I make a prediction somehow (guessing the pinkie is pinkie plan) this second volley of fun either gave her even more foals or they made the foals com out each about the size of the cmc's when they come out
One thing I noticed is that you tend to use particular words in your work a lot: I've seen the "weather balloon" comparison crop up a fair bit in your stories. Maybe a different word, or not so much comparisons in general? Just an errant thought.
YAY PINKIE JACK!!! I NEVER FIND GOOD PREGNANT PONY STORIES LIKE THIS!! EVEN THOUGH I LIKE STORIES WHERE FLUTS OR PINKIE RAPE DASH, THIS WAS STILL PRETTY F@#*IN AWESOME!!!!! Good work!
I make a prediction somehow (guessing the pinkie is pinkie plan) this second volley of fun either gave her even more foals or they made the foals com out each about the size of the cmc's when they come out
One thing I noticed is that you tend to use particular words in your work a lot: I've seen the "weather balloon" comparison crop up a fair bit in your stories. Maybe a different word, or not so much comparisons in general? Just an errant thought.
Also unf.
YAY PINKIE JACK!!! I NEVER FIND GOOD PREGNANT PONY STORIES LIKE THIS!! EVEN THOUGH I LIKE STORIES WHERE FLUTS OR PINKIE RAPE DASH, THIS WAS STILL PRETTY F@#*IN AWESOME!!!!!
Good work!
I'm sure gonna miss being able to miss seeing you girls," the pink mare lamented
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Why in fifty hells are Pinkie's friends not visiting her at all for weeks?