly on point.
Though I have a theory that isn't Celestia's fault.
Wonderful to see them reconcile. Viola better not get any ideas about splitting these two up!
Great chapter!
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It is not. I've never watched Ninjago. The only thing I know about Lego is that the movie was awesome, and every once in a while they come out with some pretty bad ass looking Star Wars sets.
That's it. This shipping is now Confirmed in my book.
Luna and Blank Page
Celestia and Baked Bean
Twilight and Artemis
Applejack and Caramel
Trixie and Aeron
Fluttershy and Sombra.
LOCKED IN!
I'm so loving this story, I'm glad Sombra had a change of heart for letting Fluttershy invite her friends over to the masion/kingdom, also like how quick this chapter came out (*♡∀♡)
Thx for the update on the story and i can't wait to see what happens next, keep it up (๑˃ᴗ˂)ﻭ
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what about pinkie pie?
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Semi locked Cheese Sandwich.
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i can see that what about rarity?
this is one of the best story's I have seen on this site in a long time. You have reinvigorated my enjoyment for mlp with it thank you and keep up the good work.
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Nothing locked in.
I am really enjoying this.
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for me its blueblood I think rarity could make a gentlecolt out of him yet
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XD Okay, but you aren't wrong! They have some pretty badass lego sets!
i love the ending of this chapter the best.
but we haven't seen much of what twilight is planning to do.
are we gonna see what happens with twilights plan in the next chapter, i hope so.
*thumbs up*
Wow. Even Sombra is no match for Fluttershy's cuteness.
Great chapter, but I have the impression their happiness could be like the calm before the storm.
I get the feeling that Fluttershy's friends will seriously buck up with her. Sombra trusts his wife, who in turn trusts her friends, but her friends would never trust Sombra in a hundred years. In fact, they are building some kind of elite rescue force of the strongest spell casters currently living.
I can already see how they would see such an "invitation" as the perfect opportunity of "liberarting" Fluttershy and everpony else from the "evii and merciless tyrant".
I get the feeling that the shitshorm level will eventually rise to a new level thanks to Twilight's plan.
This was awesome. Thus begins the evolution of a wondrous kingdom that would put both Canterlot and the Crystal Empire to shame.
Although, all of this enthralling story does nothing to alleviate the eventual sting that is Twilight and company coming to ruin everything...
YAY NEW CHAPTER!
Loved this one. I was wandering what would happen when Sombra came back, Was really, pleasantly surprised when he brought all the slaves back with him so they could be free.
Also I got a good chuckle from Sombra trying to remind her of the spilled wine lol.
Also a question just popped into my head...Will Fluttershy eventually get pregnant?
Keep Calm And All Hail King Sombra and Queen Fluttershy! Yay! good chapter, please make more!
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If that were to happen, I can already see mad scientist twilight having gone far enough over the edge that she would not hesitate to perform an abortion. With an axe.
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Not touching that with a fifty foot pole.
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LOL
I will never be hesitant for another update with this story, in spite of the action and gore of which persisted throughout.
I grant you a follow, a like, a watch, and a suspicious amount of favourites, on behalf of the King himself. 👉 👍 ⌚ 😻 👑
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Good, because that would frankly be as disturbing as Baron Omatsuri and the Secret Island.
I wonder how the others will react to the knowledge that the Alicorns willfully ignored this part of the word and in so doing allowed it to become a hellhole where only tyranny is the answer.
P.S. Did you check out Malekith the Witch King?
Oh my god I just realized. 'Zu Zu' was the name of the gargoyle in Futurama.
gargoyle-Griffin
Was that intentional?
Might want to remove that square bracket, other than that wonderful chapter as always.
I hadn’t thought of it until just now, but Sombra came a long way from “willing to kill everyone in the crystal empire because he’s mad at Celestia and Luna for imprisoning him for being a murderer and a slaver” to “Killing murderers and slavers because he think’s it’s deplorable to be a murderer and a slaver” in the span of a carriage ride at the beginning of the story...
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Pretty sure he wasn't really going to do that. I think he was using it as leverage because as far as Celestia knows, he would do it, and despite what Sombra says, she doesn't want her subjects to die.
I am definitely liking this story, reading it whilst playing with my chocolate lab puppy I love
Where ARE they getting food I wonder?
Oh.
Hmmm, movies usually say ‘oh-five-hundred’
Left square bracket right square bracket right square bracket right square bracket RIGHT SQUARE BRACKET ReEeEeEeEe!
I do fear Sombra being right, considering Sombra is seen AS a villain
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And that's the scariest part of any character-driven story, isn't it? To find yourself agreeing with the villain.
OH MY GOSH I HAVE FALLEN IN LOVE WITH THIS STORY
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So young Sombra who was making statues to talk to because he was so lonely, who had enough heart to give rescued slaves part of the plunder to they could move somewhere else, never thought to bring some back to his massive empty house?
I find it a bit implausible that this slaver society could be sustainable with killing so many of it's own people. There must be a major population centre nearby that they raid regularly that isn't doing anything to fight back for some reason.
Also a castle can be as small as a single room. Anything that's defensible with strong walls/ doors, no windows on the ground floor etc and serves as someone's primary residence is a castle.
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Your point? By that definition the manse still isn't a castle.