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MLPFan234


All hail, Twilight Sparkle.

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A sequel to my story First Kiss


Now that Twilight and Sunset are officially together, they must reveal it to their friends.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 23 )

Of course Flash would be a jerk about it:facehoof:

I love all of your stories so much! :twilightsmile:

6332439 nah people just didnt like him thats all

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6332439 I like Flash. But, I think he would be confused and Mad about his crush, falling in love with his ex-girlfriend.

6332466 Aw, Thank you. :twilightblush:

6332481 oh but question? why everyone hate flash sentry soo much?

Just a quick note that you're mixing up the uses of your/you're - the 3 times you wrote "your" in the story, they should all have been "you're"

6334126 Because he, "steals your waifu's" Or something. Twilight fanboy's can't handle the fact that Twilight likes him. :facehoof:

6334493 Alright, Thank you.

6335366 thats stupid, serisouly?! come on i mean yeah hes not much of character and stuff but no that excuse was soo stupid that he been keep calling waifu stealer
heck after rainbow rock last year, tons and tons of words and meme about flash sentry is waifu stealer was just my god
again its true hes not much of character but hes a cool character and plus the part he yelled at twilight wasnt his fault its the siren that manipulate all CHS students into battle of the bands

That was so sweet.

"You two are adorable together!" Pinkie squealed. "I'll call you two Sunlight!":rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

Love this story so cute and funny :heart::pinkiesmile::twilightsmile:

Did Flash have a pine cone up his ass in this chapter, I am pretty sure I heard a pine cone snap when Sunset said she was dating Twilight........ maybe it was just me.


Pine cones. :moustache:

6338063 YOUR PICTURE.
Much Ship
Such Love
Very Agree

Its too adorable, I'm gonna die.

6410389 I'm glad you like it. It's not really mine but I wanted to use it because it's so adorable.

Comment posted by SadisticFluttershy deleted Oct 27th, 2015

Very sweet. However it's very rushed, and the wording is awkward and clunky. Good enough for an upvote, and plenty of potential, though.

Good story, though add some descriptions, because this story is almost 100% dialogue.

"Sorry, Twilight," Said Flash. "I just feel that, your too good for someone who almost destroyed the school-"

SHUT UP FLASH AS IF YOU ARE BETTER

Good story but damn give some thoughts or smnth, the dialogue is way too many.

"Flash Sentry." Sunset blushed, as she had to mention his name again, that only brought her bad memories.

At first I was wondering why flash needs to know but after thinking it over I understand why since I bet he still has feelings for princess twilight.

"Wait, what?!" Flash shouted. "You two are le-"

He was probably gonna say lesbians probably.

"She used me Twilight, aren't you afraid that she'll do the same to you?"

She's changed flash, it's in the past, she's not the same person anymore.

"See, I told you everything will be alright." Said Twilight, looking at Sunset.

Yep, they accepted it which is great! :pinkiehappy:

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