This was pretty good, but it felt a bit rushed. A few minor grammatical errors (visitors voice ) but overall an enjoyable read. Good job!

Sequel!

Though she didn't have a good angle, she saw enough of the bloated sack hanging off of the cowpony's crotch to see it churn and pump it's payload into Applejack's twitching member.

I thought she was blindfolded?

3665504 Indeed!

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Fixed!
Sorry about that. I actually etarted this story months ago but couldn't bring myself to finish it since I'm not that fond of rapefics. When I finally came back and finished it off, I nearly forgot about the blindfold. I fixed one inconsistancey, but you got the other. Thank you for letting me know so I could fix it!

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Thanks! Honestly, it is a little rushed. I haven't finished and posted a story in so long I wanted to get SOMETHING out there. I'll be making sime improvements and such to it soonly.

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Sequel? How so? Honestly, this story is probably done, but if you can give me an idea I might can push it further. I'm glad you enjoyed it though.

It was short, could have been much longer with more detail. I enjoyed it but I would have liked more time on the sex portions.

Good story
I really love your pastebin stories.
Pinkies plan is my favourite!

3665744 It's easy. You already set it up for a hyper-preg sequel.

yes please make a sequal

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I could see hyper-preg being a thing, but anything involving babies is generally difficult to do without being creepy.

I suppose i could do another chapter in the future where pinkie is showing and applejack decides to "top her off" so to speak.

I really don't think i can or should do anything around her giving birth though. Maybe right before she gives birth though...

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Yeah, it could use a little more time and love in some places. For me it's more about the inflation than sex, but no reason to skimp on the sex regardless. I like several of the stories you've written btw!

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Thanks! I keep trying to come up with some sort of follow up to that story, but I keep coming up empty. Can you tell me what you liked the most in it? Maybe then i can find something to focus on.

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I suppose i could do another chapter in the future where pinkie is showing and applejack decides to "top her off" so to speak.

I really don't think i can or should do anything around her giving birth though. Maybe right before she gives birth though...

either of those would be exceedingly hot. I think we just want more Pinkie with a huge belly.

3668954 When I said hyper preg, I meant like you did with that Pinkiedash one with the balloons. Not actul younglings, but a side effect of mixing the separate magical properties.

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Aww, thank you.

Please I beg you write an epilogue I would love a showing of how many they actually had. plus I'd love to hear about pinkie having multiple sets of l like twins triplets and such while hormonelly out there during labor. Jus saying

This is a great way to take things to the extreme but an ApplePie clop extravaganza, EPIC!!!

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I liked it because it has huuuuge Inflation.
I also love the details in your stories :)
"Turning tables " is also a good story.
(Sorry for my english :) )

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The huge inflation was the number one thing I wanted in that story. I'll see if I can make a sequel to Pinkie's Plan work. Also, your english is great! It's better than some of us who write it natively!

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This story WILL continue. I've already started planning things out. It will have around three more chapters with each one getting closer to her giving birth.
Buckle up peoples. I have no clue what I am doing!

My seat-belt is already in place, I am ready for a wild ride.

Seems a little rushed, and could use more detail, but over all, it's not bad! I would like to see how many foals they have. That would be interesting xD Only one problem I have with this, is you can't smash through a cervix, since... well, the girl would bleed to death and die.. BUT. It's not like it's real life or anything. So, good job. :3 I liked it.

Why wouldn't you do this?

Ehh decent, too short, explain previous events with twilight and Zecora.

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Not alot to explain, really. Twilight used a spell to make Pinkie's body release more eggs at once, and zecora gave applejack a "futa" potion. One or the other would be fine. Both of them, well, that's hyper pregnancy territory.

I'm kinda halfway working on a few more chapters, but it's not a high priority to be honest.

K could u do one with cadence, and luna, i feel they would work well together, with cadence in ajs place

this was awesome

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Stay tuned. I'll be adding more to this story at some point featuring a hyper pregnant pinkie pie.

3994873 ...you have got to be kidding me.

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I loved it so far can't wait to see what happens next.