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It's good please continue
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Ponies are A**holes
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I like your story it's really good but I've noticed some spelling mistakes here and there there not bad, I can understand what they mean and what they are supposed to be.
Sorry if I come across as a negative person I just thought you should know so they can be fixed and make the story better to read for some people who might get put off by the spelling mistakes.
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If I do not notice any spelling mistakes it is because I am typing on a tablet so my fingers an slip.
Thanks for telling me
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There is an app called grammerly I think it should help with fixing them faster.
I'm happy I could help you out.
If Zecora is anything to go by, I’m surprised the two didn’t just kill the baby right there at that moment.
I wonder what happened to the pegasi that gave life to the colt. (Sad that the story has been inactive for a couple years.)
Great work
Love it
As much as I love the Tarzan references, you REALLY need to work on your grammar and writing skills. It was difficult to the point of painful reading this chapter. I hope the next few chapters are of higher quality than this as your writing style grows and improves. If not, I STRONGLY suggest you get a beta-reader to review and correct your chapters before posting them.
Well, it's verified, you need to find a beta-reader
interesting <3