• Member Since 19th Apr, 2013
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callyoops2


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kinda wanna see a chapter about the next day

A pony water bed? I gotta get me one of those. Also, hey Rainbow!
:rainbowhuh:Yeah?
Got milk?
:facehoof: You're an idiot.
Why yes Twilight I am! Goodnight folks and I hope to see you again. Same bat time, same bat channel.

OK, I get the inflation fetish, but you could have made the actual clop actually erotic.

:twilightoops: okay, okay, if there weren't comments at the bottom I would have stopped cold, I hadn't realized that I had realized what they were doing and honestly that kind of scared me a bit, thought they were going to kill Twilight in a horrid way for some unknown reason :pinkiesick: (which would have been juicier in my option, but I digress, I'm a sick minded person), but it turned out better than I thought, end of this chapter left something to be desired, will likely read the next chapter, but this is clearly a hate or like thing,
don't fear it doesn't explode your stomach *chuckle*

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Gold star, stay classy, would read comment again. I would not mind one myself. I'm sure it would put tempur-pedic out of business.
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Sorry about that. See, for people afflicted with this fetish as i am, it is erotic. I am mainly putting this and other stories up so they can be added to the group for this sort of stuff because this kind of content is somewhat hard to find on this site.

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There are people who enjoy popping and such in these sorts of things. I am not one of these people. I have a hard enough time writing these things against their will, much less hurting them in the process.

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No I can understand it, but you didn't add in that they weren't in pain, you implied that it didn't hurt, but I can only imagine that expanding like that would dislocate bones, and stretching parts like that would make internal ripping across organs, as well as crush other organs from inflated lungs.
Not only that but I don't think pinkie could breathe, I'm guessing you won't kill her, but getting crushed under your own body mass must be painful, talk about a fun way to die being crushed by water weight and then suffocating to death as her neck snaps. lol oh I can only imagine
:pinkiehappy:
also if you got a problem writing it in a way that it's against their will then don't, instead of doing that like that, have it become a pleasant surprise or something, not an attack

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Anytime you deal with fetish stuff like this, realism needs to be soundly chucked out the window. So the whole anatomy thing goes bye bye. To be truthful, i don't understand this fetish and don't really like having it full stop, but i understand what it means to other people, so i write.

The only problem with having it written as a pleasant surprise if you will is that i still want proper characterization, and i am quite sure pinkie pie wiuld be the only one who might willingly be inflated. The best middle ground i can find thus far is that they are unwilling at first, have no choice, but once it starts, they enjoy it.

Comment posted by Slate the Pegasus deleted Apr 19th, 2013

prepping Twilight for another pony

what other pony?

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the answer is in the story.

Now I am going to ask why, but not why did you do this or anything like that. Instead I want to know why did I read this and more importantly why did I enjoy it...:rainbowderp: :rainbowhuh:

We get it.... You like helium.....:derpytongue2:

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When you find out, please let me know. I'm still wondering that myself.

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Yes because THAT'S what's wrong with this story. Not the hundreds of gallons of milk or nipples being used as phalluses. lawl.

Not enough helium stories out there though...

2469941 Well, the hundreds of gallons of milk IS what makes a story so very interesting :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:.

Hmmmm, pretty fucked up stuff here. You did warn me however and I really enjoyed how you turned the tables on AJ, RD and Pinkie. Well written too.

Wow. THAT WAS AWESOME

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Thanks for the well written compliment and i readily acknowledge it's fucked up, but so is the twisted part of my mind that somehow linked this with arousal. Oh well, at least i know i'm not alone in my wierdness.

Oddly enough, i've only had to delete one comment and ban one user so far. I figured there would be a whole laundry list of people to attack this.

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It's not that odd really, you explained how things were gonna go in the summary.

Also, why would anyone bother to write a comment rudely denouncing this story when you told them it would just be deleted?

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Internet.
anonimity plus an audience can turn even rational people into illogical assholes. I left dpv's comment because it had a valid criticism and didn't just say "sicko" or something like that.

loved i! call me sicko, but i freaking loved it!

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I know dat feel Spike. :facehoof:

Ha ha payback assholes!!

Just sleep in.
(3 days latore)

Oh sweet celestia why didn't I read this before this was so bloody sexy and perfectly over the top :heart:

Don't mind me, just old habits dying hard. Again.

announcing It’s final moments of illumination

Its. You also don't need to capitalise this.

Her belly had a real sense of give though

Extra spacing.

a balloon with lot's of room to expand

Lots.

what Applejack considered "full". another sudden push

Forgot to capitalise.

ohhh i get it now

Forgot to capitalise.

Oh i get ya now

Forgot to capitalise.

She giggled as applejack bumped into the ceiling

Forgot to capitalise.

H, hey, cmon now twi

Change the comma to a dash, C'mon, forgot to capitalise.

Maybe i was a little too quick

Forgot to capitalise.

“Oh no, I can’t let you leave! I haven’t properly thanked you. Twilight said letting a mischievous grin cross her face.

Forgot your closing quotation mark.

Twi Twilight, there’s So much pressure

Change your ellipses to a dash, extra capitalisation.

Rainbow knew what twilight was aiming to do next

Forgot to capitalise.

in and out of Applejacks marehood

Applejack's.

from them both and pushed between the swelling

Extra spacing.

The giant nipple in rainbows mouth

Rainbow's.

next to twilight

Forgot to capitalise.

inside and around rainbow's marehood

Forgot to capitalise.

The sensual moans from applejack

Forgot to capitalise.

and gave Applejacks clit

Applejack's.

wut?!
why twilight have to deflate so much?!
(belly dragging on floor would have been perfect)


pls dont ban me for this.

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