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MLPFan234


All hail, Twilight Sparkle.

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A sequel to my other story. I Need You


Sunset and Twilight had never experienced this before. Twilight had just returned to the human world to meet Sunset again, and Twilight wanted to share something special with Sunset, a kiss.


Big thanks to Script for being the editor for this story.

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Comments ( 27 )

6308796 I did post a blog and comment on "Looking for editors" group, but nobody responded. I would love it, if you would be my editor! :twilightsmile:

6308852 Thank you very much! :pinkiesmile:

Why is this in the Silver Spoon group if Silver Spoon isn't a tagged character for the story?

6308950 Oh, Sorry. I didn't notice that. :facehoof:

6308962Hey everyone makes mistakes:pinkiehappy:
And yet another great sunlight story:twilightsheepish:

6309046 Thank you very much! :twilightsmile:

I love this so much! This is so cute! :twilightsmile:

Dawww.... That was short and sweet, yet another SunLight, felt a little rushed, had some spelling and grammar errors, but regardless I loved it. :twilightsmile:

6309319 Thank you, very much. :ajsmug:

6310343 My only criticism is that you used a ton of commas. Otherwise, I liked it.

6310508 Yeah, but thank you anyway. :twilightblush:

awww it so adorable when they kiss they're so shy about it :heart::raritystarry::twilightblush::twilightsmile:

6310342 always love my daily dose of sunlight :rainbowkiss::rainbowlaugh::twilightblush:

This shipping is just to cute. Sunlight ftw

Comment posted by SadisticFluttershy deleted Oct 27th, 2015

The World is Ruled by Ships :derpytongue2:
Love this sires its cute great story :heart::pinkiesmile::twilightsmile:

Another cute story.

Twililight
Twililight
Twililight

I am okay with this, it gives me a fuzzy feeling and reminds me of Bud light, except its a pretty pony princess.

Get Twili Light on offer here, first come first served.

SUNSET: Slams her bits on the table "MINE!" :heart::pinkiehappy:

Found this through the Silver Spoon group? Still confused there.

6964415 Yeah. that was a mistake I made a long time ago.

For some reason, I fall off my chair whenever I read SunLight fanfics. I fell off my chair but, luckily, my purple and pink highlighted hair girlfriend caught me just in time.

lol love the kiss but the build up to it is so akward I nearly fell off laughing
Sorry if it sounds mean

"Fluttershy got sick yesterday, and Rarity is going to be busy this night with helping her parents," Applejack explained, looking down.

Poor fluttershy. :fluttercry:

"Hey guys!" said Pinkie, opening the door, "She's in bed, I came here earlier."

Well at least that answers my question where pinkie was.

Sunset reached her hands out to Twilight, grasping her by her waist, and pulling her in. Sunset quickly pushed her lips onto Twilight's lips, kissing her deeply. Both Twilight and Sunset blushed as their lips were sealed togheter. Twilight wrapped her arms around Sunset, as they continued to kiss longer then they expected. Sunset felt such a nice feeling inside her as she was kissing Twilight. Suddenly, Sunset brought out her tounge, and started to french kiss Twilight, and then they stopped. Gasping for some air, Sunset let Twilight's lips go. She looked into Twilight's eyes, and gave her a kiss on her forehead while chuckling.

:twilightsmile:

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