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MIXED FEELINGS....
ok with it?
annoyed? (Scootaloo's crazy speaking)
grossed-out?
WTF?

I dunno how the story's gonna end up...WE'LL JUST HAVE TO SEE!

Flutterscoot?????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????

I dunno. But then I scrolled down and looked at the last sentence of the first chapter.

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I think I'll give it a go.

Oh lord. I'll give it to you, the first chapter is fairly well written, made me laugh ... hope you don't mind if I don't read any more...

I dunno' why, but this has greatly intrigued me...

Tracking...

Great writing! Can't wait to see what you do with it.

Interesting...
But a little random...

Oh lol, I can tell that this is going to be interesting :rainbowlaugh:

I'm strangely intrigued. Hurry up with moar!

It's me.
...I'm back.
This is really well written, and it's been niggling at me. So despite my previous comments I will track and come back and see how this progresses ... I have a nasty feeling that I'm going to enjoy it, and feel like a very bad pony, but nonetheless, I watch with interest.
Now hurry up and post more, dammit! :rainbowwild:

Great start, added to my reading list.

BTW, little typo? "the water coming from her noise" Should that be nose?

Well I think they learned rule no. 1 when it comes to curing hic-ups: NO MAGIC POTIONS!!!!!

649453 Don't mind at all, I know the direction I'm going won't be to everyone's taste, but what the heck. I'm glad you enjoyed, if only for the first chapter :raritywink:

It started off really great, but after i finished the first chapter i just can't keep reading this.
Sorry but this ain't my cup of tea. Good luck!

What's with all the Fluttervestite fics lately?

...Huh, Futaloo - that's new!

Just curious about the status of a second chapter?

895603
In the works; mostly waiting on my ability to sit down and finish writing it.

Looks to be pretty interesting. Gonna have to check out the next chapter.

I really liked the Calvin and Hobbes reference too. :pinkiehappy:

do you still plan on finishing this?

1158698
Yep! Just been... a lot of stuff in the way. And, you know. Pandaren. :twilightsheepish:

1354730
My lack of what now?

>Hiccups
>CMC attempt cure
>Results in Scootaloo growing a penis

Yeah, this is like something I'd write. :rainbowwild:

But seriously, you captured the CMC's characters pretty well. There are a few little technical quibbles (a few missed commas, and some of the dialogue spacing is weird), but for the most part this way quite entertaining.

is scootaloo going to do it with fluttershy first i wonder

Fluttershy was at a loss. “Well… What do you want me to do about it?” She blinked at the filly, ducking her head and peering briefly under the other pegasus’ belly.
Scootaloo sighed. “I heard you’ve had experience in handling this sort of thing. I was hoping you could, y’know, help me out.”
"E-Experience?” Fluttershy ducked down with a squeak of embarrassment. “Well, I… that is, I haven’t had any complaints….” She trailed off.
“Awesome!” Scootaloo bounced in place, her little wings buzzing. “It can’t be that different from poison joke, right?”
“Poison… oh, oh! Yes. Poison joke, of course that’s what you meant.”

Hmmmmmm, so that's what Fluttershy does in her spare time? It's always the quiet ones, isn't it?:trollestia::yay::moustache:

Fluttershy sang bass not tenor. :twilightblush:
Minor thing but it annoyed me :twilightsmile:

I wonder when a new addition will be added...

If you continue this soon i'll read it like it's a bag of crisps, in 10 seconds flat! (rimshot) :eeyup:

So we've got Futaloo, Pedoshy and Peeping Belle. A winning combination, in my book.

I got a feeling that the other two crusaders might end up having their own fun with Futaloo in the later chapters aside from just Flutters.

OH YOU FUCKER! NOW I HAVE TO WAIT UNTIL AFTER SCHOOL TOMORROW!

Time to read this new chapter! Once I get my strength back, of course. :rainbowlaugh:

3751998
:rainbowderp: Well, this is awkward...

This would be a much less awkward fic if it wasn't for blatant genetic abominations.

I want to see Sweetie Belle be a pervert so I guess I'll read it and just try to blindspot Futaloo.

3868701 Hermaphrodites do exist you know. Thery're rare but I wouldn't call them genetic aboninations.

3868701 You were warned!
And genetics has nothing to do with it.
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3868867 Depends what you mean by realistic. They exist, rare though they may be, and all this is beside the point as this one was made with magic anyway.

Fluttershy going all "Oh shit yes, underage cock" could probably stand to be explained at some point.

*sees fic*
*click*
*read description*
...
*sigh*
I'm so going to the special hell for this... Fuck it. :rainbowwild:

lol it takes balls to get over the hiccups lol. wonderful first chapter I was laughing so many times at there antics (tis why I love the CMC) you really did well in portraying there characters in this. kinda wondering what scoots is gonna do now that she's joined the 'ball'ers side hehehe

ya know I find it odd I've never been that big a fan of the futa stuff, but reading this seems more fascinating then the actual pics of futaloo. tho still can't get clopper dudes futaloo pics outta my head as I read this lol. I look forward to seeing more of this.

3855482 It would take you 10 seconds? I pity your slow reading. (sad trombone) ;3

YEEEEEEEEEEAAAAHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:rainbowdetermined2::rainbowdetermined2::rainbowdetermined2::rainbowdetermined2::rainbowdetermined2::rainbowdetermined2::rainbowdetermined2::rainbowdetermined2::rainbowdetermined2::rainbowdetermined2::rainbowdetermined2::rainbowdetermined2::rainbowdetermined2:

3869750 Perhaps equestria follows a radically different biological order, and the creatures we see as mammalian pony-things are actually some freakish and alien species we can't comprehend that by sheer chance developed a body plan vaguely similar to earth's ponies. Sort of like Pierson's Puppeteers from Larry Niven.

But like I said. it's not genetics. it's the result of the Cutie Mark crusaders trying to make a potion. Last time they did that they smashed up the town and nearly killed Cheerilee and big mac, so this is positively benign!

3868884
considering said underage cock is sprouting from Scootaloo, i think there are probably bigger questions afoot. short answer: The plot says so. Long anser: The plot says so and why the heck not.

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