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ePonymous


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It's a kind of pairing i haven't seen before and Celestia help me i liked it! :rainbowwild:
Looking forward to more from you.:moustache:





oh btw...........FIRST

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Erm, in fact, you were the second to post lol

Dude. Not. Cool. (talking to the comment above.)








FIFTH!

Well now. This is interesting. You write with enough familiarity that Im wondering if you actually do—or have—live in Seattle. Always cool to meet another pone-fic writer of the NW.

Not sure if gusta... good story though. :scootangel:

I like this because I've seen a million first person guy x pony fics, but never lesbian girl on pony action before.

This is such a sweet, emotional story I couldn't help but d'aww after reading it.

It's a shame it hasn't gotten more attention, because it really explores so many things so well. Namely, the world crossing thing, the female/female interspecies angle, a realistic take on Dash, and the geniune romance along with the sex. I almost wish you made an epilogue where they do get back to equestria, just for some reactions and worldbuilding. But that's just my greed speaking, and it's quite nice the way it is.

Its not often I get the chance to read a ponyxfemhum romance the love making was spicy and the love felt genuine!

Works really well for a short story, but obviously it'd be fantastic if you continued.
Loved it either way, though.

A very inventive clop story and very well done to boot. I have to say this is one of the most enjoyable stories I have read in a long while. I really like stories that take advantage of Megan and the G1 cannon and manage to weave it into FIM. Also the sex was happy and full of love, just the way it should be. Bravo sir! :yay:

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I agree, it would be great if the author did a sequel.

This is very interesting, using Megan from G1 in an FiE is a good idea I might work on one myself sometime.

You know, I've read this about a dozen times. And... I love this. You wrote both characters note-perfect. The sex is... romantic. It's two beings who genuinely love each other and you conveyed that great. I can honestly see Dash and an adult Megan acting like this towards each other.

The only 'bad' thing I can see? I want more. I really, really do. I know this is an older story, and marked 'complete', but it if ever continued or a sequel is posted I'd be reading that.

can there be a sequel for this? I need to see what happens when they find a way back home and what her friends think of her new fillyfriend.

I can’t resist leaning in, nipping through the short fuzz of fur so that my teeth tease her throat and make her suck in a breath.

Is there a group specifically about humans acting predatory-like like that? For whatever fucked up reason, I find I'm heavily into that shit. Like "fuck you and fuck your herd, meet my fucking pack".

In case it's not obvious: prey species travel in herds; predators travel in packs

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