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Enigmatic Otaku


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I'd do a proper review, but frankly it's nine in the morning and I am not a morning person, so I'll just post this instead.

Whether it was the former or the ladder,

Yeah, for the ladder.

Aren't you supposed to strike trough at 5 lines?

Sure, he's a murderer, but if he had stepped on Scary the spider, well now, that would have been unforgivable.

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Steps on Scary, Score dies.

"My fifth mark was a little more simpler, a pegasus stallion who was such a promising candidate for the Wonderbolts.

More simple, or just simpler.

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With tallies, the fifth line is a strike through the other four.

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Ah, I see what you mean. Yes, I think I already established that one tally is striking through four.

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Understood. I was just elaborating on what another commenter was saying, since there seemed to be a little bit of confusion.

I imagined him looking like zsasz

good shit, good shit!
gotta love the serial killer pony stories :heart:

But...it wasn't until I crept into the young dragon's room, hovering over his bed with the knife held in my teeth, that I made one...fatal...mistake...
"And that mistake was...?" asked the mare.
With a roll of his eyes, Score Keeper then said, "Well...as it turns out...dragon scales, even when young, are much tougher than they appear... I might as well have been pricking him with a needle

i am honestly amazed at how dark this is that no one had added it to that group before. it might also do to add it to the extremely unsettling group as well. regardless, needs a few thousand more views.

Woah this is messed up beyond belief but also intersting concept I wonder if he will show up again

Very nice and spooky. You should definitely try out another grim tale sometime because the slow build here was 👀👌.

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