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Short but sweet. what can i say but, MOAR!!!
I really enjoy this story and the growing relationship between Fluttershy and Sombra. They have a very nice chemistry going there.
Wow, I love the characterization of Ethey, especially her reasons for joining Sombra. She kinda reminds me of Tyrion Lannister in that she's underestimated due to her dwarfism despite being intelligent, having a razor sharp wit, and being mature. I'm surprised that Cadence could be, at least according to Ethey's opinion, petty when delivering servants for Sombra by using those she disliked. The ending with Fluttershy getting comfortable enough to command Sombra on the bed was funny and I'm sure she'll have a pleasant morning.
wow like this chapter keep up the good work.
7955999 I'm not. She is the princess of
mindrape*love, afterall, and love, while a beautiful thing, is quite petty.*In her introductory episode, Cadence is shown making to arguing ponies, who may have only been freinds, or even SIBLINGS, fall in love. Thus, while very subtle, she did change their opinions, violating that most sacrosanct of places, the mind. Thus the princess of mindrape.
I can see Cadence being the jealous type, but the demonization of her by Ethereal seems a bit suspect. If what she's saying is true, Cadence is a horrible person by being a bigot (a bit weird for the demi-goddess of love). On the other hand, it could just be that Ethereal is (unintentionally) not a reliable source and is not interpreting things accurately.
God, Ethey sounds like a terrible employee. No wonder Cadance wanted to get rid of her.
Maybe Sombra, in doing what he felt was necessary, slowly turned into the monster that ponies remember him as?
I don't think Ethey was telling the WHOLE truth. She clearly has inferiority complex due to her height, so I believe she projects her anger at Cadence.
Good chapter by the way.
I do like this story but...why is going out of its way so much to hate Cadance? I mean, there is nothing but hatred for her in this story.
7956225 I don't think the story is going out of it's way to hate Cadance.
While Ethey is probably more biased against Cadance, I don't believe even Cadance is above being petty sometimes. No one is perfect even her.
The people now following Sombra are all going to be people dis-satisfied with Cadance or Equestria and let be real, there are always going to be people who are upset with the current rule now matter how good it is or looks. So "hate" for Cadance is going to be seen a lot if all the people who left are people who are like Ethey and Clash.
Dang Fluttershy.
7956355 Hmm...I guess that's true. Okay, I see your point.
" I looked out at my empire and saw the Lame, the sick, the spurned, and the forgotten...
Starved of love and robbed of decency, I gave them what little I could...
I named them Family. "
Queen Fluttershy The Kind, First of her name
As much I like this chapter, I have a hard time believing that all of the servants who volunteered to work under Sombra were solely of ponies Cadence personally didn't like. Some of them? Yes but all of them? No. Especially not from the supposed Princess of Love.
Maybe you should include ponies who were outcasts who are there due to the actions of other high nobles like Prince Blueblood?
7955999 I'm starting to feel unoriginal. A friend of mine commented on the last chapter stating that Clash reminded him of Barristan Selmey.... Ghu, I'm still a bit miffed that the HBO series was so quick to kill him off when he's still alive and well in the books.
YES
Assertive Queen Shy. I love it~ <3
by the end I'm expecting her to pick up sombra and drag him to the bedroom pinching his rump as he does.
This chapter really makes me appreciate Ethey, Fluttershy, and especially Sombra when you consider that even the nicest of individuals have their own bad sides.
I honestly felt like Ethey's contempt towards Cadence was justified, as well as feel like Sombra may actually develop more of a respected image if he takes in more of those who have been ostracized or bullied since childhood.
7957277 Beautiful...
Try making this a paragraph on its own.
This can be applied to real life as well...
Humans can be judgemental jerks.
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She was a teenager when she did that. Teenagers are not known for their judgement.
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I've been thinking that since the first viewing of A Canterlot Wedding! It's why I didn't catch onto the Fake Cadence until This Day Aria...
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If what she says is true, then I personally blame Celestia for making Cadance that way considering that Cadance spent most of her life under Celestia's nose. If it's not true, then I think Ethey is a little too quick to judge people.
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA! It is so good!
8557038 I don't blame anyone but the author for writing such painfully contrived characters all for the purpose of lifting up Sombra RATHER than actually developing him in any interesting way.
The cheapest and laziest 'Sympathy for the Devil' card to play is to demonize all the good guys.
This story is FLAGRANTLY wrong in canon, yet still lacks an alt-universe tag, which it sorely needs.
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Attention. We have a Troll in the comments. Repeat. We have a Troll in the comments.
Everyone please remain calm and ignore him. Now, please enjoy the story everyone.
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You know... to be fair, we never actually saw the servants enter the castle, and we haven’t seen any of the original crew since they arrived, so maybe the servants are a construct by Sombra to try and win over Fluttershy to his side so as to truly seperate the Elements...
Hmm so far this story makes for a very Teen fiction sort of story as it fits a bunch of what makes those stories work however it also falls into many of problems of teen fiction as well which sadly for me are the tropes of teen fiction I do not really care to read anymore.
This kind of makes sense, though. Ponies working for Cady should know that making such rude gestures towards her spouse would be unprofessional and off-limits stuff, and yet Cady was still kind enough to transfer them and offer them a new chance instead of really address it or demote anypony in any way.
*picks up hammer, grabs brain column, hammers it down with the hammer* NO! STAY DOWN! I understand your reasoning, but just sit back and enjoy the story. Keep the politics out of the... oh wait. Monarchs are part of politics. If you can get up, feel free to speak then.
The above was warning, now. This just makes me think 'A: This person is playing a trick to make certain political figures look good and others bad, B: This person is doing A and then going to pull the rug, making the one considered a villain seem like a hero' and then also, I saw somebody say 'Ethey was a bad servant.' and 'that was unprofessional'. What, I'm not allowed to look at the person I was tasked to help assist? Midgets are guaranteed to be treated equally? I listened to a comedian who told their tale from a story. A guy explicitly had a fear of midgets. A midget played this into a joke by running in and humping the guy's leg before they were to do the interview. The guy was screaming and kicking. Midgets aren't guaranteed to be treated equally. If people can have a phobia of somebody, somebody is also just going to be a dick to that person. I currently haven't noted any factors that'd leave something astray, aside from everybody believing somebody was evil, but they did the exact same thing all the time in history, demonizing of the Jews in Nazi Germany, demonizing of Martin Luther when he protested the Catholic Church, demonizing of Christianity as a whole by the Muslims from foundation to present, demonizing of America &/or Israel, by North Korea, Russia, Saudi Arabia, I Ran away, I raqed a few headshots, and other similar countries. Present time. Now, I also saw the guy labeled as a troll. Their whole argument was based on 'you didn't put the alt universe tag' cool. Find something that isn't labeled alternate universe that is a canon FANFICTION STORY. There's a reason it's fimfiction, a play off the name fanfiction.
Ethey reminds me of aquamarine from steven universe
I know I hate people who are different.
I like Ethey! She's a fun character to read about
Physical affliction brought on by over-exposure to aberrant magics? 'tis sometimes called "warp", and can manifest in any number of ways. Indeed, blood-red eyes are a very common first symptom.
Is this transformation only meant to have taken a few days? It's not really clear but would make more sense if over a few weeks, (unless you're saying there's mind spells going on).
Is this transformation only meant to have taken a few days? It's not really clear but would make more sense if over a few weeks, or months (unless there's mind spells going on).