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Are the others even gonna save her?
I can see it now. Starlight will die, and Twilight will blame Sombra for her death because 'they were only there because he took Fluttershy away from her home and turned her into a monster'.
…..
I've gone from furious to....
The meticulous, cold blooded anger one has when they pursue a twisted opponent. I don't just want Betha dead. I want her to suffer.
If Starlight does get through this, she'll have a greater respect and appreciation of the happy life she's lived, and greater sympathy toward those who have to fight just for the bare necessities.
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We'll see...
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Well, that is kind of true.
Sombra may have his reasons, but forcing someone to love you and ripping them away from what they know is grade-A kidnapping.
I hope what ever happen to Starlight shows Twilight what they are dealing with. I also hope starlight get out of this alive
Great chapter
Nothing like a good torture scene.
I can just imagine her talking to twilight.
T: "Sombra had no riggt to kill every single one of them! They should have been trialed!"
G: "They beat me, cut me, hung me, and made me EAT MY OWN COOKED FUCKING LEG!!!"
I want starlight to live so that she can show and tell her stupid friends how horribly wrong they were. God the anger at both the pirates and her is strong.
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Someone with absolutely nothing better to do, or gets some form of satisfaction from others knowledge of his/her general hate. Honestly, either way, its impressive just how dedicated they are.
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Someone who doesn't matter. So much red and green - reminds me of christmas
I feel for you Starlight, but you killed and as you said yourself, killing is wrong.
Shame on you!
Honestly though, I hope she gets out of this and learns not every place in peaceful like Equestria.
gosh i hate cliffhangers, and this got a little dark for my taste. though i should have expected that. still good though, can't wait for more
Brutal. I love it.
Poor Starlight's gonna need some prosthetic work done if she's gonna survive.
If is good...
Well, that was not an easy chapter to read. Here's hoping Starlight can survive this, though I can't give her good odds on ever mentally recovering..possibly for the rest of her life. And while some might want Betha to suffer now, its probably best to just crush her as quickly and decisively as possible, both because of the limited time sombra and starlight have, but because there's not really a point to try to match that kind of sadism.
well if she survives she never be the same as she once was like her leg her world view utterly gone
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Can't say I agree. Cruelty and sadism must be met with an equal (or bigger) amount.
Ooooo, look at that! Carte blanche to murder them in the most cruel way possible! :D
Poor Starlight. It’s over girl. Rest.
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She’ll still blame Sombra.
Eh. This story has lost its punch for me. It had me in the first few chapters, but the time skip was where my interest waned. Wish you the best of luck
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Of course she still him for what happened and she will also beat herself because she was the one who brought her there
Now I'm jittery. I now want to read more..
She's dead
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No hard feelings, mate. Feel free to come back anytime.
Oh man this chapter is one for the history books. Never read about someone being made to eat themselves before.
Really looking forward to the next one. Also please don't Kill Sombra.
The worst part of all of this is that somepony is going to give some sanctimonious speech saying that they should give peace a chance. I don't know which one, probably Twilight (just playing the odds), but someone is going to try and defend this... I can't even say barbarism because not even barbarians go this low.
I really hope that Starlights body is returned as a savage wake up call to everypony present with the default Equestrian mindset; New Haven isn't Equestria and Equestrian values simply won't survive there. It's such a metaphorically different world it may as well be literal.
Great chapter as always, you can write some really engaging scenes. I still think I’m gonna sob when Sombra eventually dies because it seems a lot like he will, but at least he’ll die a bad ass.
Excellent work. I'm interested to see how this ends, whether you take the tack of a more melancholy ending where Sombra dies and leaves his kingdom to Queen Fluttershy, or if he lives through it. I'm even more interested to see if Starlight Glimmer dies and if that becomes the catalysing event for Twilight et al to revise their (admittedly hypocritical) pacifism, or if she lives and her torture at Betha's claws becomes her inciting event to join Sombra (Or Fluttershy in the event of Sombra's demise).
Please by the dark gods of the warp kill this Insufferable pony bitch
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I hope so
While I'm leaning towards Starlight not making it through this (I really don't see a way out for her. Seconds away from death, and no help in sight, but until we've 'seen' the body she isn't dead) IF she survives I can imagine the conversation she has with Twilight.
"WE WERE WRONG! KILL THEM ALL!"
Though unlikely as it is, it would be interesting to see Starlight actually survive this somehow and have to live with what has happened to her and actually blame Twilight. That is, by "live with it" I mean she doesn't get her leg, cutie mark, or anything else regenerated through some magical-hocus-pocus healing spell.
Don't get me wrong, I could understand magically reattaching a cleanly (i.e., not torn off, mangled, etc) severed limb within a few minutes of the accident. But her leg was cut off (or maybe torn off, no details were given), then cooked and eaten. Not even duct tape or Krazyglue can fix that one.
Look, I love this story. But you are well and fully past the T rating when you have starlight glimmer graphically fed her own arm. Not to mention the rape.
This needs to be rated M.
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I'm glad you're enjoying it, and not to be argumentative, but I've read some T-rated fics on this site that tow closer to the line than this one. I forget what story it was, but I remember a rape scene from one of them that graphically described the details of the insertion method. As for the violence, I'll give it to you that it's a bit heavy at times, but I've kept the description of the gore at a PG-13 fantasy level.
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As much as I love this story it is not pg13 at all. It is very dark. Pg 13 stuff wouldn't mention children being raped or have descriptions of it. That alone puts it at a M rating. Pg 13 is some cursing and some intense violence that's not heavily detailed or persistent.
Wow, that was an exquisite chapter to read! Keep it up!
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Have you ever bothered to read the description of the story it does have violence and gore in the description or are you just a whiny little bitch who can't stand blood
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None of that, please.
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You do know it has the Captions of violence and Gore in the damn story?Like really stupid child what were you expecting? A story about magical rainbows and fairies that give candy to kids for being good?
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I asked you nicely. Now I'm telling you. Chill.
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It's called Giving a rather oblivious hint to a pair of idiots who can't read a stories Captions.
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More like its called not having reading comprehension and getting upset at something stupid. In what part was I complaining about the story being dark? All I mentioned was that it wasn't pg 13 and should be rated m. My first sentence was that I love the story how did you miss that?
I definitely was not expecting Starlight to die, huh.
@Starlight Glimmer
See when you do clownery, the clown comes back to bite
If I hear Twilight talking about peace love and harmony after this I might kill her myself
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Let's hope so I've always found her to be rather Annoying character
And Celeste dimwitted Subjects are in need of a very very harsh and cruel Reality checklist.
I want her to live just so she can go back to Twilight and show her that what Sombra is doing is good. But I swear, if she starts saying crap about how Sombra shouldn’t have killed them...
I’m going to jump into my computer and hand her over to the pirates.
Just finished reading it again and I can't wait for the next chapter!
I defiantly knew that Starlight wouldn’t last long in the hands of bloodthirsty pirates.
I hope that will wake Twilight up properly to how things work out there.
Damn, Fluttershy is brutal! And I like it. >:) (oops! That was last chapter! My bad!)