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Starlight bit off more than she could chew.
Hope Starlight's not dead. I wonder how all the freed slaves are going to react to Twilight, Sunset, Moondancer and Starlight when they hear that they attacked the guy who freed them.
It'd be really convenient for Fluttershy to wake up right about now. Also, can't tell if Sunset is dead or just unconscious. Kinda hoping for the former though. They were idiots to try and take on a being who grew up fighting, a being who has infinite more experience in fighting, a being who slayed a dragon while barely out of his teens! They were doomed from the beginning.
Goddamn, Twilight’s plan backfired horribly. I was surprised that Twilight’s team went A-Team on Sombra by chaining him and then forming a zone that let Sunset and Twilight throw a vaporizing spell. The fact that Sombra survived and then demolished the girls one by one while magically exhausted was badass in and of itself. Sombra defeating the girls via hand to hand was brutal and cringeworthy, especially what he did to Moondancer, Twilight, and what he let Starlight do to herself. Starlight actually showed herself to be badass by magically increasing her body’s power and then fighting Sombra one on onthe after he already defeated the other three mare’s. Overall, this was one amazing chapter. I hope we see the aftermath of the fight soon as I don’t think Fluttershy would enjoy seeing her friends wounded.
One last question, when and how did Starlight learned hand to hand combat? I was surprised that she was the one to last the longest over Twilight.
Nexg Chapter Fluttershy wakes up and slaps some sense into twilight. Literally. With a steel hoof. Holding a granite hammer. From a high fly up
Heh,
Twilight: "But Fluttershy, we're here to save you from Sombra...!"
Fluttershy: "I am very, very. peeved. at. you. girls."
Sounds like Starlight used a magical variation of Rock Lee’s trick from his fight vs Gaara in Naruto.
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Most of them have spent their entire life fighting too. How could they possibly know Sombra has protagonist armor?
SUNSET! NOOOOOOOOOO!!!
Please be okay
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Moondancer: Has never been in a major fight if I recall
Sunset: Didn't directly fight Twilight in EQG, 'fought' the Dazzlings and Midnight Sparkle with music, not combat, and in LoE Midnight Sparkle did more fighting than Sunset
Starlight: Only real battle experience I can think of is the village and the time loop, but I'm not sure if she did any real fighting.
Twilight: Is probably the only one who actually fought a battle, which was against Tirek. Even then she was hopped up on the magic of multiple Alicorns. NM was defeated by the elements, probably fought a few changelings before Chrysalis was ultimately defeated by Cadence and Shining and Sombra was defeated with the crystal heart.
Though she is an Alicorn with great magical capabilities, she's most likely the only one that could stand against Sombra. The others are just normal unicorns, one being an ex-student of Celestia, so she does have knowledge but I doubt she has the proper power. Especially after not using unicorn magic for at least 3 years.
Sombra: Fought and killed countless bandits along with their camps, killed a dragon, single-handedly took over and ruled an Empire, lived alone with only his magic, wits and experience since he was 10, for ten years. He has more fighting experience than the 4 of them combined.
Also, I don't expect them to know about Sombra's protag armour, but I do expect them to realise that he is powerful and managed to stay in power for a reason.
i loved this story loved this chapter
i wonder what twilights punishment will be for jumping the gun.
and more importantly
WHERE THE HELL WHERE THE GUARDS!?
someones getting fired next chapter.
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Sombra also used the "throwing away stupidly heavy clothes to become faster" trick of that fight.
Starlight 's Kaioken vs. Taking extra weight out.
Sombra wins
I hope Flutters wakes up and stop the massacre. I do.believe Twi and gang will be imprisonned and Fluttershy will make Sombra pardon them.
Post epic (fitting) fight music!
Highest likes wins!!!
Oldie but a goodie!
I remember this having different cover art. Did you change it?
I hope Starlight, and Moondancer are dead. I personally don't like them so they can die.
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Starlight, I agree. Moondancer, not so much.
This actually a very good fight scene, easy to follow and understand while not sparing any details. Good job.
Whats it with these short chapters ? :(
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Yeah, I don't HATE Moondancer but I don't particularly love her. And Starlight is overrated. XD
whew for a second Sombra was dead
i see where this is going and i like it whens the next chapter
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True. For Those About To ROCK, We Salute You!
While excellently written, this chapter was hard for me to read. I don't want any of these characters to be hurt.
Twilight. You. Don't. Know. Anything.
This chapter was freaking awesome.
As much as I like Twilight and Starlight I can't help but NOT feel sorry for them. This is what they get being being rash and going in without doing ANY kind of recon.
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It builds the tension.
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To me Starlight Glimmer just seems like that one character who would never reveal all her secrets to anyone, not even her best friends. She seems like the type to avoid putting all her eggs in one basket. I think of her as someone who's just full of surprises. For her to come up with a new spell on the fly or to reveal an expertise in the martial arts doesn't seem too far-fetched.
As for Twilight Spark and Sunset Shimmer, they are (were) both students of Princess Celestia. Its revealed during a flashback in one of the episodes (don't feel like looking it up, but I'm pretty sure you know which episode I'm talking about) that Twilight Sparkle was personally hoof picked by Celestia due to her raw magic capabilities, and its not hard for me to imagine Sunset Shimmer being cut from the same cloth. That's why they were designated the heavy hitters of the group.
Moondancer's greatest skill is being adorable.
I hope Sunset and Moondancer as well as Starlight survive, Twilight is the who I am pissed off at.
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I'm more frustrated than tense but ok xD
DAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN IIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIITTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT!
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I hope so but she is in a bad way, they didn't even go to help, Damn it Twilight and Starlight.
I wonder what consequences will come out of this. Twilight will feel them the most and not only from Fluttershy herself. I don't think her "plan" was made with the other princesses' agreement. Especially Celestia will be furious if the other Unicorns, mostly Sunset, suffered more than just a concussion from Twilight's brilliance.
Even in the middle of a fierce battle the Snark Lord strikes again.
Well done! But one thing, where are the guards?
haha! the A-Team!
Twilight you idiot.
Although I was wondering since Fluttershy first asked for her friends to come over who nopony wrote a letter to see how the others were getting along?
Two immortals and their artifact wielding heroes couldn't kill him the last time, why would purple-smart and company decide they could do a better job?
I feel bad for the girls since they just tried to kill good ol sombra on his land. He is in the total right to kill them all and the laws prolly on his side.
Dear Author if Susnet Shimmer doesn't make it, the I hope you explain how Sunset's friends on the other side of the portal including her human counterpart are going to react to being told their best friend was killed due to a misunderstanding and stupid plan. I bet Princess Twilight is going to be in a lot of (pardon my french) shit. Also this is very unprincess like behaviour and she needs to be punished.
How much you wanna bet that when Flutters wakes up she's gonna say something along the lines of "I love him and he loves me!", only to be in that magic bubble again or something because Twilight thinks its some kind of mind control spell that he put on Fluttershy and the people of the manse, only to be shown otherwise and rightfully bashed on... that will be a fan-fucking-tasticly good chapter
I like how the chapter became an episode of Dragon Ball Z near the end
Sombra with his weighted gear and Starlight with her magical equivalent to the Kaio-ken
8553515 The eight Chakra Gates. Didn't think of that, myself.
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Kaio - what?
8558328 Kaio-crap!
You sure do know to make a chapter that amkes sad, angry and very impatient for next kudos to you sir. I just hope Susnet's okay although it doesn't sound like it grrrrrrrrrgggggggggggh.
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You wot, mate?
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It's a good chapter, you are really good at making a really enticing cliffhanger, I'm just very worried about Sunset.
I’ve read this three times! UPDATE!!!
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Ah, you fucker. The trademark symbol got me. Been a while since I wrote that chapter, but that's some funny shit.
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I am goign crazy awaiting the next chapter, great story. It makes me feel things. Is it wrong I want to organise a kill Princess Twilight mob right now.