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This was pretty good, but it felt a bit rushed. A few minor grammatical errors (visitors voice ) but overall an enjoyable read. Good job!
Sequel!
I thought she was blindfolded?
3665504 Indeed!
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Fixed!
Sorry about that. I actually etarted this story months ago but couldn't bring myself to finish it since I'm not that fond of rapefics. When I finally came back and finished it off, I nearly forgot about the blindfold. I fixed one inconsistancey, but you got the other. Thank you for letting me know so I could fix it!
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Thanks! Honestly, it is a little rushed. I haven't finished and posted a story in so long I wanted to get SOMETHING out there. I'll be making sime improvements and such to it soonly.
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Sequel? How so? Honestly, this story is probably done, but if you can give me an idea I might can push it further. I'm glad you enjoyed it though.
It was short, could have been much longer with more detail. I enjoyed it but I would have liked more time on the sex portions.
Good story
I really love your pastebin stories.
Pinkies plan is my favourite!
3665744 It's easy. You already set it up for a hyper-preg sequel.
yes please make a sequal
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I could see hyper-preg being a thing, but anything involving babies is generally difficult to do without being creepy.
I suppose i could do another chapter in the future where pinkie is showing and applejack decides to "top her off" so to speak.
I really don't think i can or should do anything around her giving birth though. Maybe right before she gives birth though...
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Yeah, it could use a little more time and love in some places. For me it's more about the inflation than sex, but no reason to skimp on the sex regardless. I like several of the stories you've written btw!
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Thanks! I keep trying to come up with some sort of follow up to that story, but I keep coming up empty. Can you tell me what you liked the most in it? Maybe then i can find something to focus on.
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either of those would be exceedingly hot. I think we just want more Pinkie with a huge belly.
3668954 When I said hyper preg, I meant like you did with that Pinkiedash one with the balloons. Not actul younglings, but a side effect of mixing the separate magical properties.
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Aww, thank you.
Please I beg you write an epilogue I would love a showing of how many they actually had. plus I'd love to hear about pinkie having multiple sets of l like twins triplets and such while hormonelly out there during labor. Jus saying
This is a great way to take things to the extreme but an ApplePie clop extravaganza, EPIC!!!
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I liked it because it has huuuuge Inflation.
I also love the details in your stories :)
"Turning tables " is also a good story.
(Sorry for my english :) )
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The huge inflation was the number one thing I wanted in that story. I'll see if I can make a sequel to Pinkie's Plan work. Also, your english is great! It's better than some of us who write it natively!
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This story WILL continue. I've already started planning things out. It will have around three more chapters with each one getting closer to her giving birth.
Buckle up peoples. I have no clue what I am doing!
My seat-belt is already in place, I am ready for a wild ride.
Seems a little rushed, and could use more detail, but over all, it's not bad! I would like to see how many foals they have. That would be interesting xD Only one problem I have with this, is you can't smash through a cervix, since... well, the girl would bleed to death and die..
BUT. It's not like it's real life or anything. So, good job. :3 I liked it.
Why wouldn't you do this?
Ehh decent, too short, explain previous events with twilight and Zecora.
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Not alot to explain, really. Twilight used a spell to make Pinkie's body release more eggs at once, and zecora gave applejack a "futa" potion. One or the other would be fine. Both of them, well, that's hyper pregnancy territory.
I'm kinda halfway working on a few more chapters, but it's not a high priority to be honest.
K could u do one with cadence, and luna, i feel they would work well together, with cadence in ajs place
this was awesome
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Stay tuned. I'll be adding more to this story at some point featuring a hyper pregnant pinkie pie.
I make a prediction somehow (guessing the pinkie is pinkie plan) this second volley of fun either gave her even more foals or they made the foals com out each about the size of the cmc's when they come out
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Nah. When a creature becomes pregnant, their body basically prevents them from getting pregnant again except in very, very rare cases. This won't be that kind of case.
SO MUCH UNF.
Ahem. Favourited.
this pleases me
Verry Good!
One thing I noticed is that you tend to use particular words in your work a lot: I've seen the "weather balloon" comparison crop up a fair bit in your stories. Maybe a different word, or not so much comparisons in general? Just an errant thought.
Also unf.
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Trust me, I've noticed this as well. The problem is conveying the size without a picture. I've gotten a little bit something different planned for the final chapter of this where I don't really compare them to an object size-wise. Though i do have to compare to explain shape.
Eh, you'll see. Not many people write inflated pon anyway.
And that's what ye get for reading that.
Love it.
I thought it was a good story even if ApplePie is not close to my head canon
You are a bad person and you should feel bad.
That said, nice concluding chapters.
You need to do a version of this with Twi-Dash
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http://www.fimfiction.net/story/104086/rainbows-in-the-night-sky
just what ya asked for
4765161 Does it have cum inflation and/or hyper-preg?
i beg to know the outcome of this and i agree with rikusora i'd love to see a rainbow /twilight
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I don't really have a good hook in mind for twidash. I have a hard enough time writing twidash in non-clopfics, much less in hyper-preg.
What about "Why would you do this" comments directed at the other people posting comments?
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Those are fine. The goal with that disclaimer is just to let potential trolls and idiots who are clicking on a fetish story know that they're wasting their time.
Fabulous
I actually enjoyed this.
...
...Why, boner? Why?
(Now if you'll excuse me, my arm has pins & needles. Ow...)
3994873 ...you have got to be kidding me.
5212210 what ? :)
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YAY PINKIE JACK!!! I NEVER FIND GOOD PREGNANT PONY STORIES LIKE THIS!! EVEN THOUGH I LIKE STORIES WHERE FLUTS OR PINKIE RAPE DASH, THIS WAS STILL PRETTY F@#*IN AWESOME!!!!!
Good work!
YAY PINKIE PIE!!!!!!!!!!!!
I loved it so far can't wait to see what happens next.