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Wow, although this was kind of a strange story, I liked how it had a bit of a nice little story to it, the mirror pond ponies were getting lonely so they kinda used Twilght to get some friends (or atleast that's what I got from it).
It was a bit of a weird story, but the little story in it was nice :P.
VinylScratch13 out.
There are nowhere near enough of these sort of fics on here.
Why would you do this?
Wut. Such a weird story...
Awww, I started out thinking the Mirror Pool Pony was evil for doing that to Twilight, but it wasn't. It really regretted that and appreciated that Twilight didn't mean to hurt them. Yay!
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Well, thats pretty much it. During the cloning Pinkie Pie did and the subsequent destruction of the clones, there ended up being fewer of the mirror pool ponies. when Twilight offered to help, it took her up on the offer.
I just can't bring myself to write a horribly dark fic where something bad happens to one of the mane six with no silver lining.
oh that’s hot. never tired of story like this. :D
very nice! my only issues is that she goes from reluctance to acceptance of being raped way to fast. spend at least a sentence or two about how the pleasure she feels is fighting with her horror at what's happening before she finally breaks.
This was an overall O.K. story. Yes, it was well written and overall grammatically correct. I just have issues with how some of it feels forced and rapid. I couldn't really see Twilight warm up to her rapist that fast or be in the situation she was in.
I'm not saying that this was bad, but it wasn't great either.
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That would normally be the approach i take with such a fic, but the part where a piece of the goo pone falls onto Twilight's horn explains why she accepted it so quickly. It was drugging her mind and easing her fears.
Without such a plot device, I don't think I could even write a scenario where Twilight warms to her attacker. She's way too strong willed. Pinkie pie and Rarity i MIGHT see eventually enjoying it, and if a perverted sort of Fluttershy was written, maybe her too. But RD, AJ, and Twilight... i just don't imagine them coming around. That's just me though. Glad you enjoyed what you did though!
wow, i really liked this!
Actually this is pretty good I thought I would be wondering why I read this.
This story is weird...
I'll favorite it anyway. >_> <_<
There ought to be more stories about goo ponies. Not necessarily clop, but I just find sentient ooze beings so fascinating whenever I find them.
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Get in line, man. I'm wondering why I wrote it!
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The two things that seem to be very rare on this site are breast expansion/lactation, and goo pone. I like the idea of a goo creature using a pone to reproduce, preferably with no negative effects to the pone.
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Do eeet maaaan... Nobody's looking!
I am now watching you
here have a mustache.
ok, i just got done reading this for the 17 time, and i still love it! there ought to be a sequel where she goes back, and is followed by rainbow dash and applejack. and when they get there, they see her being used in that same manner, but don't know it's consensual sex, so they try to save her. then they get used in the same manner, and everypony winds up having sex with one another. perfect ending!
A bit too rapey for my taste but you have good ideas.
I really liked the story, but maybe it could start a bit more slowly? I don't mean to offend or anything, but the beginning is a bit rushed.
Great story, though
The whole mirror pool idea was new! And very... Interesting 
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It actually started as a tentacle rape thing but I...
I'm a wuss. I couldn't write it like that. If something like this HAD to happen to one of the mane six, there HAD to be something good come of it.
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Nah, no offense taken. All of my stories are rushed at some points. Most in multiple places. Unfortunately, I don't have a ton of time to devote to these stories, so my non-clop account gets the majority of the love.
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Thanks for the watch, and for the mustache i suppose.
I'm glad you could look past the flaws enough to enjoy it.
People like you are the only reason i take any time out to write clop.
3889384 It is better that way, anyway.
I am STILL not sure what I just read. But what the hell, It was good.
Boner, what the fuck?
"No, man, just no."
Seriously?
"NO."
We're really going to ...
"We are not having this discussion."
But it's Purple Smart!
"Dammit, I'm out!" *sound of a door slamming*
Well ... shit.
Not bad. One question, though. HOW THE FUCK DID I GET HERE!?
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You're in that part of the internet.
You done fu--ed up son.
I don't know what I just read or why I read it but.........I liked it. good job
This made me squeal because you put twilight through a much worse breast situation than me
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okay, you've officially piqued my curiosity...
4833137 But how did I do that?
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"This made me squeal because you put twilight through a much worse breast situation than me"
What did you mean by this? I don't even see any stories on your profile.
4835423 I'm talking about in real live
interesting idea, I like it
i.imgur.com/FGFo3.jpg
AWESOME STORY MOAR LIKE IT PLZZ
Well, old habits die hard like I said before...
Its.
Again, better to use dashes instead.
Forgot your closing quotation mark.
Thinking about the size that she grew on both occassions... Had a massive wow boner. Not often you do see something like that happening with the fics on the site or just in general. Nice work. Also hoping that there are more fics from you to come. And from the ponies as well.
Huehuehue.
I think I'm gonna like this read *nose bleed*
more took their place
Hehe goo ponies how silly